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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#561

awsum update.

so abhay's first day at college actually went well and he has made some friends also. it was great to see him having a bit of normalcy in his life. the chemistry teacher pissed him off with his behavior,some teachers are kind of snobbish and abhay must have learnt that. misha-abhay scene was great.she was asking about pia to him and i wonder what he must have been thinking when they all addressed them as bro-sis. don't think he would have been too pleased.

pia was excited for her new phone and loved how haseena and chand have been helping pia. whether in adapting to the conditions there or getting her laptop to divert her attention. the best thing about them is their genuine concern and help for both abhay -pia.

pia was eager to show abhay her phone & they both talked like friends asking about each other's day and pia showing her pics to him. their candid moments gets turned into awkward one's due to their own follies. abhay asking pia to smile and when she actually did he couldn't control his own emotions. a bit of jealousy that someone else is the reason of her smile has surely hurted abhay making him rude to her.

piya loved vikrant a lot it seems and she didn't love kabir that way. will we see more of vikrant-pia flashbacks? haseena did tricked pia into admitting that her feelings for abhay are on the same level as she had for kabir.

pia returned the same favour to abhay next day when she ignored him after getting those blisters in sun . chand brought ice cream for piya and that was really nice of him. pia's reaction on eating ice cream and searching internet for vampire s& food was really cute. she literally wanted to correct ppl's wrong perceptions regarding vampires😆

pia's night vision did help her in seeing abhay in her room. she was confused regarding his reaction and i felt bad for abhay. their later convo was sweet with pia reminding him to use his phone to ask anything .

pia on purpose didn't go with abhay to college while he was waiting for her . that must have hurt him and no wonder he was annoyed.

pia wanted to surprise abhay and she surely did in a shocking manner by replacing his chemistry teacher. i am looking forward to their chemistry classes. it would be lot of fun. so pia has joined the college as a lecturer and not as a student. abhay was rooted to his spot on seeing her.

so ppl from faye are after her i guess. is their anyone specific and do chand and abhay know who they exactly are? i don't think they are gonna tell pia about this. i hope they do.

simply brilliant update shreya and best of luck for your exams👍🏼do well.

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#562

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finally commenting. i was MIA from IF n everywhere so forgot i didnt unres here. Piyas adjusting behavior was very nicely portrayed. her liking towards phone specially and i specially like the picture taking part. then her eating ice cream and best vampire google search. oh god you cant just leave Edward can you 🤣 two thumbs up for the sparkling part though 😉

Haseena is always cleverest in your ffs. it shows how much you like her or how you perceive her as a character 😆 she perfectly make piya say she has something for Piya. she really lovev vikrant and kabir not that way. correct though we cant love two people in same way but still we can love both but it will never be same. Abhay was worried about Piyas burning skin under sunlight and theres a lot of tension between them. they care for each other. one moment they are friends, next they have issues. so small yet troubling. i guess ti will be like for this for some time. they becoming angry at each other, yet feel hurt for not showing how they care everything is signs of their connection. i like how it is. oh dear cant wait to see how it will go - Abhay as student and Piya as teacher. what fun!

I like Abhay making friends with Misha and Sumit. specially i always love Misha Abhay friendship. now what they will say to Abhay that he didnt tell them Piya is coming as a teacher and not student 😆

brilliant as usual Shreya and I always love how you concentrate on small events or detailing of a moment. love it.

Edited by .SmokeySilence. - 10 years ago

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#563

Hahaha woah!!! Piya as a teacher?! What a shocker! And abhay's reaction😆😆😆 love it.. can't wait for your next update😃😳

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crazyreader2020

@crazyreader2020

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Awesome awesome awesome. loved reading every part of it. and last one was WOW, piya as a Chemistry teacher and Abhay's reactio. i would loved to read more about Siddartha and Azia.

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#565

ha ha lols Poor Abhay got shocker of his life and now Piya is his new chemistry teacher woah cool way to go Abhiya😆😉 !! loved the update it was brilliant and awesome👏⭐️ keep updating 😃!!

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#566

Edited--

This story is getting more n more interesting!

You know this story reminds me of the book "Princess of mars" . And the movie i was talking about is "Oblivion"! 😳

Anyway..Piya and her emotions--their different ways of furling and unfurling..were tremondously good!! 👏

I already told you didn't i--that how much i loved the way you have laboured to picture and blend study into story ? 👏 really it's a feat few could even think but you proved it could be included and make gorgeous! Bravo. Bravo. 👏

Anyway Abhay like always fascinates me. I donno what he is going to do next or either how Piya is going to tackle it or not , and that is what pulls me to the story!

Both of their's burst of emotional flair is a treat to watch! And i soo love it. 😳

And with Piya going to be the teacher--it's gonna be a lot more fun now!! 😉 Cant wait ! 😆

Will be a massive jolt for Abhay! ! Poor him. 😆

Continue soon please Shreya.

And can i request you something if you don't mind?

I would love to see both in a reprimanding position, and then both making up--you know what i mean?--which becomes attractive when you Pen it ! that's something i love a lot! 😳

Thanks again for the update Shreya. please keep writing!! 🤗

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#567

amazing
update
best of luck for the xamz

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Noor

@Abhiya-4ever

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#568

Hahaha PiYa as a teacher n AbHaY's reaction 😆
AbHaY PiYa relation is progressing n AbHaY's care for PiYa aww

It was brilliant update Shreya 👏
Now waiting for nxt plz update soon 😳
N bst of luck for ur exams 😊

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#569

Awwweee an update so soon. But I am not complaining.

So Piya was getting used to the technologies and Abhay getting along with the college and new companions.

Aah and Misha asked about Piya.

So here T is not so T ish where as Neha Tripathi is so T ish

Piya took pictures of hers from mobile camera. Vampires can be captured in camera ? 😆 . Please dont hit me.

Now Piya is Abhay's cousin, why why why ( but that is how Chandeena planned and introduced them so, right, but why why why)

I really feel sorry for Abhay - he is hurt looking at her lost in thought of Vikrant. But wont it be soon before Abhay takes his place or already it has started.

So Faye has electricity - source of power ? (decks to avoid the blows 😆) Omnius is fully run by electricity. So why do I feel if there is a war in Faye where Abhay and Piya have to fight, they may target the power source .

Now Piya had to watch Twilight 😆 . Sparkling skins or not, they cant eat icecream and Piya got a full ice cream tub.

So Haseena was training Piya to face the sunlight and is it just will power that makes the vampire go out in sun ?

So will she teach Abhay to see in the dark?

Humans may not know about Faye. But the vampires at Faye must be knowing the way to the human world. They hunt down the humans to make mutants, right? So is Faye,a cross world. Do the werewolves also live in the world of Faye or do they exist in human world as well?

So Chand gave the responsibility of Piya to Abhay. Thats a huge responsibility

Sunlight - Piya might have learnt to survive. But any fire, can that be destructive?

Human Blood - Piya might not be hungry or thirsty to resist humans, but if she sees blood, would she be able to control.

Questions about human world - Piya has a good grasp of things she is made aware, but spontaneous reply like Abhay does - She is not so familiar with the human world.

But I guess, Abhay is always there for her rescue.

So Piya entry marofied as a teacher ? Any specific reason? or is this her choice. But what a shock she gave to Abhay 😆 .

Dont tell me Misha would be running behind her calling her Teacher Teacher.

Is T just silent or is there something more ?

How do Chandeena get updates of Faye? Do they have a person there. So is Sid going to come soon?

Please dont mind my questions.

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#570

great updates ...
waiting for abhiya 2 loosen up around each other ...
so finally entry of whole friend gang ... gud
hahhaha ... piya as abhay teacher thats the most entertaining part till now

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