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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Chapter 11 updated. PMs will be sent later.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

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thanks so much for writing this. i have been waiting to read this for so long. 😆

first of all, why cant Piya go to college if Abhay can? she seems more into studies at stuff and she will do great there i guess. and Abhay got impressed with her intelligence. it was really nice part. and i loved how abhay tried to help her and also praised her to Chand and Haseena. i donno if i told you but you are the best person to write about Chand and Haseena and their equation. they write them wonderfully. 👏

Abhay and Piya are both way distant from each other and seems like they will slowly open up to each other. sounds great though. the dress parts were hilarious.and abhay taking photo of her. so cute 😆 and god she is trying to think of vikrant and Abhay is thinking if she hates his touch. no wonder i called them SLOW 😆 but this is how i liked them actually.

i didnt expect T and Misha will be here. so they will be in college with Abhay i guess and i think Piya will be there too soon. her envy for Abhay being in college and not her is completely justified and she wasnt awkward in humans but i still liked how Abhay helped her out. how piya will sit at home and think what abhay is doing considering he will surely be grabbing attention of a lot of girls.

great going Shreya. i will be waiting for next one 😛

Edited by .SmokeySilence. - 10 years ago

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Tanya Kaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Brilliant update as usual! Abhay and piya are slowly progressing towards liking each other😉😳

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..juhi..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#524

amazing one yaar...i really really loved it...wow!!

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pal81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Glad u updated.. really like this story and the way its progressing.

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

I really like how abhiya story is progressing slowly. Speed would look unreal here.
I hope piya too joins college soon

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dowy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Finally u updated. Thanks for that.
And about the update it is simply awesome. Piya's intelligence and abhay's care. Her childish acts. The little kiss 😳. Her nightmares and his soothing ways, was she really thinking about vikram? And when did piya host a party before? Will she not go to college?
Too many question and plz plz plz don't delay ur update much.

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Noor

@Abhiya-4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Oh Shreya thank u soo much for update... 🤗
I was waiting for this for so long
Anyway the update was totally outstanding
Luv PiYa's childish behaviour n AbHaY's care for her
Yellow combo 🤣
Aww AbHaY kiss her that was lovely
So Abhiya story is starting now
Luv it n luv u for update
Waiting for nxt update...

Plzz update soon

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#529

Well i dnt think i need to say about the wide variety of your choice of words! But still no harm if i mention it again! Yeah-as always their vividness and apt application had applied simply to the beauty of the update even more.👏

humor was subtle but very appropriate and well integrated.👏 especially this part--

Haseena sent him a quelling look. "You know she is not. She is purposely being difficult." Abhay got up from his seat and hurried to his room, picking up his mobile phone and returning to the drawing room. He'd found out how to work the camera a few days ago, but hadn't found a reason to use it. Now...he just knew he would. Piya came down forty five minutes, this time in a bright red frock, knee length red books, a ruby choker and her hair pushed back with a bright red hairband. She'd also applied liberal amounts of rouge to her cheeks and bright red lipstick. She grinned from the top of the staircase, fully aware of exactly how horrifying she looked. There was a khi-chakkk sound and a bright flash. Abhay was holding his phone up at her. For a second, she was puzzled, till she heard Haseena's warning voice. "Piyashree..." She turned and went back up to her room, checking the clock. She still had two hours left. Abhay hadn't enjoyed himself so much in years. Piya paraded in front of them in several blinding getups : bright pink and fluoroscent orange, then lime green and electric blue. She also wore a cropped top and a short skirt, at which it was Chand's turn to take umbrage. Abhay had to physically restrain Haseena twice.

It was really hillarious! I wonder why Pia did it purposedly?! Was it mere amusement?!

And the party held every intricate detail it could have had. It was done so very efficiently!👏 loved that whole scene.

And oh the chemistry part--it was i must say a very intelligent thing to add! The marvellous representation of Piya's cleverness shown through it, was undoubtedly brilliant!

Please please update this sooner! It is one intelligent and most imploring work of your's Shreya! Carry soon!🤗

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago