Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Shreya, First of all Thank you sooo much for updating this FF
I wanted to ask you when you would be updating it, but was scared that you might hit me 😃. This update came as a big surprise. Thank you for that.
Coming to the update - Piya is now in the pain of realizing that she had not only lost her love Vikrant, but also in the guilt of feeling for another man having loved Vikrant so much. And what is this curse. Is this there from her birth or was she cursed by some one later -
"Oh, poor child," she had told Piya within moments of meeting her, " 'Tis a terrible curse upon you, that he who should gain your heart, must pay dearly.
Will this curse be broken? Oh, why cant the curse be that the first person who should gain your heart must pay dearly or atleast first two. Abhay ko choddo please. And both Vikrant and Kabir paid with their lives. Dont want to happen this with Abhay.
Who knows? Maybe it's her fate. Let's see if she gets third time lucky with Abhay...or not.
And from where do you get these names - Faye, Ricardia, Wanda, Daleid, Lornea, Neverland? Do you do a lot of research?
I made them up.😆
Neverland, though, is cheated. I couldn't think of a proper name, so used the one in Peter Pan.
So is this a path with Abhay and Piya accidentally tumbled into - from a world of vampires to the world of humans or the witch world. Or is this path known to the vampires? The vampires hunt humans and turn them into mutants, right? So they must be raiding the human world before they are brought into the Neverland.
It is known, but not to everyone.
You described the river thing very beautifully. I mean like Piya first witnessing it and then recollecting the word river and its description and then her experiencing the water and bathing in it. I mean its like one can just close ones eyes and see it all happening.
Infact the entire forest part and Abhay and Piya's moments, I just closed my eyes and felt the entire thing as if I was watching it on screen. It did feel so lovely.
Oye hoye. Don't tell me you imagined all of it😉
Coming to Abhay, I could not help feeling for him. He is so caring despite feeling jealous of Vikrant and very thoughtful too. Its like his silence says everything. He is so much in love with her that he feels bad when she does not take his blood . The hurt of her having his blood seems nothing before the hurt felt by her rejection.
And she, not even able bear the thought of having his blood, despite her thirst. She is a vampire and he a mutants. But the feelings are so human. You bring out the feelings really very well.
Thanks- I'm always kind of nervous writing the feelings here since they're so complicated
No wonder, she felt tired after all the mental turmoil and the subsequent action. But what about Abhay? Is it that mutants dont get hungry or thirsty or dont feel tired or is it Abhay who wants to keep vigil because he has to guard her.
He doesn't need to do any of those things.
You were right in saying this - Sainthood. That was what he deserved
Its not just for being able to control his reaction on seeing her in the river, but for everything else.
I also loved him for being a little selfish - His wanting that place to be a human world and where he would want to take care of Piya.
I also felt sad when he felt that he was her slave in every meaning.
And I guess Piya is slowly moving on from her thoughts of Vikrant.
Like when she started sharing about Vikrant, with Abhay, it was like her burden is getting reduced and she has opened up her mind and now Vikrant will just remain as an old memory (Like Maithili in PKYEK )
I don't think it would be an "old memory" just yet.
But its the opposite for Abhay. Seeing her silence and feeling that he should behave like a friend and also curious to know about Vikrant, he opened up the subject. But the moment she started on Vikrant's subject, I can understand how he must have felt that he started addressing her as Princess, once again, deliberating the distance between them or may be because of the irony.
Piya was in love with Vikrant and they did share some nice moments together, which broke Abhay's heart after he saw them in her memories. But did Vikrant also love Piya or was it just friendship
I got confused over this sentence - She was ashamed that she'd mistaken friendship for love.
No Harini. she was ashamed that she'd thought she'd loved Kabir when she hadn't.she'd led him on to believe that she did.
What happened to Piya's bag? Did it get dropped at the Omnius when they were trying to escape?
Yes- I think I mentioned that.
Piya's fangs pierced into the neck of Karan Gupta. So looks like they are into the human world.
So has she killed him or is Karan barely alive. In all her existence she would never have attacked on anyone, leave alone humans, except in case of wars. But this is different, she had attacked someone because of her thirst. Wonder what she would feel like after she regained control? Would Abhay help her out with this - to control her thirst in this new world?
Next update for answers😃
I am eagerly waiting for your next update
Thank you so much once again for this update
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