FF : Curiouser and Curiouser!(Ch17pg104)DISCONTINED.See Pg106 - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

Brilliant update!! why is abhay being so cold towards pia? and what is with sid? what is his equatin with abhay??

I think he deserves to be a little cold, don't you? As for Sid, you'll have to wait for that
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

An excellent update.

Does Sid know Abhay from his human life? how?
I wonder what Abhay and Pia have landed into now 😕


Your second question will be answered next update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

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I cant believe you thot of discontinuing it. because i see many fans of this tree. the concept is absolutely brilliant. coming to the update, I have said it before how outstandingly brilliant you are in writing supernatural stuff and you proved it again. the whole memory thing, the setup of the place, security, how pia saw her memory back which was hidden everything was absolutely brilliant. i donno how i could praise you. a real brilliant showcase of creativity.

ok thank you so much. The things you mentioned were things i was most nervous about so I am extremely relieved you liked.😳

i wonder why Sid helped them. i really want to know. and wat will be the consequences as Pia saw her memories with Vikrant? Abhay n Pia are really complicated her.e i mean their relationship is but i like their equation. strange and thats how i like it. superb job.. n yes do pm me please.

Yeah well Sid knows Abhay. How and when will be revealed with time. As for consequences, I guess soon everyone will know. Yeah Abhay and Piya have a horribly difficult relationship here and I hope I can do it justice😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
Shoot! I forgot to comment! :( will do it today!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

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Stupendous update shreya! Just amazing!👏
you have stolen my my words with this update! You have excelled yourself. Because this is pure awesome!👏 whether the description of the building..or the streets or the Omnius..its just brilliant.👏 and the fight..was it an action movie i was watching? Because trust me it felt just like that.👏
and the mutant and this whole plot reminds me of one hollywood movie. As i was reading i could see it play in front my eyes!

And Vikrant..seems like piya truly loved him! Is Abhay in anyway is the reincarnation of Vikrant?

And what is Abhay's truth? I am eager to know about that!
Plus wow Sidharth is here! So makes it even more interesting to read nw.😃

P.s. All through the update I just loved your description of the electronic devices! ❤️ felt like i was reading a sci-fi ! Brilliant! 👏Please continue. And please keep updating. This story has a lot of scope so dnt ever abandon it. Please!
Take care. Update soon.🤗



thank you so much Indu. which movie does this remind you of?

Yes Piya truly did love him. as for Abhay being a reincarnation, you'll have to wait and see. ;)
no I won't abandon this story. will try to update today :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

superb update

what's sid connection to abhay? though i am glad he did helped them a bit.
so vikrant died in a battle??really or was there more to it?
i hope this time abhay and pia do manage to escape and don't fall in other battle.
brilliantly written.i lvd how u described everything from how pia went to take her memories to their fight scenes...it was like everything was happening in front of eyes.fab job.



thanks a lot megha. since it is in a separate world I guess I had to be clearer with details and I am glad you liked it. yeah vikrant did die in a battle. :(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

brilliant update shreya
so vikrant nd abhay are two difrnt persons nd he is dead.
what is sids cnctn wid abhay he seems 2 knw him closly nd dat 2 frm his human life.
thanx 4 pm shreya nd do pm me nxt tym also . tc



thanks hema. yeah Sid knows Abhay.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

The chap was eventful with Sid's entry with him being connected with Abhay's human life , I love this sid , i am already getting a bright aura from him , want him to be supportive and friendly to abhiya this time 😉😆
I had thought that her memories willl bring the revelation of vikrant and will throw some light on his relationship with Pia but the question is Vikrant was mutant so did the king and queen knew about it coz its obvio they wont be in under any circumstances agree with their love .
1 thing - edit the chappy u typed the middle part of the first stanza twice 😆 copied part is in the 2nd stanza .
I am just waiting for the next chapter didu , Pm me i will try my best to unres fast during these two coming months
I really love this FF di , every time I got a pm and I set out to read the chap I feel like to read it from the start , to relive it , although it is not possible everytime



thanks ayushi. Sid won't be there any more now. vikrant was a vampire just like piya so why won't they agree?
thanks for the correction...helps me a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Wow! Just loved it. I love siddharth's entry, it makes more interesting . Pls pm me wen ever u update😊



thank you so much, mahi! glad you liked
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Andromeda001

Awesome update. Here I was thinking may be Piya's memories will reveal something abt Abhay bt truth abt Vikrant was shocking. So they were in love. Bt where does Abhay fit in d past? How come he developed feelings 4 her?
Entry of Sid: At 1st I thought he would be negative as usual😆, bt he deleted dat footage having Abhiya. Still cant say anything abt him.

Abhiya as usual were awesome. Abhay's cold behaviour was well understandable. So was his flinching back n sudden coming out of Piya's memories.

Bt now wht? Was it a trap whr they ve fallen?😕.



where Abhay fits in... I think I've already given enough hints how he might have fallen for her.
as for now what, wait for it... ;)

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