Apart from all the other reasons I have for thanking you for this FF, one important reason is that I always wanted some action scenes involving Abhiya and here I have my desire fulfilled by one of the greatest fan fiction writers I have come across.Thank you very very very very much Shreya for this.
Coming to the update
So what is this town St.Halic - Is this a town occupied by vampires, mutants and not humans? If yes, wonder what do they do for living and food? I mean in the palace surrounded by the fort, you have the King, his counselors and chief of army for discussing all political affairs. And the surrounding places will be with normal household people engaged in various occupations. Is this the same for vampires also?
So finally Abhiya reached their current destination - Omnius.
And in this short journey, she came to know something more about mutants, though not everything. Hats off to you for giving attention to the minutest detail. Piya flaring up when the mutant mentioned Abhay's number instead of his name. She started to realise that there is something human (some kind of feeling and not just zombies) in the mutants and the mutants also sensing a different quality in the vampire princess.
Is this Queen Alizia - the queen mother of Piya? I dont remember reading her name before. I think her parents were always mentioned as "The King and the Queen". There is no doubt something brewing up in the City, but why is the Queen in need of a spy. Not that Queens should not be involved in such serious affairs. But when you have the King, it is he or both he and his Queen are to be involved. But we have only the Queen here? Is she acting as per the instructions of the King. Every one in the Palace must have known that the Princess has run away on some mission. Then the Queen does not seem to mention that as a priority task to the newly appointed strategist.
And of all wonders, we have our Siddharth. Not that he is the same Siddharth of PKYEK. But the face and the character just fills in.
Piya fainted at some memory or in the excitement to get her memory back and Wow Abhay, in his panic called her Piya !!!!!. Its not just Piya's heart but mine too leaped at the sound. Now they take a barge to the Omnius. But aren't the barges to be guarded?
What must she have had in mind when she decided to sneak into the Omnius bypassing the security that she was shocked at the violence erupted to seek an entry. There you go again Shreya in bringing out a personality in a princess who had not seen much action and who fails to have even a simple plan forget a strategy to implement those actions (Or she may have forgotten). Believe me, I am not exaggerating but when I read your works, I get the same feeling I get when I read the works of reputed fiction authors.
Coming to the memory bank. Are they not secured by vampires? Or did these vampires also run to the security gate where the blast took place.
Siddharth bit on a skewered lamb leg Do vampires eat?
Siddharth is also a vampire like others. But why was he surprised at Abhay's description. This is how all the mutants were to be described. So what made him think that the description is not right. And how exactly did he know Abhay - as a human or were mutants behaving in a different way when they were turned? He knew him a human right. Did he turn him into a mutant? Did they share any past?
So coming to the commotion, who switched off the Diablos, the mutant head or the vampires in charge. The vampires were supposed to be incharge of the diablos, right.
So Siddharth knew that Abhay and the Princess were the intruders. The Spyders - Dont they crawl like the ones from Minority Report 😆. Just kidding. Why did he delete the footage of them. Whatever, he did not want them to get caught as he knew the consequences and did not desire those consequences on Abhay atleast. The Princess would not be harmed by the vampires incharge. They would leave her fate to the King and the Queen.
The next set of action events are simply fabulous that I just cant comment.
She seems to get back her memories of Vikrant and he both curious as well as concerned for her shares her memories. Then seeing her intimately with another man is not something he can endure. How much his heart would have twisted in agony to have to watch her in someones else arms. He could not tolerate her relationship which was a kind of soft, with Kabir then how could he with Vikrant. I can imagine his state of mind. Wanting to be a part of memories and resenting the idea, because he could not bring himself to watch all that. I can sense his pain.
Then Piya's expressions and body language changes to more of pain and torment and there he sees Piya in a totally different form and a dying Vikrant. Even before he could wonder what happened, he was shocked at Piya's state and tried to bring her to the present world. But she did not. She was still lost in the past, in the painful memory of losing Vikrant and desperately trying to find him and be with him. Abhay, helpless, dragged her along saying that they were going to Vikrant.
What followed between them was described very beautifully and really touching.
She still in the past seeking Vikrant and her attack on Abhay when she realised he was not taking her to Vikrant. He, already heartbroken at her loving someone else and now not being able to realize that she is still in that state of mind, felt betrayed. He felt betrayed not because he thought she attacked him or was almost going to turn him to the strategists. He felt more betrayed that she was in love with someone else. And the subsequent outbursts came out in a different way.
But his outbursts brought her into a shocking reality and she realised that they were almost caught and had to run.
But all too late before one strategist spotted them and fired at Abhay. She managed to save him and he came to senses too quickly and reacted by finding a way to escape. But that strategist had seen them both right. So he must know that the mutant 10121 is not dead. Will they use the diablo once again? I hope not.
They are on the run again and now looked like they are trapped. Did he fall into the trap of Siddharth. I really wish so.
Piya is a vampire, so how come her ankle is twisted and even if it is, she should heal fast na.
I am eagerly waiting for the next update. But I fear if they were to be captured, then all might not go well. I really dont want Abhay to be tortured please...
Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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