Abhaiya OS--Show me the light.updated april6th pg8

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

breath taking...thats all i can say...hv no other words...thnks for the pm

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

simply a fantabulous update. The emotions of pia r described beautifully. I really felt bad 4 her as the state she is in. She was hoping against hope dat sumhw she could see abhay feelin the same for her but she was left disappointed. Neha seems nice...i wished she could complete the story. Abhay is in pain too. Ultimately he had to bend down before his heart the moment he saw her endangered. It's brilliantly written. Now i think abhay might be responsible 4 dat accident & i feel he lost sum1 close to him & therefore he is in terrible pain. Thanx 4 pm

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

EDITED

Again beautiful piece of writing Indu. classic.. totally classic 👏 👏 I love your writing style so much and the Victorian touch in it 😳 the way you depicted Pia's emotions, pain, her turmoils, the way she was fighting her brain and heart, trying to forget Abhay or to make sense of something... outstanding 👏 loved reading it and its making me more curious about Abhay's past and what happened to him that made him this way. last moment was breathtaking, she was so lost in thought she didnt realize her dupatta caught fire 😲 and Abhay saved her <3 his concern was heart warming. update soon and thanks for the PM 😳

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago

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sain (nick name)

@abhaylovepia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

thank you so much its very nice.

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Awesome Awesome Episode Indu :)

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Awesome update

Loved how you depicted piya state of mind and emotions

Piya saw abhay concern n care finally towards the end of update

I can't believe you will be ending it in one more part 😭

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

awsome , superb, fantastic update indu...you described the emotions so well ...poor piya suffering so much...neha is really good towards piya...she knows about abhay insulting but i think may be abhay told her...accident abhay having accident must wondering what happened to him that he didnt love back to piya as he is also bearing pain...its really emotional update both side by abhiya...piya having dream scene was great...and glad that she finally stay...finally piya saw concern in abhay eyes for her...abhiya truly love each other want eagerly to know about the abhay reason...cont soon