new abhiya ff-THE UNION-read once u'll love it - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...plzzz continue & plzz add me ur pm list😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update
pia know everything about her parent
continu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
so piya is now coming to dehradun wow
now the story begins
thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@trishnawaliya yes u r right I thot being it pia wud b more interesting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rest all thnku so much..I m glad u like it...will post today...
My posts will be short but I'll try to make them regular..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start.so nw piya knnws da truth and she is nw set to reunite her family.good.hope piya rai succeeds in her mission.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

Dehradun:
The breezes are flowing heavily this morning ..
Pia comes out of dehradun airport in her old stylish form with a lot of plans fixed in her mind ..she now knows everything she wud need now..firstly about her nanu's address where she needs to go, to atleast see her mom once..secondly she knows everything about vampires..thirdly her way to admission in one of d prestigious college ie mount college..her aim to get her family back..
"Dehradun tum mujhe chahe kuch do na do mai apne parents ko vapis lekar hi jaongi.." nd she smiled to herself..she was now looking a total paris return..

Pia decides to stay in a hotel until she gets a gud accomodation..
Then she goes to mount college because it was last day of admission..with so much rush there she gave her interview test to principal n within a second she was selected highly impressing him,who wudnt be selected with a london higher education
It was afternoon now she was luking on the wall wid full of accomodation ads. .
She was talking to herself.
"No not a hostel..its so restricted...mere aim ke liye I cnt live there...hmm..yes let's look for a PG"
Suddenly her eyes went on a certain address
'A-122 dehradun SHARMA NIWAS '
She was so happy ,like her destiny is helping her

She decided to go there right now and was determined to stay there..
She ring the doorbell..
A servant type person opens the door
"Mm..bhaiya room rent par chahiye.."
Before he could answer a lady spoke from back
"Kon hai shankar?" Pia looked at her immediately tears forming in her eyes,she just gasped "mom" yes it was none another than pia's mom, she luks similar as she has seen in pics..just a bit older n unhappiness was clearly visible from her face..

"Mam ek ladki room ke liye puchne aayi h"

"Usse andar lao" she went inside now sugandh could see her as well..
Gaining more confidence pia spoke keeping stone on her heart.. "goodafternoon ..mam..I am pia ..pia rai..I saw ur ad in mount colg "

"Oh toh finnaly koi aa hi gya.." sugandh laughed to herself "vaise kabhi koi padh kar aata ni h..kyuki hume ek sanskari aur shareef bacha chahiye hota h "
'I m there muma..bilkul aapke liye' pia in her mind

Acc to sugandh pia looked fine as a tenent..but since the room was within the house like for a family member. So she enquired
"Kaha se ho?aur yaha kya karne aayyi ho?"

"Belong mumbai se karti hun..but padkar paris se aayi hun aur yaha mount collge mai padne aayi hun" sugandh saddened at d word 'mumbai'

"Hmm...foreign se ..fir to tum badi badtameez hogi" dadu was right mom has become arrogant..pia thot..

"Ji aap jaisa soch ri hai vaisa ni hai .mai bhale hi bahar se hun ..par mere dadu dadi ne koi kasar ni chodi meri parvarish mai"

"Kyu tumhare maa baap ni h? Pia cried within..bt she had to control

"Nhi..vo mere janam ke baad mar gye the"

" bina maa baap ki ladki humare sath kaise rahogi.."

" aap ek mahine rakh ke dekh lijiye..kuch galat lage toh muje nikal dena"

" vo toh thik h..par tumne mera ghar kyu chuna?"wat can pia tell now

"Vo isliye kyuki kabhi parivar nhi dekha toh.."

"Fir toh galat jaga aayi ho yaha sirf mere pitaji aur mai rehti hun" vo hi chahiye tha maa..

"Par chalega vo bhi."

" thik h..tumhari marzi" she said too harshly.."kuch zaroori baat sunlo..fir decide karna.." pia nodded "rent 10000 hai..
Khana vo milega jo hum khaenge
No alchohol ,drugs,smoking etc
No late friend visits
Raat ko late aana ho toh darwaze ki keys sath le jana
&so on pia heard d rules..

She thot it was a bit strict..but she has no option..infact its d best vo apni mom ke sath hai..ab toh usse sugandh ko manane se koi rok ni sakta..

"Aur haan suno ..pia..police verification ke papers de denna..tum kal se yaha shift ho sakti ho"

Pia was happy now..and she left for her hotel..
She called rajesh and told him everything..they were happy cuz pia was happy plus she got selected in MC aswell...

Her classes were about to begin after 3 days...
So in these days she set her room..met her nanu who was fine by now..her mom was still a bit rude but better than d first day..

Pia was now totally settled in her new place..so close to her mom..she never imagined this all wud happen so quick..
Now she was ready for her mission and her college aswell..



I hope u like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start !
Loved the chapters !
It's awesome!
Do pm me !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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great cs and amazing update

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