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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just caught up wid both of d updates.Sorry 4 d late comment actually had an exam today.

Superb updates.Finally Piya has arrived.waiting 4 more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for late reply i see it today very nice start and great work keep it up add me in your pm list plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous update.so piya arrived in dehradun finally and rt at her moms house.so destiny is really helping her.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 3

Mount college:

Finnaly my first college day..pia was excited..and nervous too..she wore a skin fited jeans with a red and black top wid matching red bellies.. at school she was one of the famous allrounders..the one who excel in studies, curricular activities,looks and many more..
She took a taxi even though rajesh was pressurising her for a car but she refused..
Pia reached college ..entering the gate she smiled to her self. Evry guy's head was towards her..but she hardly gave any attention..now she has two aims firstly to get family back n 2ndly to do something really gud in her career..

A voice called hee from back
"Hey miss whatever..tumhare 100 rupaye gir gaye hai.." pia turned back..she very well knew dat it wasn't hers cuz her wallet was in her bag n she isn't that much careless

"Tum rakh lo..mai kisi aur ki cheez nahi leti.." pia smirked and went ahead..

"Hey..I saw it falling from ur pocket"

"Aaj 1st july hai april nhi..ullu uss jaisi bimbo ko banao mujhe nhi.." now these two girls were walking side by side..
Now the other girl blocked her way by her hand

"Hey ruku..mai tumhe itne der se free paise de ri hun n u aren't taking..le lo na please.." that girl made puppy faces

"Hilarious , first day aur tum jaisi se mulakat ,kya khoob din jaeyga mera..kyu loon mai"

"Tum to badi smart ho smjho na..meri uss ladke se bet lago h..agar mai kisi ko bewacoof bana doon to mai 5000 jeet jaongi ..pls" and she smiled

"Poore college mai u gt only me"

" tum dekhne mai itni shareef lagi ..bt muje kya pata tha meri kismat itni chalak ladki pe aakar rukegi.."

" hey mai chalak nhi hun..intelligent hoon" pia spoke

"Tum jo bolo mai vo krungi..mai tum college ki har ragging se bachaongi, 40% share tumhara..acha 50% ..pls .pls note le lo..ab toh le lo usse shak ho jaega.."
Piaa thot she is new here,so it wnt mattr if she wud b known a bhudu ,actual mai to she isn't...and this crazy girl..so pia took the note

"Oh thnku.." the girl spoke
"La bhai mere 5000 la..I won" she went running somewhere
Pia just moved on..
Again a girl stops her
"Hey loser..usse se toh tum bewakoof bas idiot bani..ragging se kon bachaega..haan.." this girl was a perfect bimbo..dat means perfect dumbo as well .pia thot..giggling to herself

"Kro ragging..I'm waiting"

"Wat T se aise baat karti ho..itni himmat"

"Bata ri ho ya puch ri ho..tum vaise dumb ho toh I'm sure puch hi rhi hogi..kyuki ghutno mai jor toh tum dogi nhi..tumhari heels jo ladkhada jaengi" the 100 rs note girl was quitely luking at dis..

"WTH...no body dares to talk wid me like that..mai tumhe"

"Oh toh log tumhare sath apna sar phodte h..I'm doubtful..n if dat is true then I'm nt nobody get that straight I'm pia..ab mera time waste mat karo tumhari tara velli nhi hoon mai"
T made angry faces..

"Yo dude sahi bola tumne..ye itni velli h ki..do bar first year mai fail hogyi n ab jakr 2 nd year mai aayi hai" d girl watching all this came beside pia n spoke

" wtevr..mai tum dono ko dekh lungi"

"Well miss ..tum dekh hi rahi ho.aur kitna dekhogi" pia spoke

"Urgghh.." n T left in anger and embarrasment

Pia looked at that girl
"Hi I'm misha..friends?"n moved her hand forward..
Pia took it happily

"Hi I'm pia..line par aagyi tum..happy now mil gye 5000"

"Yo man..pia u r so cool..kya band bajai tumne T ki ..mai sab dekh ri thi..n sorry about that 100 rs." Pia laughed n returned her 100 rs note..

"No pia deal is deal tumhare 2500..aur ragging se tumhe bachane ki zarurat hi ni..u r too smart" they both laughed

" let's go dude.." misha ran holding pias hand
"Vaise tum nayi ho yaha pehle kabhi dekha nhi"

"Ya.."

"Chlo let's meet my stupid school gang"

"Wow dats cool"

"Haaha...pia ye ruhi angad maya nd ye thakur kidhar gaya..haan vora..udhar vo jo ladki ko rose de ra hai..tharki kahi ka..voh kabir h..school mai mera senior tha..but masti ke chakar mai 1 st year repeat kar ra hai.. " misha laughed "ruhi angad maya she's pia..superb I must say. "

Maya spoke "jis ladki ko misha superb bole uss ladki mai kuch toh baat hai zarur..hi pia"

" hi..nice to meet u all"

"Angad tum idhar dekho..hi pia jab bhi ye kisi sundar ladki ko dekhta h na to thoda aise behave karta hai.." pia smiled..

'Ignore ignore' misha whispered to pia n they both giggled..

"Chlo guys let's go to class" maya Spoke..
Maya was a sweet hearted girl ,pia was delighted to meet these new friends..

They reached class..
Pia directly move towards last seat..
"hmm..tum toh mere type ki ho bilkul..last bencher.." n misha n pia hi-5ed

Students were coming guys staring pia..bt as usual she was least interested..
The teacher came..
"Hello freshers..welcome to mount college..aap sab bahut lucky h ko aapko yaha admission mila..I want all of urs intro.." a row got completed now it was misha's turn
"Yo friends ..I'm misha suri"
"Manners misha..wats this 'yo'"

"Oops..sorry mam..hello my fellow classmates and my respected madam ..my name is misha suri..I'm from the franklion school..from dehradun.."

"Uff dis girl..needs special attention..sit down misha..next"

"Goodmorning mam.. I'm pia rai..I belong to mumbai..and I'm from pariston school.." everybody shocked at that name..especially misha n group.
" very good ..that means u r d paria return principal sir told me about ..its gud to see u pia"

"Thnku mam.." as she sat down mish hold her by her arm..as the rest class introduced..

"Dude tu hi vo sabse hot gossip paris return hai..mai kitni badi buddhu hun.."

" misha quiet.." teacher scolded

"Sorry ma'am"

Class ended..

"Mujhe chaata mar pia "
Pia just pulled her cheek like for a kid

"Stop over reacting misha..I'm human. Ok"

"Terii toh hindi bhi achi h..tu kaise..kuch karo mere IQ ka"

"Phir bhi dil toh h hindustani"

" misha jab pure time masti mai rahegi..toh kaise pehchanegi logo ko " maya spoke. " its so gr8 ki pia humari dost bani"

" come on maya ..aisa kucb nhi h..mai bhi utni hi padi hui jitne tum"

"Ya bas tere 95% aaye aur humare 75%" misha spoke "aur bas tujhe saari cheeze aati h..a perfect allrounder..plus tu to back bencher h yar.."

" kyu back bencher padte nhi h kyaa" a voice came from back

" abbe thaakur tu chup hi kar ..jale pe namak chidakra h..pia meet this loser kabir..kabir ye pia hai"

" my paris heighness.."
Pia made weird expressions..

"Kabir usne tujhe suba uss ladki ko propose krte hue dekh lia..yaha mat chalu ho.."

" oops...sorry pia..I'm kabir..meri harkato pe mat jana "
Misha cut him " han ye dil ka bura ni bas shakal se bhadha hai" nd we all laughed

" hi kabir.." pia smiled ..kabir didn't believed wat an angellic was standing infront of her..

"Hey champ aaj infact abi ECA ke auditions hai..kya karegi tu"

"Comedy circle..usse best kya hoga mere liye n pia tu"
Before pia could say anything misha spoke "oh wait ye kaisa sawal puchna maine..tujhe to sab aata hai"

"Bhut hogya misha..I'll c ..mai kya karti hun."

"Acha baba sorry.. just to make u laugh vo T ECA committee ki vice president hai" they both laughed.

"N mai bhi "

"Oh haan ye thakurji bhi toh hai.."

"Any help pia"

" kabir pls tum kuch nhi kahoge.."

"I'm sure uski zarurat hi ni..tumhara khud hi hojana h.."
They all reached d audition hall..T saw pia registering.

" huh..pia..ab mai tumhe T ke sath mess karne ka nateeja batati hun..de toh audition fir pata chalega"

It was pia's turn now .she reached on stage..
Judge spoke " wat will u do miss pia rai"

" sir I hv few options.. u hv vacancy for?"

"Sorry I didn't got u.".

"I mean sir..well I'll sing first.." misha knowing her talents was grinning 'ab aayega maza'

Just got confused and nodded..
Pia adjusted with the tuning man
And began singing the song 'crazy kids' by ke$ha
Hello wherevr u r
R u dancing on d danxe floor or drinking by d bar
Tonight we do it big shining like stars
We don't give a f*** cuz dats wat who we r..we r..we r..
We r we r the crazy kids them crazy them crazy..

& so on ..she sang d rap part too very nicely..
Her melodiois yet strong voice made each n every person present her fan..it was like she was giving a live show..as she ended d song leaving a fully impressed judge. Thn between T spoke "sir this is india we need indian songs.."
Evrybdy gave dagger luks to her..
" no prob sir" pia spoke..
Pia again set the tuning man n started singing 'raabta ' from agent vinod..she sang 3-4 lines n dat was enough..

"Good.."

"Ye toh thara firstly tha pia secondly tph dikhao?"

"Sure..play any song i'll dance" evrybdy was shocked seeing how cn anybdy b so multitalented

" sir let me" T went to chose d song ..'so pia by chance do line hindi gaane ki aati thi..par ab ispe kaise nachogi. Paros mai ye to ni sikhaya hoga" T laughed 2 herself..
She played the song 'do dhaari talvar' frm MBKD

Pia smiled ..n began dancing..she looked like fire burning d dance floor...evry1 was staring her open mouth..misha ws hell shocked..soon kabir couldn't control and he was there up dancing with pia with full pair work..pia being witty enough managed evry step..the judge raised his hand n song stops .T was vry furious..
Judge rose n clap..
Pia was vry happy..

Misha kabir n pia reached out of d hall
" pia kamal kr dia tumne toh.u r just so superb" kabir said " amazing"

" vo chod I'm sure abi teri list kgtm ni hui h. Kya kya bacha h abi"

"Jo kam(less) h vo btana btr hoga..dat means dance n singing"misha joined her hands infront of pia.."tera audition clear krne se koi ni rok skta.."

They all laughed..kabir was mesmerised by pia. But someone else was really more excited n happy for pia .




Guys pls pls do comment.. n I might b late in giving u all pms ..so sorry..bt do comment!!!
And do tell abt the dialoues of this chpy..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely😊continue asap...thanx 4 pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab update
waitin for abhay's entry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey first of all sorry 4 late response... ya i love misha and pia frendship and bonding... they are sisters too and i feel that misha going to be pia big help in uniting her parents... by the way who is the other person who is happy to see pia???? kahi humara abhay to nahi?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is 4 ch 2 i like the way pia manage her mom and nanu and get herself place in dehradun... its her luck dat she got place in her mother's home only but sugandh is really rude just imagine and ya its not only her fault 4 dis... u knw pyar mein dhoka..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is 4 ch 1 its so gud to read the character of confident pia and knw her ethics, and one care about her elders... more interesting abhay and pia are childhood frens... waiting 4 abhay entry...

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