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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
superb update
so pia met her mother
continu soon
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Chapter 4


Afternoon
In the canteen pia misha and kabir were having lunch..kabir had become a sure shot fan of pia..n a gud friend to her

"Hey pia tumhare dad kya krte h" this made pia sad..they r new to me inhe sach nhi bata sakti..she thot

"Kabir maine apne parents ko kabhi nhi dekha h..they r dead" she felt really sad saying a lie..bt cnt do anything

"Oh I'm ...I'm really sorry pia..I didn't meant this.." kabir and misha were sad now

"Its okay kabir.hw wud u knw ki mera parents nhi h..bt unka alternative hai" pia tried to cheer up "mere dadu dadi..unhone mujhe kabhi kisi cheez ki kami nhi hone di"

"Tum jitni brave dikhti ho usse kahi zada ho" misha first time serious .

"Come on misha..u n serious I cnt believe.."

"Shut up dude" misha rose n hugged pia tightly..pia was happy atleast she got a really gud friend..

"Acha vo chodo..tum dono k parents k bare mai batao"

"Mere dad business man h pia" kabir spoke n cut by misha "jinki jaipur mai thakuro jaisi izat h..crores mai property h..aur ek irresponsible ladka h"

"Misha bas kar!!" Pia boli..

"Wat ye sach h ask thakur.."

Kabir giggled "haan pia isne sach bola.."

"Oh.." pia said "n u misha"

"Dnt ask unhone mera dimaag kharab kr dia h pocket money ni badhate..aur meri harkato se tang rehte h..jaise vo mujhse pyar hi ni karte..mai nhi bataongi..meri bezati hojaegi" n she left
Kabir was laughing now

"Kya hogya isko"

"Dramebaaz kahi ki..pia suri uncle bilkul aise nhi h..he is really gud..n one of d most successful businessman in dehradun..n mere dad ke bahut ache friend h.."
"Oh " pia smiled.

"Chalo pia audition result aagya hoga..n muje us fevicol ka muh dekhna h?"

"Fevicol?" Kabir laughed

"Mera matlab T..apne smart junior ladko ko bhi nhi chodti vo ladki" pia grinned ..
How boastful ,pia thot

They reached the hall n pia was selected for d final round,very much expected..
"Congo pia u hv been selected directly for final round..tumhe beech ke 3 rounds nhi dena sabki tara.." pia smiled

"Oh wow"

"Hi kabir..ye kaisi wannabe ke sath ghum rhe ho baby"

"Luks whose talking T" kabir said

"Tum bhi iske kabze mai aagye..listen u paris pia..apna jadoo india mai mat chalao..go back to paris"

"Kyu insecurity ho rhi h T" pia said "dnt feel kyuki mai insaan hun aur tum.." pia sniffed "well i dnt to say"

"T tum pia se bach ke raho..pachtaogi tum..let's move pia"

N they both left..

"Piaaa" misha shouted from back , she turned..

"Kya hua misha..poore colg ko kyu bata ri ho ki tumhw mujhse kam h "

"Ufo idhar aao..meet him ye akash hai..mera bada bhai..final year mai hai..and akash ye meri new n sabse cool friend"

"Hello pia.."

"Hi aapko mera naam kaisa pata h"

"Vo maine tumhara performance dekha tha..I'm one of d president of ECA..u rocked..ab tak itna multitalented koi nhi aaya yaha"

"Mm..thnku so much bhaiya..oops..sorry..misha if he's elder to u toh y dnt u call him bhaiya" pia flew in emotions ..so called him bhaiya..

"Hah..misha n bhaiya dat tok iss champu ko..never" pia giggled

"Wud u mind agr mai aapko bhaiya kahu.."

"Ofcourse not ,meri behen ki dost meri behen.dat wid b fine..atleast koi respect dene wala toh hoga ,iss junglee se btr" n akash patted mishas head "chlo now I leave.."

"How cool is dat u hv bro"

"Cool..yuk.. mazak na uda mera,its so irritating to hv a bro..wait wait. .lemme edit an intelligent obedient bro..jo masti nhi mom dad ki sunta ho..dats so uncool yar..pata nhi mai iss suri ke ghar mai kaha se tapak padi..I wish mom dad mere jaise cool dude hote yar.." just so crazy..bichare iske parents..pia thot..

"Acha tuje pata hai na ki kal fresher party hai.."

"Wow Really?kis time?"

"Kal sham mai..n u know there wud b random performance competition where anybody can perform anything they like..toh u'll sing"

"No I won't..muje nhi karna"

"Oho pia..u r so unexpected..well dats ur wish .so come by 5 to college..we'll surely enjoy"

"Ya..Chal misha ab now I'm leaving kal milte h.."

"Okay pia ..c u..I enjoyed being wid u today.thnx.ab toh hum paka wale bff h.." n misha hugged pia

"No misha thnx to u..iss anjaan shehar mai muje koi apna mila..".

"Yo babe..now leave..tujhe vaise bhi taxi se jana h.." misha was indeed happy..


Precap:

"bhool gayi tu muje pia..bas 5 saalo mai..dil tod dia mera tune toh" pia looked extremely shocked..and happy

"oh my god" pia still staring in shock




I know a really boring chapter..but precap is amazing I know u smiled reading the precap. :P

But still pls pls give ur comments..
N I'm really sorry I m unable to pm u all..can anybody volunteer to pm the commenters..??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
just read chapters 3 and 4.amazingly amazing.love da way u r carrying da story.in precap i think piya met abhay,thanx for pm and continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Wow Really Awesome and Amazing Story!Just loved it❤️
Ya ur right,I'm smiling like crazy reading the precap.
Cant wait for Abhay's entry,Abhiya's meeting and they are childhood best friend thats the best part. 😊
Pls Continue Soon.
Pls Add me to your pm list and pm me whenever you update. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome chapters.Loved d frenship of Mish,Kabir n Piya.Aakash seems a nice person.Waiting 4 d entry of our Hero.Cntinue asap.
Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
ya this ch is just intro type... and precap truly bring smile on my face...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
lovely😊thanx 4 pm me...continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
sorry for late comment but its amazing continue soon in precap i think pia met abhay
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnku guy for liking my ff...finally abhiya meet today , enjoy d chp fully..


Chapter 5


Sugandh's home:

Pia was trying to somehow talk to her mom..but everytime she talked rudely..vo kuch past ke bare mai jana chahti thi bt all in vain..finally she decides to talk to shankar ,the servant

"Bhaiya ye aunty aisi kyu rehti h..matlab kabhi khush kyu nahi hoti"

"Kya kahu mai ajeeb toh mujhe bhi lagta hai..par kafi bar mai madam ko ek photo ko dekhkr rote hue dekhta hoon..jab bhi bade sab madam se baat karte h maa beti jaisi baat nhi lagta ..lagta hai bas ehsaan ke liye dono baat kar rahe h ek doosre se, kuch to galat hai yaha madam ke sath,kabhi nahi hasti vo,na koi dost, na koi shauk..kuch nahi pata nahi zinda kaise hai..oho maaf karna mai kuch zada hi bol gaya"

"Uncle mai nhi bataongi kisi ko..chinta mat keejiye..and thnku..matlab mm..vo ..ya shukria" n pia left

"Kuch to h iss bachi mai baat..jab se aayi h dekh ra hun ki madam se baat krne ki koshish kar rhi h .par vo kisi se baat hi krne ko tyaar ni..chalo ab mai kam hi kar leta hun.." the servant said to himself n went..

Pia in her room was moving back n forth..thinking ,oho ye mom bhi na. Kaise samjhu inhe ..ye naukar ke hisab se nanu aur mom ache se baat ni krte,iska matlab mom unse abi bi naraz h ya mom andar se lifeless type ho gyi h..ya..uf..kuch bhi ho skta h..idea mom se baat krna maine try kar lia h..lagta h nanu ko pakadna padega ab..haan kisi bhi tara..unse mujhe sab nikalvana padega..yes, pia confident again ..

Pia got ready for freshers party..she wore a white knee length dress and took her fav though old sweatshirt with her since it might become cold at evening..

Freshers party,mount college:

Almost every girl looked hideous ..but pia a total angel..misha asusual a tomboy dressup..maya looked pretty in jeans top..kabir was looking smart in jeans and coat..

"Hello guys..sorry mai late hogyi..taxi ni mili aadha rasta walk krke cover pada"

"Pia muje bataya hota u shud hv called me..mai lene aa jata..bt btw u look too good" n hot kabir said in mind

"Arre its ok really n thnku so much..let's attack food,chal chal kar badi bhook lag ri h" pia giggled

"Yeh kari na tune kam ki baat.." misha said..

They 4 ate snacks n stuff..

"Hey mish competition start hogya ..hum mai se koi participate nhi kar raha..nt evn u pia" maya asked

"Nhi maya mujhe man nhi h..ab ye sab kha kar to vaise bhi nahi"

"Chalo guys aage chalte hai na" maya said

"Tu jaa hum ni jare maya,kyu pia.." misha sais n thot'abhi to I need to eat itna kuch'

"Common pia..tu toh chl"

"No yar I hv no interest..u go" she was already occupied wid thots of cracking her nanu..

"Okay..c u in sometime"

Kabir got a call ,he attnded n then said "hey pia n champ..muje zara kartik bula ra h.."

"Okay.." both girls said..

"Chl misha kuch peete h" misha got excited she thot pia ne beer ka arrangement karvaya hai..

"U r so cool pia..I just love u.."pia thot aisa bhi kar dia mene

They reached the counter for drinks and sat there..

"Excuse me, 2 orange juice please" oh to orange juice mai mix..wow misha thot as pia asked for juice

They got glasses..
"Chl nikal ab"

"Kya" pia confused

"Daru aur kya"

"What? U mad or wat? Daru kaha se nikalu mai"

"Tune hi toh kaha chl kuch peete h"

"Uff..misha I meant this.." she pointed d glass "ab tu itni badi talli h kya ki sirf 'pee' shabd se tuje daru yaad aati h..

Misha sad ,spoke "kya yar pia maza khrab kar dia..I thot tu beer layi h..sheh man..lao yar juice se hi adjust karu"
Now they could hear the voices of d competition held on stage..a melodious voice of a guy was heard..he was singing 'gulabi aankhe jo teri dekhi '
Pia got confused hearing this few memories very coming to her bt she shoved them away..thinking mom is more important..
"Oye pia tu paris mai bhi famous thi na?"

"Pta ni ab vo to.. bt vaha bhi sab muje alrounder kehte h hum 5-6 logo ka grp tha "

"N any bf?" Pia laughed

"Nhi..mai kabhi ladko par dhyan ho nhi deti..bahuto ne propose kia bt I always refused.."

"U notice nobody.."

"No"

"Koi vaja" pia hides her true emotions

"Na..just don't want"

"Bhai u r ajeeb.." sudde

About after 5 minutes the all near by girls to pia n misha started putting lipgloss and setting their hair in excitement looking in front of juice corner where pia n misha had their back facing

"Ab in paglo ko kya hogya..saj dhaj kyu rhi h aur..vaisi kam bandariya lag ri h kya" misha said n both laughed

"Lagta hai competition laga h jo zada makeup lageyega vo hi jeetega.." they laughed even more..
Still laughing someone hit on pia's head..her all hair falling ahead..she became furious now..n shouted while turning back.
"How dare u ? " staring at d face of dis handsome guy..

"bhool gayi tu muje pia..bas 5 saalo mai..dil tod dia mera tune toh" pia looked extremely shocked..and happy

"oh my god" pia still staring in shock kept her palms on her mouth

The guy spoke "mm misha right.." misha nodded "cn u please pinch her.." misha did as the guy asked to n pia screamed "ouch"

"Wake up..u aren't dreaming pia, kya hua tuje" misha said
And immediately pia rose n gave a friendly hug to d guy "abhaaayy...I cnt believe its u..how ..I mean ..kaise..kab..kaha..what is this abhay..I think I'm still dreaming"
They parted

"No pia..u aren't..I m right here infront of u"

"Bt abhay tu yaha kaise..dehradun..criously.."

"Pia u know him or.." misha was cut by pia "yea misha he's abhay ,my childhood bestie..in mumbai" every girl at back was hearinv each n every wors n was jealous of her..

"Oh hi dude.."

"Hi misha.." n now turned to pia"...pia u disappointed me"

"Abhay..maine kya kia..pehle tu ye bata how come u here" pia was nw adjusting to reality

"Mm..pia..poore colg ko batao ya sirf tujhe" n he eyed towards her back..pia understanding dat he meant other girls..

"Oh..ya sure..only me wud work..misha I'll catch in a while..ok.."

"Ya dude no prob.."pia took her belongings n moved
Then pia and abhay went to a bit secluded place..

"Omg..oh freak..it was u..gulabi aankhen..oh no..mai kaise nhi pehchan payi.." abhay was smirking now..

"Vo hi toh pia..kal se koshish kar ra hoon ki tu muje notice kare par tu toh tu hi rahegi..u didn't even noticed me once..I m angry wid u"

"Oh..abhay I'm sorry..muje bilkul idea nhi tha ki mere bachpan ka dost muje yaha milega..bt tune muje kaise pehchana..I hv changed a lot since the time I left mumbai.."

"Pia vo chod pehle ye bata..tune shaadi kar li..itni jaldi kyu" he looked really sad

"Wat?? Shaadi mene..who said"

"Then ye rai kaha se aaya" pia laughed

"Oh no abhay..u r mistaken ..its a diff story..abhi I cnt tel u right now.." she wnted to tell him all..bt she cnt right away..she's meeting after so many years.. "bt no I m very much unmarried.."

"Haa. Thank god..nhi to aaj kal 18 pe shaadi..omg ho jata"

"Bt nw answer me..hw did u recognised me"

"Pia tune notice nhi kia ..hum same class mai h.." pia was shocked dat hw cud she b so.. "tumhara intro yaad h..pia rai..pariston school..belong to mumbai..rai sunkar I ws in doubt..bt thn saw ur audition ..yakeen hogya its u only..tera gana kahi bhi pehchan skta hun" pia became emotional now..

"I'm sorry I didn't noticed u before..kaise I cn do dat" hw cud she say d reason for her nt noticing anybdy was only n only abhay

"Its okay chil mar..tu yaha kaise.."

"Mount colg abhay"

"Chal jhooti" pia was shocked dat still abhay knws her so well.. "mat bata ..bt jab bhi bataye sach bolio.." pia just smiled

"Ok ..how come u here"

"Hmm...pia 11 th class mai I wid my family came here. ..n so on he told pia evrythng abt chand's earlier business failure..n stuff

"Oh no..so bad..bt thnk god its fine now..vaise howz uncle n aunty..I miss them"

"All well.." abhay now asked shyly "mom dad ko miss kia n muje"

"Haan thoda sa kia" she lied "matlab abhi tak.." n she giggled

"Chlo acha h thoda sa hi kia ,tabhi ye sweatshirt tune sambhal ke rakhi hui h..agr bahut miss kia hota toh sare pencil pen eraser n watevr I gave u long ago voh bhi sambhala hota tumne" pia shying away..thinking the collection of pen pencil n stuff given in childhood by abhay she was caressing just a day ago..

"Tune pehchan li ue jacket.."

"Kaise nhi pehchanuga..apni pocket money se di thi..tere paria jane ke gum mai..taki muje yaad rakhe tu..I'm happy ye tune ab tak rakhi h.." they both smiled to each other..thinking how much they missed each other.. n nw they meet..there feelings became stronger than before nw..

"Vaise pia..dnt u think tu bachpan mai zada cute thi"

"Shut up abhay..tu bhi kuch cool ni hogya h zada..u looked better as a kid"

"Haan tabhi muje vaha aata dekh sari ladkiyan apna makeup touchup krne lagi thi..hena?" Abhay smirked..

"Huh..wtever" abhay thot pia I m nthng as compared to u.. tum bhale jaisi bhi raho..tumhari mere dil mai jaga ban chuki h..n thnku god haan..aapne mere dil ki sun hi li..aakhir kar..

N pia thot abhay..kaise bolu tumhe ab mere liye tum dost ni rahe..bahut kuch seekh lia h mene paria jakr..dosti ni thi humare beech sirf..bade hokar pata chal gya h muje abhay..

"Abhay toh tune audition dia na..kal?"

"Hmm..gt selected as well"

"Oh wow"

"Bt I'm backing out"

"Wat??why??"

"Pia I don't want to compete wid u" abhay thot abbe ye kya bol dia..bhag yaha se ab..
"Mm..pia..I need to go..kal milte h..ok..bye.." leaving a confused and sad pia back abhay went..pia felt she could talk him for hours n hours...

Uho..ye abhay..I m so happy to meet him..bt does he really think d way I think of him..I mean..muje lagta h..he thinks me as a friend still..oh yes pia..u cnt enforce urself on him..uske life mai aur bhi dost aaye honge..I btr jst b frnds wid him..
She touched d sweatshirt given by abhay wen ahe left for paris...



pReCaP::

In classroom:
Abhay rose his hand to give a hi-5 ..but T was about to hi-5 him n very attentively he removed his hand..
"Urggh...don't give urself so much importance.." abhay said n gave his dimpled smile to pia...



Pls do giv ur comments n tell how its going for abhiya...I'm ure u liked abhiya convo...so do comment...

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