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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Nice.But plz dnt separate Abhiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 9- ... jay was shattered...her angel...her best friend...her love...piya was gone...he knew it pia wont frgv him...all bcs of abhay...that vampire nd his sister they played a dirty trick md end up confusing things more...now piya will nvr come bck...jay thought...she ended evry connection with him...what will he do know...for whom will he live now...lord pls take my life pls...i cnt bear the pain lord...pls...jay stabbed his heart with a stake...this pain is less than pias hatred...but before he can take his last breath...lord mailon appeared...he used a very powerfull energy nd saved jay from dying...jay said why did u saved me my lord i dnt wnt to live...mailon replied dnt be weak jason...i know human emotions r too much painful...but dnt frgt u r bound bye so many responsibilities...u hv to be strong...dnt flow with human emotion jason...Mailonicia will be bck soon...she will be bck...the damage cnt be undone...but future can be safe if we all try...wait for her appearence...she will come bck...go nd talk to that vampire...he will get her bck here...my lord he is just a mere dead man...How will he do it? jay snapped...my soul this is all time nd destinies game...Mailonicia is a supernatural...but her human love is something beyond powers...Abbisiac nd her love is very powerful nd beyond boundaries...She will grow nd live with her love nd responsibilities together...from now on I m freeing u from Mailonicias responsibily jason...u hv given ur life for her nd its time for ur freedom...go my soul u r free from this burden...live ur life freely...jay was dumfounded...he nvr expected that lord can seperate him from pia like this...he knew it that pia will nvr be his...but he was happy to protect her...atleast he was near her...this freedom was like a death for him...why my lord...i didnt wnt this...pls gv me a chnc...punish me if u wnt...but pls dnt so it...mailon exclaimed...Jason u hv done beyond limits for her...now she will live on her own nd her destiny will show her the path...nd my child u deserve happyness...go free urself from this sorrows...in the forest- dnt be stupid Abbysiac...u cnt do this...we wont let u do this...this is a sin...the vampires said...Abhay- i dnt care!!...i will go for her...i love her nd i will get her back...u guys cnt stop me...the vampires were angry at abhays attitude...they attacked him...he tried to free himself nd fight...but they were too many...they dnt wnt him to be with her love pia...but he will fight...he will go nd get her back...he cnt loose her...no matter what she us...no matter what sin he hv done...he is ready to be punished by her...but he wont let her leave him like this...the vampires tied him nd were going to kill him..but jay stopped them...u leeches free him jay shouted...its lord mailons order...free him now...they were beyond words...lord himself said to let Abhay go!" how is it possible!! the vampire leader asked jay...why should we blv u? u r a wolf...a traitor!! u r lying...jay passed a royal signed letter to them...the vampire leader was shocked...he announced from today Abbysiac is free from evry rule...cause lord wnt him to be Our Mailonicias support...he is no more restricted to meet her...free him nd lets get back to kingdom...they freed abhay nd headed towards there kingdom...Abhay nvr thought that jay will be the one who will hlp him...thanks jay...i thought u love her... but why did u hlp me? jay angrily said i didnt hlp u...i served my last duty to my lord...i m now free from mailon soulism...nd i do love her...god knows what happened to lord that he want u to be with pia...abhay got the shock of hos life...what!! lord want it...he want it...is it true...he was very happy that the now no one willcome between him nd piya...now he will surely win her bck...dnt be so happy raichand...u r in cloud nine i think...but its a short term happyness jay smirked...what do u mean jay...i wnt to thank u for this...but what r u saying?...oh how my innocent monster...how fool u r huh...u think i m ur wellwisher...but in ur dreams leech...now i m free nd i will do what i want...i love pia...nd i will not let u get her bck so easily...just wait nd watch...u played ur dirty tricks with her...now i will not let u play with her anymore...i will come bck...nd jay vanished with air...abhay sighs...jay can nvr be on his side...nd abhay also vanished from there...to get his love bck...precap- mission abhiya starts...now real love story of abhiya will start...;-)
Edited by samanthawllms7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Abhiya would be together soon...awsm.Jeh is no longer pias protector..yipee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update... wow its gud dat now abhay is pia's protector but let see how our vampire manofying our angel...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys...actually my internet connection is not working properly..its very slow...so i wont be abl to pm u all...if u guys wnt pms from nxt time pls snd a buddy request..so i can pm u all at once...thnks :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nice update
please don,t seperate abhiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
nice update
so abhiya 'll be together
continu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Update!Loved it.❤️
Whats wrong with Jay, why he want to seperate Abhiya. 😡 😡 Pls dont turn him negative.Instead bring Misha for him.Their jodi will rock together. 😉
Would love to See how will Abhay seek Piya's forgiveness now, after all this, that he did with her...
Pls Continue Soon...Thanks for the pm. 😊
And Sorry for my late comment,actually I am busy with my final exams of 11th.They will be over on 18.I just got a little time to read and comment today. 😊
Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
awsome update
piya gone from dehradun
so at least the lord want abhiya together
dont separate abhiya
now seeing what will be the reaction of piya
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 10-
judaa hoke v tu mujhme kahi baaki hai...
1 year later...
a hlplss abhay was shouting in phone...
so what alina...u r a useless witch...last time u saw piya...but now u r saying u failed to reach her...
Alina- oh shut up brother...i was helping u...dont throw ur anger bullets on me...u think i m use less...fine...hlp urslf...i m done...
Abhay- whatever... i dnt need ur hlp anymore...
he broke the phone in anger...where r u piya...how can u stay away from me...how can u hide our babies...why pia? i will find u...i will...u cnt hide anymore...i will find u...
Alina laughed evilly...stupid brother...u wont find her ever...she is gone...and ur precious childs...i hv them...dont worry...i will look after them till i have there powers for my sake...u wont find ur childs either...silly abhay...u r stupid...u trusted me...me...haan haan...
New york...
A very ancient palace-
one Beautiful woman around 25 was angrily shouting over two servent...
u fools...how many times i told u two look after her safety...
sorry madam...she is powerfull...we were hlplss...we failed to stop her...pls forgive us...
Oh get lost...and call her here...
they ran towards a room...
madam ...pls come with us...they said to a curly haired figure...
oh...she called me naa...lets go...
she followed them...
in a hall
what is this Mailonicia...u did it again...why?
piya...call me piya...pls Mady... i hate thatt name...
oh yeah...then stop doing ur antics...and My name is Madeline...not Mady...
Piya smirked...ok my dear Mady...i wont do it again...fine...
Piya its not funny...u r not fully in control with ur powers...nd i dont anyone to harm u...pls...
ok madam...but what can i do...this powers are r so good...i can punish those hungry eyed boys...for flirting u know...she said making a puppy face...
Madeline hugs her...look piya...dont be childish..i was worried dear...
i know my super witch sis...u r so much caring...but pls its good to have fun sometimes...come on u r just 25..nd me 19...we can have so much fun naa...dont be boring...she smirked...
ok...sweety...but remember nxt time i wont talk to u...
nd they hug each other...
Madeline thought ( piya i m afraid what will u do...if u get back ur memories...i need to tell u evrything one day...)
pls comment

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