FF abhiya- Fixation for a slave:Chapter18,pg128,July26

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks for commenting 😊

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sweetu_neetu
Intersting...
Love to read more

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

amazing continue soon 😃

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: .rumki.
gr8 updatd
Sid is younger and more sensible than Abhay 😲 😆
btw liked the fiersy Pia here

I shocked everyone with Sid's character 😆 glad you liked it and you haven't seen anything of her feistyness yet 😉

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: barki
me too like your ff continue soon😊

Thank you so much

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Superb update dear!!! I loved the way u wrote the whole chappy. omg sid more sensible than abhay?? Lol shpcking hun. I liked abhiya part, last part was awesome. Plz updt soon, i am just waiting for next part.
Thanks for the pm.

Thanks. Yeah I saw I shocked everyone with Sid's character 😆 i will update very soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

awesome concept indeed...
i like dis abhay...dark...

i wonder how did i not see dis FF be4...?😕 😆
would love to read da next part...soon...
plz add me in ur pm list...😊

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
Just read the updat..very good job!! 👏
abhay is completly ruthless here...pia is human bt nt weak..hm..that means a tough fight awaits.
waiting to see what happens next..plz continue..

Thanks Lost In Love. Nice user name by the way 👏 Thank you for liking the concept and I hope you enjoy reading.

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: bellaaa
awsome update
abhay is quite evil huh
madhu even salve head...hmm she may be nice to piya
so sid sensible than abhay😃
wow wonder what happened after the last scene between abhiya
piya had high spirits she must be in fighting mode
cont soon

Thanks Bella. Yes Abhay is evil and Sid is sensible 😆 Madhu is going to be very nice to Piya. she will fight Abhay and make him speechless.

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome concept Charlotte. I loved it . Abhay,is indeed dark & I like it. Oh felt,bad,4 Pia but lets c how master will fall 4 his slave plz pm me

Thank you SheDevil. I hope you enjoy the story 😊