FF abhiya- Fixation for a slave:Chapter18,pg128,July26

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barki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

me too like your ff continue soon😊

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Superb update dear!!! I loved the way u wrote the whole chappy. omg sid more sensible than abhay?? Lol shpcking hun. I liked abhiya part, last part was awesome. Plz updt soon, i am just waiting for next part.
Thanks for the pm.

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rosamale

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

wat an update yaar👏👏👏 Abhay told Piya to strip down😲😲😲 wonder wat will be her reply😃😃😃thanx for the pm

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: mandy1024
That was a good update Charlotte 👏 So Ramuni is a loyal servant n a father figure to Abhay? I am glad that atleast he seems to be close to a human despite being a monster 😳 Pia is now in the beast's castle? n u made Sid Abhay's younger more disciplined bro? 😆 Interesting. So Pia was made to deck herslef up like a sacrificial goat before being dragged to the monster? Pia seems to be the fiesty kind here 😃 She was happy when she got to know that she is no longer confined to the dungeons but alas a worse fate awaits her But I suppose though this fate is destructive its beautiful in its own twisted form 😳 Fab job 👏 Conitnue soon 😊

Thanks Manasa. Ramuni is going to be one of the prime characters of this story along with Siddarth. They are all grey including Abhay. He will look like completely negative but offcourse he isn't. Piya has hell ahead but she might start to like it. who knows. 😆

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Awsome...I like thus fighting piya...very interesting...too short update fir my liking...eager for mire...

Thanks. So sorry dear but this is convenient for me since I cant write for too long 😳

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
awesome update dear👏...i can already sense the forbidden attraction between the two..and i can't wait to read more of this dark love!!i'm sure piya is a fighter of a girl and will not give in easily👍🏼...and abhay is used to people following his instructions without a sigh against him..so they r bound to clash..and the clash will be interesting!!update soon..i'm loving it already!!⭐️

Thanks so much. I was actually worried if I should write or not since the story is very dark but like in wattpad people doesnt mind dark stories so hopefully there they won't as well 😊 Piya isn't going to listen Abhay at all and neither his sexy charms are going to work on Piya so you can imagine how much this is going to disturb Abhay 😆

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: shria
That was one amazing update😳 wuld love to see wat happens next😉

Thanks a lot. you will read what happened next soon 😉

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update. Pia even though is in serious trouble bt i liked her fighting spirit. Thanx 4 pm

Thank you for liking. Piya is indeed in serious trouble but she is going to give Abhay a real hard time.

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Charlotte

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
amazing update👏 Wat sid is abhay's younger brother???nd is more sensible than abhay????😲 wel ye 1st tym hai na thoda shock laga😆 hmm its very intresting too...continue soon😳

Thank you. Sorry for the shock 😆 thought of making it a bit different. Sid more sensible than Abhay. pretty sarcastic that would be 😆

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

hello Charlotte..😊 welcome to our forum..🤗
your concept is interesting..and of course am above 15..😆 So plzz continue soon..am eager to read this one...i love intense stories..😊