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Wow I didn't expect so many response. Thanks so much. will update soon and enjoy your Christmas everyone 🥳
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ok, first up, thank you for liking my writing and putting me up with mandy. it's a big honour!
secondly, allow me to tell u that I love ur concept. please do pm me as well. i'd love to read this!
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Hey welcome 2 Abhiya land.
Dont worry we Abhiyans come frm every corner of Globe here just 4 Abhiya n will always be here 4 them.
Amazing n fresh concept.Do continue soon.
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gr8 concept
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hello charlotte...welcome to the forum😊...i'm well above 15😆 and eager to read a dark love story..concept is different and intriguing👍🏼do update soon and pm me😊
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Thanks for such warm welcome and huge response 🤗 I am still celebrating my holidays so before it ends I will update the next chapter this weekend.
I added all who wanted Pms. kindly accept because it makes easier to send Pm then.
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I will maintain this size of update from now and updates will be each week. 😊

Chapter 1


Ramuni is King's left hand and known as the Royal conniver of the kingdom. He adores Abhay and has always been close to him. King is busy in his works and ever since Queen died he kind of coiled himself from everyone including his children. Abhay is elder of two and completely spoilt ever since his mother died. The Younger Prince Siddarth is much sensible than him but somehow Ramuni always supports Abhay. He liked to cover up his mistakes and get scolded from King but to Ramuni Abhay is his own son. And since Abhay doesn't listen to anyone except Ramuni, King actually ordered Ramuni to stay with Abhay more.

He paid the money to the auctioneer and took the chain of the slave in his hand. She was looking apprehensive and Ramuni can hear her heartbeat getting faster. Poor girl is scared though she is hardly 17/ 18. Being a 400 year old vampire Ramuni has seen many eras of slaves but somehow he never accepted torturing them. But he has no problem is keeping human slaves either as long as vampires doesn't kill them. Ramuni noticed the girl was limping slightly. He asked kindly, "are you okay?"

She looked at Ramuni puzzled at kind voice but didn't reply. Ramuni sighed, this one looks tough.

Abhay was standing infront of the carriage with his signature smirk. as if he finds something amusing. Ramuni introduced Piya to Abhay, "His is Prince Abhay Raichand - his highness, the heir of the new kingdom and your new Master. Bow down."

Abhay was amazed how the fragile looking girl who is standing in rugged cloth gave him another hatred filled fierce look and didn't listen to him. But he knows how to make people listen to him, doesn't he? He took her neck in his hand and forced her to bow down, "SAY MASTER."

Piya hissed under her breathe, "Master "

"Good."

He shoved her inside the carriage and they started their journey towards the castle. Pia was in another carriage with Ramuni and he started giving her instruction of what she should do and what not. "Listen to whatever he says. He is very temperamental so don't make him agitated which might be harmful for you. You will be living in the slave room beside Prince's own royal bedroom since you are his personal slave. Whenever he rings the bell in his room you must go and ask if he needs anything. This is your duty."

Piya was surprised for the first time she was hopeful, "I don't have to live in dungeons anymore?" she has worst experience of living in dark, cold dungeons where she hasn't seen daylight for years so she left relieved. She asked impatiently, "does that mean I can walk around on my will?"

"Yes you can. Go to the kitchen if you are hungry and there's slave quarter too because in our castle no slave lives in dungeons until they are punished so be careful. And don't try to run otherwise the wolves in the jungle will eat you alive."

Piya didn't see her Master when she reached the castle. Ramuni gave her to another elder woman who seems human since her hand was warm. She led Piya to her room. It was very small but with a bed and bathroom. It was dark but there's one small window. Piya couldn't have asked for anything else than a window to see sunlight. For now she was happy. The elderly woman told she is the head of slave quarter being a slave for many years here now and her name is Madhu. She gave Piya new soft cloths and told her to take shower and wear new cloths. Her Master will call her any moment. Piya took shower after ages and wore soft white fabrics she was given. A white long cotton flowy skirt with pink top. She felt divine and wished she could look at the mirror. Her leg still hurts a bit though. She was going to sat on the bed when Madhu came again and told her Prince is calling. Suddenly Piya started feeling like a sacrificial goat being decorated before the final sacrifice.

She led to the next door and closed the door behind. Again Piya was apprehensive. She looked around as the room is no less than a hallroom. Beautiful fireplace, buffalo skinned carpet all over the room, foam couch, chandeliers, pine wood cupboards, and a huge four poster bed and on the huge bed a Greek god looking man lying supporting his elbow on a silk pillow. He was wearing a black pajama and black cloak unbuttoned. under the cloak his perfect stone build chest and his marble looking skin so visible. Even his enemy can't deny how incredibly beautiful he is but Piya knows even devils are beautiful so she aint going to fall on that trap. Above all, his blue eyes and the intense look gave Piya chills.

Abhay scanned her from top to bottom. She was even more beautiful than he thought. In fresh cloths, after shower she is looking plain delicious ... served and ready to be eaten. Her skin looking so soft. He would love to relish on them and eat his deliciously smelling body, tangle his hand in her silky hair and her feast on her blood. He was excited and this is very unreal for him. This girl smells so different. He ordered, "STRIP DOWN."

Piya's heart skipped a beat as she asked again, "come again?"

In a flicker of moment Abhay was behind her and not in the bed. Piya flinched seeing his vampire speed and as his fingers trailed down from her jaw to her neck as he whispered in her ear, "MASTER SAYS STRIP DOWN SLAVE."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a good update Charlotte 👏 So Ramuni is a loyal servant n a father figure to Abhay? I am glad that atleast he seems to be close to a human despite being a monster 😳 Pia is now in the beast's castle? n u made Sid Abhay's younger more disciplined bro? 😆 Interesting. So Pia was made to deck herslef up like a sacrificial goat before being dragged to the monster? Pia seems to be the fiesty kind here 😃 She was happy when she got to know that she is no longer confined to the dungeons but alas a worse fate awaits her But I suppose though this fate is destructive its beautiful in its own twisted form 😳 Fab job 👏 Conitnue soon 😊
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Awsome...I like thus fighting piya...very interesting...too short update fir my liking...eager for mire...
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awesome update dear👏...i can already sense the forbidden attraction between the two..and i can't wait to read more of this dark love!!i'm sure piya is a fighter of a girl and will not give in easily👍🏼...and abhay is used to people following his instructions without a sigh against him..so they r bound to clash..and the clash will be interesting!!update soon..i'm loving it already!!⭐️
Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 12 years ago

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