FF- Time And Again- Book 2- Book 3- Link added - Page 57

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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5times!! Till nw i read ths update 5-6times !! Generally i dnt go through any update again as i dnt have the habit unless i have to comment bt here i was just have to!! 😉 Shreya cnt tell you how much i loved ths update! Litterally i enjoyed reading it! ❤️The dialogues especially abhay's along wth Pia's were awesuum!👏 Too too good! ⭐️Thats why i couldnt skip cmentng ths 1. 😆


I was shocked when I saw this. Thanks😆
nw to the update-
'is it for my benefit or your's?' 🤣 ths lines was mindblowing! 👏 As much as i luvd it i cudnt stop rofling..😆
And then pia's answer! Equally awesum!👏 😆

I think the line was 'jeh's benefit or mine' actually..but thanks😆😆

'i knw 30diffrnt ways...' omg!🤣 i dnt knw what to say shreya! Again i was laughing imagining the reactn of the poor boy! Bt in each of the dialogues we got the damn smart dangerously cool,witty n furious abhay..that is his trademark! Ths is wat makes him abhay! N trust me(i knw u wnt though.lately u'r behaving typical wth i donno tag!) that u have captured the perfect essence of abhay that we had seen in the show! Am nt exaggerating a bit! U have dne it n u hav dne it wth flawless depiction! I could see him saying the very words. Its that good!👏

I do try. Technically this is totally inspired from the show so I do try to retain the characters...I am glad you feel I have done justice to this😳

ok nw the car scene- there abhay tries to control..ths is while their journey to college! And 4 a flicker of a moment ths brief picture gves a glimpse that abhay was checking her out! Poor pia! She thot she couldnt make hm feel in anyway..i mean neither ths nor that. Bt he was angry bt effctd as well n we see that in 1/2 times! Or am i wrng?

No ur right😆

Then again while they were returning n they were lost in eachother's eyes i think abhay wth his powerful efforts sumhow cntrolld hmslf (whch he does most of the tym around pia) and still pia thinks she is a shadow? Of maithli? Poor girl.needs help! Bt anyway ths whole i mean a kind of misundrstandng frm bth their sides is making ths story mre intriguing n sweet to read u knw.😳

Umm...are you sure it's not making it boring?😆

and the corridor scene was anthr brilliant part!👏

the part where abhay says bitterly if she dsnt mind to go wth him, i cud clearly see the pain,hurt in him! He couldnt take the fact that pia of all ppl pia who usd to stalk hm 24/7 is actually avoiding him. N i really felt bad for hm! For bth of them!


Yes thats why he is hurt. all of a sudden Pia is like running away almost literally😆
And atlast he made her change!😆 I knew he would! He wnt tolerate it anymre! I always enjoy ths commanding N possessive abhay!😳


LOL ya he couldn't just sit and do nothing could he?😆
alina undrstood the whole thng n her words were amazing👏
I ❤️ the entire update shreya. It was 100% flawless! Plz cntinue this story as long as possible! This one is my fav8 amng all ur works! Thanks for this amazing update dear🤗 keep writing always...😊

Thanks thanks thanks sooo much🤗