Originally posted by: sukugeny
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A.W.E.S.O.M.E. update shreya.I just love this FF a lot.
I like always The Jalkuda Abhay a lot.
everything is written so well,The talented mind is always behind all scenes .I love twists in ur FFs.
Thanks a lot Geny..I love giving twists🤗😆
I loved this scene...I mean like this-
When he saw her, he stood up straight and Piya saw his eyes widen in shock, then they travelled upwards, then down.
😉
This scene...feeling like a real main ho rha tha...written so well--
I am so glad you liked it. Means a lot😳
Unfortunately for Abhay who was sitting opposite her, as she leaned over , her neckline slid further downwards, and Abhay clenched his fists in repressed fury.
Looking sideways, he saw one of the students staring. Blood boiled in his ears. 'Excuse me,' he mumured to Piya, who was quite oblivious to the stares around her.
Getting up, he strode up to the boy and made a show of retrieving a book from the shelves. Then, very softly, he said,'Do you like horror movies?'
The boy jumped, not having noticed Abhay Raichand before- and certainly intimidated by the cold glare he was recieving.
'N-no,' he stammered.
Abhay smirked. 'Of course. I love horror movies, you know,' he said conversationally. 'In fact, I've watched so many I know twenty different ways of gouging out your eyes, each more painful than the last.'
He let the threat hang in the air for a moment. Then, even more softly, he added, 'Would you let me practise on you?'
The boy fled the library within ten seconds. Abhay remained quite still, trying to control his fury.
---------loved it.
horror movies..n diff.types n practice...by god-ye scene hi yad aaya muze..
overall full on abhiya...mast update.waiting for next update.
Thank You for this my fav.FF.
Hmm...I think this update had more than usual of AbhIya. Glad I could entertain😃
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