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Trishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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barki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wow update diya to diya but chhotasa par bahut achchha tha continue fatafat ok😉😆

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shafaq

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Posted: 12 years ago

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mast tha ek dum ... :* awesome update

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GoldenLuna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazing update yar...

it was superb..

loved it..

thnx for pm..

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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last convo of abhay and grup is emotional.., hope he accept their frendship i belive dey are gud 4 him and really going to help him and take care of his secret , which i knw not going to reveal too soon but still hope 4 new start...

i like the update...[/QUOTE Thanks for coment dear. abhays secret will reveal soon but their frndship will faces some bad conditions due to his truth. becuse in reality it will be difficult to accept the condtions which we dont think and it also would happen with misha. but abhay and misha will be best frnds in my ff becusein pkyek i always wanted thier frndship bonding best.

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: barki
wow update diya to diya but chhotasa par bahut achchha tha continue fatafat ok😉😆

Ok dear
and next update will be long
😊

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
last convo of abhay and grup is emotional.., hope he accept their frendship i belive dey are gud 4 him and really going to help him and take care of his secret , which i knw not going to reveal too soon but still hope 4 new start...

i like the update...

Thanks for coment dear. abhays secret will reveal soon but their frndship will faces some bad conditions due to his truth. becuse in reality it will be difficult to accept the condtions which we dont think andit also would happen with misha. but abhay and misha will be best frnds in my ff becusein pkyek i always wanted thier frndship bonding best.

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maria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

superb update 😳

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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chapter-9 - its difficult to forgive

in reharsal hall

the trio goes reached into reharsal hall.
panchi- ok guys, lets start the rehasal. kabir u hv to do the role of sidhartha.
kabir- what? kya yaar panchi, vilien ka role de dia.
they start doing the reharsal for drama.
piya- abheyndra aap niche kyon baithe ho?
abhay- mathili, jahi humari jagah hai. hum aap ke brabar nahi baith sakte. aap princess hain aur hum ek naukar.
piya angirly- abheyendra aap kehna kya chahte hain. agar yeh apki jagah nahi hai toh main bhi jaha par nahi baithongi. aur aap muje princess kyon bula rahe hain. aap mere bachpan ke dost hain. aap moje mathili hi bulaiye. aap upar baith jaiye nahi toh hum bhi niche baith jayenge.
abhay- nahi pri...mathili, aap niche mat baithiye, hum hi upar baith jate hain.
piya- abheyendra hum chahte hain ki hum humesha apke sath rahen. kya aap humesha mere sath rahenge.
abhay- mathili hum humesha aapke sath rahenge.
then abhay 's expresion changed and he run from their.

abhay's pov
piya asked me as mathili that she want to live with me always and i said that i always live with her but then i relised that what i said was just a lie. yaa i lost in thoughts of mathili. i was feeling guilty for breaking her promise. yes i promised her that i will always live with her in any satuation but now she was not with me. i lost her. i lost reason of my life. then i relised my eyes start changing colour. my expresions changed but before anyone saw me , i run from their. i knew that everone will be in suspence that why i m behaving very weired but i dont care. i hv to go from their so i run from their.
abhay's pov end

misha- what is this. why he run like snake want to bite him.
panchi- misha this is not time of joke.
misha- bierdy i m not joking. yaar ye ladka ajib hai. kab kya karta hai kush pta hi nahi chalta.
piya comes near misha and whishper something in her ears and misha's expresion changed into hard after hear that.
after that all the boys and girls left from their.

in the evening in dobreal house

piya- misha i m saying right yaar. his eys changed colour. when he said the lines "mathili hum humesha aapke sath rahenge" his expresion changed. i feel like anyone stab a knife to him.
misha- piya what u want to say? his eyes changed colour. how it can be possible.
piya- misha, belive me. i m saying truth. omg, misha u remember our conversation with him.
misha- yaa piya. i feel like he is hiding something big. he hate himself.
piya- yaa misha, u r right. i dont know why, but i feel bad to see him like that. he has no frnds.
kabir-misha yaar he himself wanted to live alone. atlest he should give a chance to anyone. i dont know what is reason?
misha-yess kabir, thats it. we hv to find the reason. we hv to take him out all of this.he desarve some happiness yaar.
kabir- misha, piya why u both r so intersted in him. yaar bahut se log hain but tum log usme kyon intrest le rahe ho?
misha- i dont know kabir. what yaa about piya, i know.
piya- what? what u mean misha?
misha- hey sister, dont acting. i know everything. u always said u hate love etc etc but dont u like abhay?
piya- misha yaar but misha intrupt
misha- dont lie to me. i will not talk with u if u lied to me.
piya- ok ok, i admit i like him. yaar i tried to through out him from my mind but i cant. when i saw him like that alone, i feel someone stalked me on my heart. i feel pain for him misha. i dont know why?
kabir- becuse u start loving him. yaa piya u r in love with abhay.
misha- piya, tumhe uss sadu me kya dikha.
piya- what u mean by sadu misha?
misha- see kabir, now for abhay my sister fighting with me. and start laughing.
kabir start sing song to tease piya- maar daala, kisi ne piya ke dil pe , maar daala.
piya run from room.
misha- kabir piya toh chali gai. aab kya karen
kabir- badi mushkil see piya ka weak point hath aya hai. bahut mazak udati thi humara. aab main dekh kya karta hoon. muje kehti thi pyar pyar karta rehta hai.
misha glare at kabir
misha- kabir dont do anything, she is my sister.
kabir- yaar misha, she is my best frnd also, main usko marne bala nahi hoon. bas thoda saa mazak karne kaa mood kar raha hai.
after sometime kabir left to his home

next morning mount college
piya was walking to her class. she was in deep thoughts about abhay.
piya thinking" is misha right? is i m in love with abhay?omg it feel strange. i knew that i hate love but now i can understand why people give their lifes in love.i have need to saw him. why, i dont know but i feel that if i could not saw his face, i would be die."
piya's thoughts disturbed by some voices which was coming from boys locker room.she start to going in direction of voices. their was a boy and a girls voices. piya saw misha was already their.she join her sister and turn her face to see the owner of the male voice. she was shocked to see the similar face about which she was thinking.
abhay- what r u doing in boys lockar room?
girl- u did not want to talk with me. why u hurt uerself. i want to help u. i want to meet two brothers. u will be happy after meeting ur bother
abhay with little smile- happy?? u think i will be happy after meting a person who destroyed my life. i hate him. pls leave. what he done was very crule. i cant forgive him.
girl- what he done abhay, i want to know. why u did not tell me the truth. i can understand ur feeling.
abhay shouted- u cant understand. nobody can understand to me. i m alone mannat. i deserve this. pls go from here.
girl- cant u give a chance to ur brother. he want to leave with his brother and family.
abhay- why cant u understand mannat. i cant forgive him. if he wants to live with his family, then he can. i m not stoping him but if he want to live with me, then m sorry. i cant forgive him.
manat-why? why cant u? he is ur brother. whay u hate sidhartha? what he did?
abhay- i cant tell u anything .. i want to live alone. why cant u live me alone?
mannat- i want to help u.becuse i love u. (bro sister wala love hai yaar)
abhay- i love u too sister but i cant let u know about my past. pls try to understand me.
saying this abhay left from their and leave behind a shocked piya and misha.
mannat to herself- no brother. i hv to found about ur past. i cant left u in pain. something was very wrong due to which, two brothers become enemy. mom was right. u r hurting urself due to ur past. i hv to solve it but i need help. saying that mannat also left from their.
piya's pov
omg, was i heard right? abhay has a brother and sister. but happend between two brothers. why cant abhay forgive his brother. sidhartha, his brother. i heard this name before. what where, yaa i remember, brother of abheyendra. omg it means. no it cant be. may be he was not that sidhartha. i will be mad.
piya's pov end

misha- piya... i m calling u from 2 minutes. where u gone. i mean in abhayland?
piya- misha, its not time to joke. yaar je abhay toh pura hi mysterius hai. i mean when i meet with him, i always found a new truth about him.
misha- yaa piya. u r right. and yeh mannat, i thought she will be his g.f. but i was wrong. she is his sister. but something is fishy.
piya- what?
misha- his sister dont know about his past. i mean this is not weired.
piya- yaa misha. i m also thinking that. ooo how i forget. we hv class.
misha- yaa lets go.about abhay, we will discuss later.

precap-
something about sidhartha

Edited by visu12 - 12 years ago