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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
amazing
Nice update.So Piya n Misha r close 2 finding truth abt Abhay.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope abhay forgive sid... nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update continue soon 😊 yeh log apni jasusi jaldise kare aur humhe khush kare😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter- 10- hate u.
next day
misha's pov
i was going to college on my bike. i was thinking about drama.. but then i saw abhay. he was going in woods. i feel somthing is fishy so i stop my bike and start follow him. after 5 minutes we reached in deep woods. i mean there was no rey of sunlight.i was thinking that what is abhay doing here. then he stop and i hide behind a tree. then i heard a name who make me shocked. this was a male voice.
misha's pov end

voice- abheyendra.
abhay- sidhartha, what r u doing here and why u called me?
sid- u know little brother.
abhay- dont call me ur brother. my brother was die on that day when u betroyed me. did u forget that day
sid- how i can brother. how i can forgot that day, i m regretting why i do that. but brother its was not completely my fault. i mean i also love her.
abhay- love? u called that was love, then u r wrong sid. that was not love, that was jelousy. u jelous becouse she loves me.
sid- no bro, that was not jelousy, i loved her.
abhay- then why u killed her. yes sid u killed her.
sid- no, her father killed her.
abhay- but the reason was u. u tell her father about me and her. if u realy loved her, then u did not done that.
sid- yaa bro, i think u r right, i m the reason of her death. but it was past bro. i want u back. i want my brother back.
abhay shout- and i want mathili back. can u do it? did u heard, i want my mathili back.
saying that abhay fell on his knees.
misha's mouth was open to heard the name mathili.
then a they heard a female voice.
sid- mannat what r u doing here?

misha's pov
i was shocked when i heard the name, abheyndra. then i saw the owner of this voice. omg, he was also in black clothes just like abhay. he was smart and handsome but not more then abhay. i mean he was smart and handsome but abhay is more handsome. then abhay said him sidhartha. what is this, i mean why abhay called him sidhartha and why that boy called abhay abheyndra. i was hell confused. they were talking about something may be about their past. then i heard little bro, omg it means this was abhay,s brother. but why he was saying sorry to abhay. what happend between them. abbhay said that he killed his love. it means abhay had g.f. and sidhartha too loved her. i feel bad for him. then i heard a name which made me froze. yaa " mathili" omg now i start understanding. abheyndra and his brother sidhartha. abheyndra love mathili.omg the story start runing in my mind which told abhay in reharsal hall. that means abhay is abheyndra, but how it can be possible. i mean it was 200 years ago and what r they doing here. r they tried to reharsal for any drama like us. then a femal voice disturbed my thoughts. yaa it was mannaty, abhay's sister but what r she doing here. i was scared now. then mannat said- " what was this sid bro. but about abhay talking and why u calling him abheyendra? whose that mathili? and did u realy the reason of her death? abhay and sidhartha were listening this but no-one spoke then she shout" did u will tell me damitt, what is happening here" . then sidhartha told the whole story of mathili to her.now my confused was clear. so they r the same sidhartha and abheyndra. i saw the tears in mannat's eyes but one minute, it were not tears, it were blood tears. was i saw right.seeing the blood tears, only one name was come in my minds " vampire" did mannat a vampire then abhay and sid? yaa now i understood why abhay always called that he dont deserve frndship. he hate himself. i feel my legs were shaking with fears. i was listening the conversion of vampires. i was confused to see the condition of abhay. the blood tears were continously falling from his eyes. i felt pain to see him like that. but is i m seeing, r they really vampires.i mean i heard that vampires cant feel any emotions then why they r? i was confused. i was thinking that i should hv console him or scared from him.
misha's pov end


mannat's pov
what i m listening. i always thought that abhay is wrong. he keeping his parents away from sid but now after listening about mathili, i m changed. i know that i should hv hate sid, what he is my brother. that was past and now he is changed. but i know that he did a big mistake. he betroyed his own brother. due to him two lovers become seprated. due to him, abheyndra is now abhay. i can feel abhay's feeling. then i felt something. i touch my cheeks and saw blood. i was crying. then i turn my head to abhay, he was siting on his knees. he was crying. how a person can go through that much pain. what i should hv do now? i cant said to abhay to forgive sid after heard their past. i cant left sid becuse he is alone. i also love my brother abhay. i was confused, but then i heard a noise. i saw to abhay. he stand up and punch on a tree. i was shocked after saw his frusration, his pain. i know he was hurt. then he shout mathili's name and run from there. i was about to go behind her but then i turn my face to see sid. for my surprise he was also crying. i mean i saw him first time in pain. i know that what was happening in his mind. he was feeling guilty. he knew that he did a huge mistake. i went near him and console him that everything will be fine. then we also leave from there.


in oher side


abhay's pov
I walk on a path deep in a forest and the noise of loneliness fills my head.
I think of all my friends and family that are long since dead.

I listen to the wind blow through the trees, on my face I can feel the warm summer the breeze.
My breath deepens and my heart slows as I fall to my knees.

I hear their voices loud, I hear their voices clear.
I can see their faces through every tear.

Be silent with me.

I realize I am alone and there is no one with me.
Is this I wonder, how my whole life will be?

200 years ago, i had many frnds but my brother betroyed me.
When death comes knocking at my door; was there be someone there I could call my own?

I can feel the blood flowing through my veins.
I can hear a loud thunder in my head accompanying sharp pains.

Be silent with me.

Where am I? There is nothing here I recognize.
Trees begin to blend with bushes, I can not trust my eyes.

I am feeling a sense of loneliness like never before.
I wish now she was with me to talk to, as I clutch the forest floor.

I find myself wanting to tell someone of all the things I feel.
How the only thing I ever wanted was her that was real.

I can hear the sweat pour from every pore of my being.
I can hear everything, even the most distant birds singing.

Be silent with me.

I feel my thoughts slow as if I were on the edge of sleep.
I struggle to make sense of these feelings that are running so deep.

I roll onto my back and look up at the sky.
Today I think, is a beautiful day to die.

A random thought I can not explain.
Is it I wonder, because I feel no more pain?

I no longer hear the faint sound of my heart beat.
Then I hear the sound of my mother's voice saying, come, be silent with me.
i turn my face to saw my mother. she was standing little away from me. i know that she is not my real mother but she loves me like i m his own real son. i stand up and turn my face to other side to hide my blood tears but she said that she is knew what happend. my sister mannat told everything to mother. i did not spoke a single word to mom. then she said to me come home. i start chasing her like a kid. then i reached in my home.
abhay's pov end


next day in college

misha's pov
i saw him walking toward the class. and then a smile come on my face after seeing my little sister piya chasing him. omg she was chasing him like a kid. i was thinking about piya and abhay but then i remember the last day. a little smile which was come on my face now vanished. no, it cant be. my sister loves a vampire. what i should hv do? why everything is happen with piya? why god is so cruel toward her. how i will say to piya about abhay that he is a vampire? other side abhay, we thought that he is a happy person but its only a fake happiness. now i know his reality. how a person can be went through that pain? nd now he is playing his own role in play. it would be hurt him. o shit, how i forget, piya has same face like mathili. it will be more difficult for abhay. i did not want to seprate them but how i can send to my sister in darkness.
misha's pov end


piya's pov
i was going to my college. i reached in college but then i saw him. he was going to class so i start chasing him. it was fun. i was happy becuse today i saw his face when i enter in college unlike other days when i was seen jay's face in front of me. then my gaze shifted to my sister who was smiling to see me. i turn my face in other side so she thought that i m not chasing him but i knew i cant hide anything from her so i again turn my face toward her. her expresion changed, like she want to say something to me. i was confused so i went toward her.

preap-jay and abhay's boxing match. piya and others saw the tatto on abhay's back.



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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
lovely...hope Misha understand Abhiya love...continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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by god kanaji truth is out to misha that abhay is vampire... lets wait 4 the start of new friendship from misha's side... i knw sid did wrong but he is guilty and hope abhay forgive him... are dude khate hai na subha ka bhula agar shyam ko ghar aa jaye to use bhula nahi kahate...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Misha now knows Abhay's truth! 😲.
Nice lines to describe Abhay's pain.
Waiting 4 Abhiya love story 2 start.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Nyc!! Mish to know tht Abhay's a VAMPIEE!! WOW!! CONT SOOON!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
sorry for late commenting but i was not active becz of my examzzz
lovely updates
aww piya really loved abhay
shit misha knows about abhay truth
now what wil happened after piya seeing abhay as vampire
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
please update soon ab precap janke raha nahi jaa raha😲

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