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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates...
loved them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb yaar...loved it...thanks for the pm..
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yippee ab pata chalega ki khiladi hai koi anadi hai koi😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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phew finaly read all the updates they are amazing👏 Plz pm me too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sorry 4 late comment... i go through whole story once again as i was busy earlier so miss the pace wid story but now its alright... nice update... egaerly waiting to see abhay playing abhyendra... his own character... its really going to be interesting and fun to read... but i am worring how abhay feel when painfull past came back to him...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
just love the pov of both abhiya
so know misha will ask to abhay for play help lolzzz
poor abhay
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER-7- THE PRINCESS OF PANDER


next morning in mount college


all the student of college were standing in reharsal hall. they were waiting for abhay and jay. then abhay and jay comes.
princi- so abhay and jay, i hv chose the task for both of u. u both hv to tell the story of princess of pander. the one from both of u who told the more about her will do the male role of play.
all the students were excited for this. jay was smiling and thinking about the last night when he was recieved the call of principal.

flashback


princi called jay and told him what happend in reharsal hall and also told him about task. he said him to prepare for it.

flashback end

but in a crowed of student, one boy was in deep thinking. he did not want to tell everyone about his brother's betroyal. he did not want to tell about her to anyone with his own mouth. he did not want to remember that nightmaar which changed his intire life. he did not wanted to play the role of abheyndra. he was doing this only becuse he did not want to see that bloody jay on his own place. the fate was playing very crule game for him. now he hv to do his own role in a play. he wanted to run away from that place. but he cant. he cant becuse he is not cowerd.
princi- so lets start, first abhay. u hv to tell about mathili.
abhay- no sir, aap pehle jay se puchiye. main baad me bata dunga.
jay - and if u copied me.
abhay- it also can be happend in my case. ok, i hv a solution.
jay- what?
abhay- i m going from here. u can tell about mathili to students. when u stop, i will come.
jay- ok, i m ready.


abhay's pov
i wants to run from here. i know that i need some time. so i made plan and said to jay that i will come after his task completed. he agreed becuse he was thinking that if will stay with him, i can be copied him. the second reason i want to go from there becuse i did not wanted to hear any stupid things about mathili. so i left that place and run to the forest where i could be realesed my all pain
abhay's pov end


jay- so i m telling the story to u all about mathili.
well mathili was the princess of pander. she was very beautiful. her father wanted to marry her what she refused becuse she already in love with her childhood frnd abheyendra. but a person told this to her father and her father burrent them alive.
misha with curisity- who tell to king about the mathili.
jay- i dont know.
piya- well je sab toh main bhi janti hoon. je sab toh internet and history books me bhi likha hai.
princi- piya, this is not about u. this is about jay and abhay. well we listen to jay, now we should hv listen to abhay.
princi called abhay and abhay come their in 2 minutes.
princi- abhay now its ur turn.
abhay- guys, i dont know, what jay told to all of u about mathili. but i wanted to tell u one thing that i m not gonna tell u the full story of mathili and abheyndera.

200 years ago, a king was runing on his horse in forest. some peoples were behind him. the king was injured very badly. he was about to fell on the ground but a man saved to king from these peoples and take to king in his house. after 2 days king become allright and he said to man about his true identity. the man was very poor so king offerd him some money. but the man was self indipendent. so he refused to take money what he chosed the job in kings kingdom. 2 years passed and one day the man who saved the king become ill. he was near his death so he given the risponsibility og his sons to the king. the man hv two son - sidhartha and abheyendra. so the man died and king take the sons with him. after 2 days, queen gives the birth to a girl and king kept her name mathili. her full name was... mathili grow up with her frnds abheyendra and sidhartha. they were good frnds. when princess was 10 yer old, king send her to the another place for study. but mathili always thought about abheyndra. 6 years passed. many things changed. mathili relised that she was in love with abheyendra and other side abheyenda too was relised his love for her. 3 years more passed and then one day mathili returned to pander. abheyendra was very happy too see her but also disspointed becuse he cant be tell her about his feelings. he thoght that she is a princess and she would not be accept him but for his surprise mathili come to his home when he was alone. she hugged him tight and told him about her feeling. they confessed their love. the day was passing and the love between them become stronger day by day. sidharth relised that his brother was going away from him. sidharth loved his brother, he start feels jelousy. when abheyendra start passing his more time with mathili. so for abhay he start to stay with mathili becuse he know that abheyendra also be with her. but it was his mistake becuse with time he also start liking mathili. his like changed into love and absession. when he knows about that mathili and abheyendra love each other. he feel jelous but now not for his brother. now he feel jelous for mathili. so he tells all this to king. king become angry and he anounced the death for abheyendra. sidharth feel scared becuse he did not want death of his brother. he only want to sepreted them. when mathili heard about this, she went to the jail and said to abhyendra for run but abheyndra refused and said that he can die for her. he cant live without her. mathili promised him that she will come with her but now he has to go. abhyendra run from the jail but king locked her in room and order to burr her alive for his repudation. abheyendra was waiting for her but when she id not come, he become worried. he come back and then he saw to her. she was sorrounding in fire. she was calling his name. abheyndra jumped into fire to save her. sidhartha also jumped in fire to save mathili. but they both failed. fire also catched them and start burning them. mathili burrent in front of abheyendra and after sometime he too died. sidhartha also died in that fire.
this was the story of mathili and abheyendra.

all the student were in mixed emotions. they were sad for mathili and abheyendra, they were confused becuse they were thinking how abhay knew all this. they were happy becuse they did not want to see jay as a winner. jay was in anger and in confused.
jay- how u will know this abhay and how u can say that this was rright story. and why u say that u will anly tell the half story but u told the all story.
all the student was also wanted to hear the answer of same question. piya, misha , panshi, danish, kabir, ruhi and angad, they were also confused.
abhay- u dont know abhay but i m doing the reserch on the topic palace of pander. so i found all this. and yes i m told only half story becuse we know that king only found dead body of mathili, then where was the body of abheyendra and his brother.
jay- so u mean u know all the story. then tell us.
abhay- yes i know about them but i m sorry i cant told that becuse the task was only about mathili not about abheyendra and sidhartha.
all the confusion of the students know solved but some student were in suspence that may be abhay hide something from them. so they decided to find about this,.princi told his decision that abhay will do the role of abheyendra. and all student leave from the reharsal hall.

misha and piya's pov
we listen to jay but we were not surprised when we listen the jay's story of mathili becuse we know this already. we know that may be jay has found this on internet becuse only on internet, we can find the dtory of mathili. we know that jay could be found from book. but he know that the book will be same as internet. so we only found which we already discused. we question to jay but he said that he only knew that. but then abhay start to explain the story of mathili and we were shocked to heard about sidhartha. how abhay knew abhout them. we were also surprised with his expresion. when he was telling about mathili and abheyendra, his expresion was full of love, care, the love and innocence we can see in his eyes but when he said about sidhartha, his expresion changed to haterness, anger. we also can see the pain in his eyes when he was saying about the mathili and abheyendra's death. we feel like that he was involved in all this story. we feel like he was the part of of this nightmaar. then jay asked him that how he knew all this, he told that he is doing resarch on mathili, but we felt that he was lying. his eyes were not supporting his words.then he tell that he knew about abheyendra and sidhartha more but he did not tell. so our suspence was increased.
pov end

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in the foredt

abahy was standing front of mathili's gave.the tears of blood was flowing continously from his eyes. all his past was now front of him. the pain of loosing her was difficult to bear for him.
abhay- what is happening with me. first wo pia and now this bloody play
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in dobreal house

misha kabir and pia was siting in front of arnab. they were in deep discussion about something.
arnab- tum log keh rahe ho ki abhay ne yeh story sunai hai but how. i mean kisi bhi book me yaa net par sidhartha ka jikar nahi hai and na hi uske father ka. abhay ko je sab kaise pta chala.
misha- yes dad, we all r thinking that. u know usne j bhi kaha ki mathili ki death ke baad bhi yeh story hai kyonki abheyndra and sidhartha ki dead body kisi ko nahi mili thi.
arnab- omg, its means he was right.
trio with shocked expresions- who? who was right?
arnab- mera ek dost tha. hum bhi 12 year pehle mathili par resarch kar rahe the. we asked from many old peoples about mathili but they all were only knew same story which was in books. but all peoples saying one thing that they heard some voices from the forest of dehradoon.
pia- which voices?
arnab- unhone kaha ki unhone ek kala saya junglo me mathili- mathili pukarta suna hai. maine unpar vishbas nahi kiya. fir ek din mere frnd ne bbhi kaha ki usne bhi jungle me kisi ko mathili - mathili pukarte suna hai. usne kaha ki wo ek ladka tha jiske back par ek tatto tha. par maine uska yakin nahi kia.
pia- kaisa tatto papa.
arnab shown them the tatto which was made by his frnd. trio were again shocked to see the same tatto which they were saw on the boy who was fighted with warewolf. but tey all remain silent.
arnab- kya hua, tum sabi aise kyon dekh rahe ho?
misha- kush nahidad.bas aise hi.
then misha, kabir and pia gone from their and arnab start think that what happen to them?


guys i hv updated 7 chapter but the page r only 11 used. pls guys coment and like.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey sorry 4 late comment... i go through whole story once again as i was busy earlier so miss the pace wid story but now its alright... nice update... egaerly waiting to see abhay playing abhyendra... his own character... its really going to be interesting and fun to read... but i am worring how abhay feel when painfull past came back to him...


its ok
yaa u r right, it will be difficult for abhay to play his own role.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya

yippeee am 1st

superb yr
i loved it...
u r amazing writter

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing yr
i just luved it...

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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