New ff-: Fateful night bk-3 Updated pg 25 on 4/03/14

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maria

@Maria-capri

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

awesome Romi 😳👏

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

awesome update
finally that Jeh is dead
hope chandeena and piyali will be f9

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

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🤣 you didnt say sorry! 🤣 really?? Bt u called ur update ghatia!! Uff..seriously romi when wil u stop doing ths? 😡 😔

wanna know how the update was? It was fantastic dear!!👏 i loved and enjoyed reading it!⭐️
the fight scene was totally amazing! It was the best part of the update!👍🏼 weather its trisha-piyali or abhay-jay..bth parts were wonderfully described! I could actualy envision the whole thing!! 👏 trust me romi i cud never have written action scenes so well like u did! 👍🏼
good that jey is dead and pia helpd to kill hm! He deservd it! Abhay is naturaly worried for hs parents nw. I just hope he dsnt get into further trouble in resquing them! 😔
bt where is piyali? And trisha is dead! Thts a gud thng.
When pia saw sumone even for a secnd i was cnfusd u knw..i thot who could it be..and then wow its kabir! Actualy i totally forgot abt him lol..bt like the sweet heart kabir is he just cudnt stay bck and cme to resque pia! 😳
abhay pia are togethr nw and am happy for bth of them! Bt i only hope abhay stays safe and cums bck hme wth chandeena.. :/

Ok nw maam please update asap! Am waiting..cnt wait.. 😉
and thanks a lot for the pm and such an amazing update.🤗
tk..cre..n cntinue soon!
P.s. Am really extremly sorry for the late reply.. plz dnt mind rey..

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

awesome update romu...thank god all fight is over now...bt hope chndeena all right coz unke bina abhiya adhure hai...

everyhing is described well romu..loved it.

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Awesome update
I so loved it
It was action packed
I hope ab sab theek ho jao

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

finally jeh dead.dats gud
nice update

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

awsm update
finaly jeh is dead

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

superb update romi
loved every part of it either the fighting scene of piyali to trishna and jeh and abhay and piya scaring for abhay life and poor haseena and chand scene of badly injured...liked it that kabir came to save piya and how bravely piya hit jeh yuipieee jeh died...
abhiya little moment so emotionally and touchy...
hope all will fine
will wait for your next update

Edited by bellaaa - 12 years ago

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Superb update Romi.Luvd it.Abhay managed to save Piya.Wow...piya was brave to shoot at Jeh

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

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hi guys, just wanted to inform you all that as u all know i am in class 12, so my finals/boards have started now, it will end on 25th march. So i won't be able to update any of my works before that and i will be inactive.
Hope u all will understand and plz pray for me that my exams goes well.
Thank you for all ur comments
Love u all
Romita