New ff-: Fateful night bk-3 Updated pg 25 on 4/03/14 - Page 8

m itna jaldi unres nahi karungi romi but i love d update...
by the way mansa mujhe kacche aame bahut pasand hai unhe kari kahete hai...

m itna jaldi unres nahi karungi romi but i love d update...
wase teri sorry bolme ki bimari kabhi khatam nahi hoyegi kya ---- aur ha is bare jaldi update karna...
by the way mansa mujhe kacche aame bahut pasand hai unhe kari kahete hai...

fabulously fabulous.piya is safe good but chand haseena and piyali r missing.hope abhay find them soon.kabir is indeed a v good friend and he proved dat.thanx for pm and continue soon

wow!!! supr action of both abhay pia & again a new suspence...😉just perfect ending!!!!👏baas agli ber jaldi update karna...

Originally posted by: mandy1024

YAY I am first 🥳 Aur un sab ke liye jo mujhe bhala bura keh rahe hai kyunki meine first res ki - aap ki muh mein aam kachche 😛 🤣

Coming to the update, maybe u didn apologise but still u didn stop ur rants 😡 The update was really good and best part abt it was the action sequence 👏 It was written very well and I could imagine it too 👏 As for losing touch, dont worry, it happens. It did with me as well when I wrote an update for Covenant Anyways I am so happy that Jeh is dead 🤪 and Pia and Abhay r finally together 😳 I loved Piyali Trisha fight 👏 Was very well described. Glad Kabir came to the rescue else Pia would have had to suffer more before Abhay could reach her n plus Abhay himself was injured so badly 😭 But still Abhay didn let his pain come in the way of reaching out to his beloved 😃 I loved the way Pia shot Jeh n I am glad it was her who did that as Jeh had made her suffer so much 😡 Abhay finally killed Jeh 👏 I hope Chandeena r safe Now that Abhiya's family will be complete I hope Chandeena too will be a part of it 😊 I also hope Piyali is safe

Awesome update dear 👏 n now teri chutti chal rahi hai toh I expect an update soon 😛

Awesome part.
I loved the action scenes a lot.
you have written them very well.
t was so nice to see Piya shooting at Jay.
The part was mindblowing.

Nice upd8!! Hm...where are Chandeena?! Waiting fr next chappie!!