New ff-: Fateful night bk-3 Updated pg 25 on 4/03/14

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

update soon romi dear...waiting for u

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

I HATE U ALL.😡..CAUSE I SHOULD BE THE 1ST ONE😭RES-😆

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: koli97
update soon romi dear...waiting for u

Ya di i will try by today positively

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

wow great story plz updates soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Ugggh I wanted to be first !

Manu and all 😡

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Romi romi romi , such a mind boggling upd yaar 🤪 a total pack of love ,thrillers and actions ! 😳

Loved this upd to core and probably the best upd so far 😃 the first scene where piya hears abhay's shout where described very well and hayeee abhay loves piya so much , even after so much hurting he was determined to reach to piya and Jeh abhay fights were fab ! Then also trishna and piyali fights were written well , as I told u u hav to teach me writing fights 😆 and Thank god kabir came on time ! My fav part of all piya killed Jeh with tat bullets , rightly piya deserved to kill Jeh ,he hurtled her so much ! And then the abhiya reunion was written sooo perfectly and yeh Kya piya going home and abhay staying back , I really hope u haven't planted a bomb for your readers ahead here ! 😆 Hope piyali and all are given 😃

And next time sorry ya indirectly sorry bola then ... Remember hammers 😈

Won't tell u to upd soon , cause u hav exam so study meethi churi 🤗

Edited by Mohit-deewani - 12 years ago

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

fab update!! so joy is dead now.oww abhiya fight for each other lovely.trisha and piyali's fight scene was brilliant!!

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611615

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

unres
firstly it was an awesome update..OMG u updatex frm mobile i must appreciate u fr this..
i cant belivw itna bada update ek hi shot me i read it..u know y becz it was too fab..
acha hua piya ne doggie ko maar dala.. haila piyali chandeena ghayab hogaye ??

Edited by nidu_dsena - 12 years ago