Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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Chitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#481

hi dear awesome update loved that abhiya parts beautifully written all over superb update and thanks for pm !! 🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Nice update.
I liked the snowball scene.

and I think this is the maximum amount of descriptions I have read on eyes in one update 😲 🤣

😆 haha...Shreya.. it was that much overrated that it overshadowed every other aspect of the update? I didn't realise! 😲

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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R Mifzala R

@rmifzala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Wow...ur a wonderful writer indu 👏 whenever I read ur updates I get lost in them... 😳
Abhiya part was beautiful...
Just waiting for the last part... 😊

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Loved the scene when abhay pinned pia beteen wall & him holding her wrist..His opens his heart out fully, no modifications, no lies its just him, his feelings, his pain..He was so adorable while asking pia whether he disgust her & snow ball & his smile..!!

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#485

Lovely and beautiful update..!! Thanks for pm :))

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Amazing update abhay n pia scene r amazing

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#487

incredible update indu...sorry like button isnt working...my god...wowy...abhay's changing and here comes faltu ppl jo vampires ko mareinge lekin khud mar jayeinge...arnab ka case to mujhe aaj tak kisi bhi story me nai smjh aya 🤣 akhir ye insan chahta kya hai...so looks like piya has made her final decision...and then there is chanda mama and raja babu 😆 planning against abhay...par dar k aage jeet hai aur pyaar kiya to darna kya...

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Superb mindblowing update
'm rly curious to know the mystery
thanks for pm
plz continue soon

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Mind blowing update indu ...

I just adore the abhiya scenes spl the snow one

Awww haseena iz darling so much care abt abhay so opp to chand

Well i must say how did u manage to convey so much in just one update ... well done

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Anita

@AnnetteSpring

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Posted: 10 years ago

#490

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I read the whole story and WoW ! This is an awesome story dear Indu. 👏

The concept is just intimidating , and yet alluring . Its totally captivating and still just like its title - it is forbidden.

Ofcourse you have been told that many a times but I don't think you wudn't like to hear it again that you have an amazing writing style.Keep it up 👍🏼

The words that you chose to convey the story make it too easy to visualise the scenes.

I like Abhay and Oedipus. I can't actually say why I like Oedipus , maybe its due to his humorous nature donno , but I like him.

From the previous chapters I loved the part where Piya makes it clear in her head that Abhay is a preadtor , yes , but he is not a devil .And her resolve that she would try her best to tame him. I totally heart that part. ❤️

And this chapter , Oh God ! it has covered so many things that its difficult to say which was the best.

I feel sad for Rohan . He is in for a heartbreak.

Its surprising how love changes so many things. I don't think Abhay has ever justified his actions , his kills before , but he has now come a far way from the beast that he was. A predator he always was and he can't change that but now he is trying to act kind and that itself speaks volumes about his longing to be loved.

I loved the snowball scene that was very very beautifully described . 👏

I liked this one too.

And Piya was glad to see him feel her emotions and understand her fears to the extent and accept her warning.

Simple line but lovely , completely portrays the love that Abhay feels for Piya.

I feel that Chand doesn't actually hate Abhay and his reactions are the outcome of jealousy that he feels due to the bond between Oedipus and Abhay. I may be wrong but that is what I feel.

Who is going to know about Abhay first ? Rohan or Arnab ?

I love this story totally and there is only one more chapter left

But please update sooner, Indu , please.

And one more thing , sorry for replying so late , I am kind of busy with a clg group project. 😳

Edited by 2Obsessed - 10 years ago