Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26 - Page 47

Originally posted by: Dark.Desires

It was so awesome update di

Loved it

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

<font size="4">awesome i read all the chapters do update next ones soon 👍🏼</font>

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

It's amazingly penned!!

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

I am really curious to know more about Oedipus 🤔 He is certainly not someone who can be brushed aside and it is obvious there are higher stakes involved where he is concerned. Indeed! There is nothing comforting about Oedipus! He is trouble. To whom and we will know sooner!

Chand's edgy behavior was testimony enough for that. He is so insecure where Abhay is concerned and from Chand's tone it seemed to imply that he was desperate to stake his claim on Abhay and though he emphasised this to Oedipus repeatedly the uncertainty reflected in his words for no matter what Chand has to say, at the end its Oedipus who will have his say. Yes. I am glad to see you have got it exactly how it is! 👏Chand is desperate! Why? Now that has a reason!

And Oedipus has the power over Abhay here. And you will find soon that's not completely for no reason.

His cool demeanor was enough to suggest that he cared a darn for Chand's threat for he is confident its his will that shall be fulfilled and Abhay will yield to him and it is he who has the power over him. This really frightens me now hmm...I did say wait. You will see the whole picture!

I liked Rohan and Pia's friendship. Rohan's feelings for Pia may be more than just the platonic norms of friendship but he is willing to give her space and I guess even Pia is aware of this. We all have one person in whom we can confide all our deepest secrets, something we cannot do with our family even. We know this person will not judge us and neither will that person press you to share your problems not unless they know their friend wants to share it but are not able to.

Thank you so much! Means lot to me. 😳

Because sadly,there aren't many who acknowledge it. 😔 although their relation is the most strongest n purest.

Exactly so. That's how the relation is between them! They understand eachother well. And it doesn't always mean that only the person you love will understand you better and not someone who is close to you as well!

Is Nitin a slayer? 😲 Not able to recollect if you had mentioned him in your previous update but his investigation may shed light on the truth and what will happen then? umm..not exactly. I will explain that in the next chapter. No. I have not mentioned him before. This is the first time. But he will carry an important role!

Well this makes Abhiya relation truly forbidden here for her family this is a reality they had never fathomed staying in the safety of their human world. They had never had a brush with the supernatural all their life but their daughter will drag them right into the center of it. Neither will the supernatural world accept a human into their folds.

Mmm...yeah. well if you see..their relation was never something that falls in the normal realm. It was n will always be forbidden considering their different origins!

And you are correct. Her family had had no relation with the supernatural world. At least it did not had so far. But now when their daughter had stepped into that forbidden line, danger is bound to encircle them as well!

About the three boys who got injured was it Abhay or Oedipus who hurt them? I find it hard to believe Abhay has done it since Pia had got to him before. I doubt if he would go back to being a monster but from what Animesh said that seems to point at him. I could sense Pia's fear when she confirmed that those brutal killings could be the work of someone who resembled a human but was not one. And did I sense a heartbreak or was I reading too much into the lines? 😕

Heartbreak yes. There's bound to be one. Is it not?

Rohan has certainly noticed something is off with Pia and I wonder when he will get to know about Abhay.

He will know and i'm afraid, it will be in the most traumatic of situations!

I loved the last scene when Abhay cornered her in the changing room 👏 Very well written! And when Abhay confessed he did not wish to hurt to them but he did. Is he referring to that rampage or the recent incident?😕

Yes. That's exactly what he meant. The recent.

This story still has so much to tell. I know u intend to finish it off in a chapter or two and will miss this

Hmm...yeah. maybe it has. Or maybe it's better if I keep few things under wrap as it is?! 🤔 Donno...but i think the timing is apt for the end. What do you say?

P.S - Please post a summary before you update the next part. Just a few lines. Since this has been updated after a long time.

Yeah sure. I can do that in the pm as well? 😳

Waiting eagerly for the next part 😃 and so sorry for the late comments

Originally posted by: archiesview

Read the whole story today! Very interesting! Please update soon.

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Superb update

Oedipus is freaking me out

He creepy n scary

I loved the intense abhiya scene

Sorry for late reply

It is superb and written very well

Love how u write