Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26 - Page 50

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oopsie 😲 Am late So sorry Indu I thought I had commented but forgot as usual 😭

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Odepius is one helluva scary guy 😆 Well if he can control Chand then he must be 😉 Wonder how Abhay's equation with him is 😕

I liked the Abhiya scene that followed. I love the way u have depicted Pia's conflicting emotions. So it was Abhay indeed who hurt those boys? But though I dont approve of his actions I understand why he reacted like that. Being a supernatural, all ur senses and emotions are heightened, be it love, lust, anger or passion. So its not unexpected if Abhay lost his cool so soon but that is no justification for him to do what he did. Pia will obviously despise him for what he did. She despises him and loves him at the same time and she is not sure what she should feel for Abhay.

Arnab has called in the hunters 😳 There will be bloodshed for sure 🤔 If the hunters were not enough we have police too 😲 So the CPO is aware of the supernatural world and he is gathering his battalion.

Piya was astonished to realise Abhay had tried to be nice to those who were trying to annoy him and it must have taken paramount patience on his part. And this is new to Abhay as well. Everything in his life changed the moment Pia stepped into it. He is confused to see this change in himself for he is not supposed to feel any of it. He is a born monster who has never known compassion. Pia is not sure if she should believe him or not. Was this really the Abhay she had known all along?

Misha indeed saw Abhiya together but well she cant trust even her supersharp senses under the influence of alcohol 😛

Pia knows she is irrevocably in love with a monster but the fact that this monster does not want to be a monster because of her has left a deep impact on her and she is now certain she would only ever want him. Despite that she will probably never be at peace knowing the person she loves is nature's deadliest predator and its in his nature to kill. He may not kill another being out of greed or any other human weakness but because that was what he was destined to be. Unlike a human he knows no treachery. He is what he is and he doesn't bother to hide it. It is ironic indeed that humans deem a vampire as a monster because they hunt them for survival but what about them? They commit such heinous crimes against their own kind! Who is the real monster?

Pia loves Abhay and if Abhay were ever to kill another human being, even though she had no part in it, she would feel guilty for standing by and watching in silence. But would she judge Abhay for that when she knew that was what he was? He had no choice but how will her conscience let her accept it? She will never be able to. She can't live without Abhay and she can't live with accepting his reality. You have brought out this part beautifully 👏

Rohan's distress is justified. He has known Pia for probably all his life and its natural for one to assume he knows everything about his friend. But it would be unsettling for him if he were to discover that there is another facet to his friend, something he hadn't seen. BTW why did Kabir ask him to bring Pia and where?

The next Abhiya scene reminded me of my all time fav quote by Rumi. Pia wants nothing more than to be in a world beyond rights and wrongs where the only reality was Abhay and her being together, not bound by any rules. Abhay craves for her love and acceptance and he wants to know if she will ever see him like how she would see someone dear to her - with love and affection. He had never known what it meant but that all changed after he knew her. His whole world had shifted and there was no going back. He cannot change overnight but yet he would try, for her and this was a start. Loved their small moment of happiness and normalcy. You have brought it out very well 👏

I now get it why Odepius was so keen in Abhay. He had seen a shadow of his former self in Abhay and he wanted to mold him in his image like his sire. He will be the last person to be happy on seeing this change in him. I am scared as to what he will do now

Haseena is certainly an intelligent woman 😉 Even if he wasn't willing to spill the beans she made him to 😆 What did Chand discuss with his Highness btw? 😲 He is certainly intimated by Odepius and he is also jealous coz Abhay listens to Odepius.

Its natural Arnab is worried for his daughter and to top it off, the place is plagued by all sorts of monsters.

Chand did reveal what happened and he was expecting Haseena to lash out at him even but she didn't. I am certain Haseena doesn't want to waste her time doing that and I am sure she is wondering how to control the situation.

It is natural for Abhay to wonder if Pia is real or not. He had probably not imagined anything could change his life so drastically let alone anyone. Sometimes he wonders if she is a figment of his imagination that will disappear any moment just the way it appeared to him. Loved that part.

Haseena and Odepius seem to be a team rather than Chand and her. I had an inkling she will approach him and she did. Haseena's past was tragic and its sad she saw her family die before her and her only child She certainly did not deserve that but after turning into an immortal she had to make peace with her past coz immortality could wear you out and that is what she did. But when Abhay came into her life she saw a glimpse of her past in him. Being a vampire it was not possible for her to express her emotions like a human could and she probably even kept them at bay but she loved Abhay like a son and she would do anything to keep him safe. Abhay is Highness' son? 😲 Shoot, this spells doom and I am certain Highness is coming back to claim him. Firstly why did Chand bring Abhay and what was his past exactly? I hope you reveal the mystery in ur next update.

So finally the hunters and police are catching up to hunt down Abhay? Abhiya's beautiful moment was broken by a siren and though this could mean anything as disasters happen at any point in time, Pia knew what this could mean. She could sense the danger approaching them and I am eager to know how Abhiya will get out of this mess.

It was good reading this after a long time Indu 😊 Has to be your longest single update I suppose but loved reading it, esp the Abhiya part. For most part, they spoke their eyes and sometimes you dont really need words to express your feelings. Well done 👏 Waiting to read the next update 😃
Edited by FieryHeart - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update! You described abhay and piya's feelings for each other so well😳
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Res I think I had never read it before, but I will read it soon. Thanks for the pm.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 1-3 Mindblowing start..I was totally blown away..Abhay behind pia but want her blood but when given a chance he just couldnot..During rehearsal he ws always there..Lastly pia's word hurt..Luved d part where he brok the wall
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Chapter-4 Pia in her heart & mind fight..Haseena stated the obvious things..But abhay in his anger,fury,hurted state going to destroy human lives..Pia cames to prevent but he charge on her..He is hurt by her rejection..Pis's confession clams him down
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Am still reading this story.. After got pm i started reading this story & I have read upto ch-4 & commented also... Rest, i need time to read it... As soon as i read it, will comment ::)) :-D
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Posted: 10 years ago

WOW!! Outstanding update...I loved it...sorry for late comment... I am not well...just returned to IF after 23 days...

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I read all the chapters in a go and Indu di its a beautiful concept. 👏

Abhiya can't stay away from each other even if they know that their relationship will not be acceptable by anyone. Its like the heart wants what the heart wants.

In a long time Abhay has found someone that doesn't loathe him for what he is and he doesn't want to let go of that angel - Piya.
I loved the light moment that they shared in the snow. 😳
You have described it so nicely that I cud imagine Abhiya and now I am missing them all over again.

I don't like Chand here. Why does he hate Abhay so much ? 😡

OMG the whole of Dehradoon is now looking for Abhay , but then ofcourse he has harmed innocent people so that is understood. But he did feel guilty about it and that too for the first time.
So, Piya's love is helping him keep his beast in control.

I hope that Abhiya have a happy ending here.
Plz update soon Indu di.

- Manisha 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter-5 Chand hate abhay, infact loath him to the core... So much hatred.. Haseena pondering over her decision to left pia alone with Abhay... Arnav also worried about pia... Abhay-pia with each other, so peaceful moments

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