Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

chapter-6 so beautiful chapter... !! Loved every scene of abhay & pia to the core..All is so magical.. He is melting towards her... He is understanding, giving her dress & space... And then looking at her ::)))

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Chapter-7 thats a dream... But a horrible dream... Shook pia to the core.. Nice Constrast between her worlds, which she lives in & which is her world, life everything, her abhay..

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Chapter-8 abhay leaved her, not even came for once... Pia's state so painful...She needs him...Pia's family very supportive.. And that her friend, sry forgt his name,love pia too much.. Feel bad fr hIm

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Chapter-9 abhay readed her thoughts & dreams thats why he distance himself from her... Both of them are suffering... Leader & chand's convo superb.. ...collage scene horrible... Lastly pia abhay's faceoff

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Anita

@AnnetteSpring

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Comments updated pg 76 😊

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Sweety u made my day😃 I was anxiously waiting for dis1 . Amazing update n hats off to u 👏. Happy to see abhay n piya together but da hanging ending vil keep us on our toes😉

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#507

Hey.. Hello.. Hi... Where u dear?? 😭 waiting for the update ... Please give.. 😳

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kiara97

@kiara97

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Posted: 9 years ago

#508

Hi, It's been so long since you gave an update for this ff. Please continue soon... I'm really eager to read further..

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: kiara97
Hi, It's been so long since you gave an update for this ff. Please continue soon... I'm really eager to read further..

🤗 oh sweetheart. .. yes I have left this hanging for a long long time and trust me it's next on my update list b'coz I want to finish this one first. Just 1 update left and keeping you guys waited doesn't make me feel good so I had to ! 😳 I'll. Promise. The end is clear in my head and long back thought out, now what's left is giving it words! :)

P.S. Thanks for the push, I do need it at times dear ! 😉