Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Grrr 😡I hate u 😭

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Brilliant update Indu.The passion of the dark luv story...i dont have words to say how beautifully u have described it.Pia declaring Abhay as her fate & future...wonderfully described.Piya's heartfelt words were able to reach out to her dark knights dead heart...it caused a stir in his long forgotten and locked emotions...making him hold her in his arms..never to let go.In a fraction of a second...Abhiya have gone somewhere far away from the daily mundane human life.I'm damn eager for next update...Abhay's behaviour and reaction towards Piya now would be interesting to read

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captainplus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

sorry 4r commenting late 😳 now a days m abit busy

awesome update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

abhiya part was wonderful 👏 👍🏼

lo❤️ed it ! 😊

hope rohan n arnab don't find piya soon ...

in b/w were did abhay took piya ??? 😕

tanks 4r the pm 😊

n keep up this good work 👍🏼

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

superb piece of writing.haseenas worry,chands cold behaviour,arnab concern,alina consoling her bro and above all da intensity and pull of attraction between predator and prey made it a wonderful update.thanx for pm and continuesoon.

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

superb piece of writing.haseenas worry,chands cold behaviour,arnabs concern,rohans emotional turmoil,alina cosoling rohan and above all da un breakable and eternal bond between predator and its prey made this a wonderful update.thanx for pm and continue soon.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Chapter updated!!! 😳

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

awwsum...pls updt soon...we cant wait to read more...1 second is likd eternity...jaldi updt krna...thnks for the pm

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Brilliant brilliant brilliant *bows*

Uff man, how do you paint a picture like that with words? I so envy you right now. You are so damn good!!!
I am worried coz of Chand though.

Naah... Ur freedom of speech is there and so is my freedom of expression ;)