OMG OMG OMG 😲 Have I actually beaten Tora in doing the first res for Indu's works? 😲
*Manasa is very very happy*
Aww Tora dont feel sad
Indu it saddens me when u put ur updates down specifically for this OS dear It is a classic piece of writing I have ever come across be it in IF or anywhere else If u feel this isn't good then what should a mediocre writer like me feel about my crappy stuff? 😭 Kuch toh reham karo This OS is one of all my time fav reads n I wonder how u call urself average when ur so gifted? 😳 Ur writings r so effective in places that a reader is enforced to keep themselves in the character's shoes n feel every emotion n they go through 👏 which is a near impossible feat to achieve for any writer but u do it seamlessly ⭐️ Like Shreya said u paint the picture for the readers with ur words 😃 I wonder what a mediocre writer like myself was even thinking when I agreed to do joint updates with u coz I will only screw ur magnificent works with my crappy writing
U want me to leave two words? 😲 Be prepared for an essay 😆 😛
I loved Chandeeena convo 👏 I liked the way u depicted their thoughts out here. Haseena is an affectionate mother figure for Abhbay whereas Chand always wanted him for his own selfish reasons I know Haseena's top priority will always be Abhay but the mother in her fears for Pia's well being as well. She knows she has coaxed Pia into walk headlong into a fire pitt which will only destroy anyone n anything within the vicinity but she also knows that Pia is the only one who can put out the fire 😳 Abhay seems very important to his Highness to an extent that all his crimes r forgiven w/o Abhay having to bear any consequences for his actions 😕 Does Chand despise him bcoz Abhay holds a special place with Highness? Seems like that could be the only reason for now. But there could be more as well. Haseena knows Chand hates Abhay though Chand tries to maintain a diplomatic stance abt it 😕 Like Chand said vampires r nothing but amoral beasts who feel no emotions but they forget that they r driven in instincts n as such they will always have one emotion in them - which is aggression that could take any form Chand wants Abhay to leave Dehradun but looks like Abhay made his own plans😉
Arnab surely is right in getting concerned for Pia despite Madhu's reassurances 😕 He knows his daughter very well n knows she is the not the one who will ever be reckless. He wants to set out to search for her n now I am kinda scared for him. Abhay is too possessive abt Pia n I am scared if he will hurt Arnab if he tries to take Pia away
I kinda dont like Rohan here 😡 I know the guy is sweet n all but kya karen? I dont like any kinda obstacles in Abhiya's way 😛 He saw the love in Pia's eyes but he also realised it wasn for him n I am glad there is no confusion regarding this 😛 He knows though Pia is somewhere around but she is far out of his reach I hope he will not set out to seek her but something tells me he will 😛 But he is holding onto false hopes. I dread the day he realises Pia will never reciprocate to his feelings
The Abhiya part was pure classic ⭐️ Brilliantly written. While reading I thought Chandeena part will be the best part of this update but somehow how much ever brilliantly u write other parts, Abhiya steal the show always 👏 Pia knows Abhay has now calmed down n is no more furious at her 😳 Before Abhay is a person who is his prey but his salvation as well. The beast in him wonders y he is not able to harm her n say he does, will he ever be able to see the wonder the beautiful eyes beheld, the love - a feeling alien to a monster such as himself, meant for him? But he knows he can never ever do that for she has become the sole reason of his existence now n whether he will ever be able to have her for himself or not he can never afford to lose her 😳 She is the only one to evoke the weakness in him which makes him less beastly n more close to being human 😳 Their love is forbidden - one personifies life n the other death n this was beautifully explained here 👏 Gosh Indu how do u manage to steal my breath away with ur brilliant display of emotions with words? 👏 The moment where Pia tells Abhay that their fates r entwined n no matter the price she has to pay, all she wants is him n this is the moment Abhay makes his choice as well 😳 So poignant, yet so passionate n intense 👏 Indu if my vocab was as good as yours, trust me my praise for ur update would have outrun ur update itself 😉
I wish I could say this was mindblowing, fantastic etc etc but my words r lame in front of ur brilliance 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Edited by ..mandy.. - 12 years ago
Am not updating my OS anytime before 20th 🤣 
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