Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Just continue dear...will like to read..

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
I hate you guys 😡

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Okay, Now I really wanna bang you :x
do you know I waited all day yesterday for your update?
sorry dear,bt u know the reason now. :( Late latif :/

and then you say I don't like this update... Uff stay away from Mandy... You are getting her disease!
😆 there's no need!i assure u!😆

Now coming to the update.
I like Haseena's character here. She clearly cares for Pia. I also liked the way you described Abhay's story... So compelling!!
And then Pia runs to Abhay... He accepts her apology...
The whole thing was written so well!
Going to read again... This one and Mandy's Together, Forever, are my fav OS.
Love you for this :D
thank you dear. I am humbled. 😳
PS. I swear I was gonna pm u to update :P

you can..Dear..anytime.. 😉love you too!🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: captainplus

awesome update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
thank you dear.😳
this has bcom 1 of my favourites 😊

lo❤️ed the way u have described everything soo beautifully 👍🏼bt

ur words were really magical ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

m lo❤️ing this story along wit its every dailog

u deffinately deserve a huge round of applause

👏

thanks a ton dear. I am happy that i could please you.😳
n also a lots n lots of hugs

🤗

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bt plz take care tat arnab dobrial ( 😡 can't stand this man ! 😡 😡 ) doesn't reach abhiya very soon n take piya away 4m abhay
ok dear.well lets see what happens. And as for arnab he is just a father dear...
plzzz

in b/w were is haseena's chand ? behind the clouds ? 😆

you will know that soon!
anyways stop saying sorry 4r being late or anything else

if we get an update like this one , ten our waiting is deffinately worth

n u don't need 2 b sorry 😊

thanks dear bt i hate to keep you all waiting..bt couldnt help it due to my tight scedule..
tanks 4r the pm 😊

you are most welcome dear..🤗 🤗

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bookworm-ALS--

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

YOU CHANGED YOUR USERNAME!!!!!

i got Mandy's changed too. Only she did it before I could offer her any interesting ones. Sigh.

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
YOU CHANGED YOUR USERNAME!!!!!

i got Mandy's changed too. Only she did it before I could offer her any interesting ones. Sigh.

Yes!!!😉
i know.she told me! 😉poor girl..
that was expected.i knew she wouldnt go beyond mandy!😆

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Yours is intriguing. Bleak house. Who calls a house bleak? Is it black or bleak?
Black house? Doesnt make sense either. Black mouse? Is that what you were aiming for?
I've heard of plenty of black mice. Do u like Tome and Jerry?

*sorry, I'm rambling , lol.

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Indu

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Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Yours is intriguing. Bleak house. Who calls a house bleak? Is it black or bleak?
Black house? Doesnt make sense either. Black mouse? Is that what you were aiming for?
I've heard of plenty of black mice. Do u like Tome and Jerry?

*sorry, I'm rambling , lol.

'bleak house' is one of Sir Charles Dicken's famous novel. It is his artistic masterpiece! 😳 here the word 'bleak' is symbolic..
its ok. Yes i do! Y?

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Newton123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Go 4 it indu will be waiting 4 it

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Wow...brilliant update.Pia went to Abhay leaving her fear and insecurities behind.Despite seeing Abhay's beastly appearance...she didn't back off...she went forward and hugged him.In the end Abhay also started feeling some emotions...his blue eyes and somewhat lively face proved that. wonderful!! u said it even more beautifully!! yes the beauty has embrassed the beast n his darkness. now she wouldnot care whether it destroys her...😳
U've written it beautifully.Will be waiting for next part

thank you dear. glad you found it so.😳 next part is coming soon!! 😊

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update indu
it was written so beautifully how pia felt and how she managed to stop him...it was awsum
thanks for pm

thanks a lot megha. am happy to know that you liked it. 😳 u'r welcome! 😊

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
finally pia get hold over head and listen to her brain... nice part... i like haseena character more...

thanks trishna. 😊

Originally posted by: koli97
its wonderful Indu...lovely every feelings...wowww Pia explan her feeling & Abhay's dead heart touch it😊...continue asap

thanks dear. will continue asap! 😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

thanks alisia..😳

Originally posted by: 45Pinky
Wonderful update !👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 thanks a ton pinky..😳
I loved Haseena's character in this ! glad you did! 😊
The way she came and showed Pia the light was beautifully written.
I was so happy when Pia told Haseena to take her to Abhay !
The end was the bestie of the best ! When she went and hugged him and Abhay feeling those emotions were fabulous ! am happy that you liked it soo much... thanks again dear...😳
Thanks for the pm and will be eagerly waiting for the next part !

welcome..🤗

Originally posted by: barki
wow love it😊

thank you..😳

Originally posted by: vmpy
outstanding and breathtaking update. thank you dear..😳
love predominated over death i loved this line myself...
omg dis is it.im just loving this os. thanx for pm.continue soon.

u'r welcome..will update tomorrow.😊

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
ok so where has that hammer disappered which was kept for mandy...It is high time to use it on u too😡 juhi..that hammer is mine! so it will listen only to me dear! 😈 😛 pta nai logon ko kya ho gaya hai...yahan log tarif pe tarif kiye ja rahe hain aur ye madam hain ki...uff kuch nai ho sakta iska bhi...!! hey na..then rehne do na dear...😆
man it was so beautifully written and u are saying it was not good😲u r definetely mad...! i know that ! 😆
everything was so well explained...I loved haseena and pia's part...and the last part where pia asks forgiveness and he forgives her too... i was not satisfied anyway you liked it that is a big thing...😊 thank you...😳
waiting for more😳

thank you dishu..😳

thank you.😊

thanks a ton for loving it dear..glad i could portray it well...😳 will definitely pm you! 😊

thanks aqui..😳

thanks aditi...i tried my best..glad you liked it dear..😳

thanks a lot beenish..😳 will update real soon..😊

thanks gargi dear...🤗 i am already continuing it dear..😆.you have missed that i guess...😛

thanks meera..i'm happy that you like it...😳

thanks hema...😳

thanks a lot dear..and you'r welcome.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome part indu
Pia disapproved Abhay & later on harems's explanation she understood.Abhay
And finally wid her luv she was able to tame wild beast Abhay

thanks a lot shrish..😳