Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
I hate you guys 😡 Feelings mutual with Tora

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Okay, Now I really wanna bang you :x
do you know I waited all day yesterday for your update?
Late latif :/ I was abt to as well but I knew she was busy in the eve n maybe she tired in the night

and then you say I don't like this update... Uff stay away from Mandy... You are getting her disease!

Now I am being blamed for this? Ugh! She is worse than me at this 🤢 She writes so beautifully n some words I need to scout the dictionary to understand the meaning 😕 She is way better than me n I defo dont understand y she does this all the time!

@Indu - Am so mad at u for saying this is bad tat I will not update any of my works anytime soon Had enough of hearing u say ur brilliant work is crap! 😭

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

finally pia get hold over head and listen to her brain... nice part... i like haseena character more...

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

its wonderful Indu...lovely every feelings...wowww Pia explan her feeling & Abhay's dead heart touch it😊...continue asap

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: mandy1024

@Red, I love Mini devil when she is applying her antics on someone else and NOT ME... muahahahaha 😈 🤣

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

First of all woman what is with you didn't like your update 😳 have you admit yourself in Mandy Im a terrible writer Asylum? 😳 🤣

the update brought tears in my eyes and I had to control it with great efforts because im at work. it was emotionally soo charged and poetic. I felt like im reading some writeup from victorian era. you followed victorian poetic style and the writing has Shakespeare touch on that. kudos 👏 👏

Abhay's wrath, his immense pain and intensive love and failure was beautifully written and when PIya didn't care about herself and wanted to save not just the humans but Abhay himself it was even more beautiful and so emotional.it was soo heart wrenching and too deep.. i cant describe in words how much i loved that and thats why instantly commenting.. i cant wait for the next update... 😳

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Polly.P

@Polly.P

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Wonderful update !👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I loved Haseena's character in this !
The way she came and showed Pia the light was beautifully written.
I was so happy when Pia told Haseena to take her to Abhay !
The end was the bestie of the best ! When she went and hugged him and Abhay feeling those emotions were fabulous !
Thanks for the pm and will be eagerly waiting for the next part !

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

outstanding and breathtaking update.love predominated over death omg dis is it.im just loving this os.thanx for pm.continue soon.

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

ok so where has that hammer disappered which was kept for mandy...It is high time to use it on u too😡 pta nai logon ko kya ho gaya hai...yahan log tarif pe tarif kiye ja rahe hain aur ye madam hain ki...uff kuch nai ho sakta iska bhi...!!

man it was so beautifully written and u are saying it was not good😲u r definetely mad...!

everything was so well explained...I loved haseena and pia's part...and the last part where pia asks forgiveness and he forgives her too...

waiting for more😳