Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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@abhaylovepia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

nice update
but abhay drink a lot two or three humans per day 🤣
omg 🤣
the world is going to end ho humans🤢

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DestroyedInLove

@DestroyedInLove

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Awesome...heart touching update...i can feel Abhay's pain & love...u have written so beautifully...i really loved it...i felt like crying for Abhiya...Plz PM me..i want to read this beautiful FF..

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-Alone-

@-Alone-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Aww beautiful update, Loved it the way u described. It was so touchy . Gr8 job dear...

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

indu fabulous update yar
just loved this os
poor piya how much she tried she always belong to abhay
haseena and piya converstn scene awsome
so arnab must be try to locate piya?
wonderful description you give of abhiya scene
abhiya felt so much pain
waiting eagerly for next part
cont soon

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Asandhimitra

@LadyMacbeth

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Read the first part , it's super amazing . YOU CAN WRITE ! 👏

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

fabulous update
like pia & haseena convo
haseena is very caring
everything is very beautifully described
like end part
continu asap

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Syed695

@Syed695

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Lovly Update...! Lovly description of emotion and dialogues...Thanks for the PM~!

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Awesome part indu
Pia disapproved Abhay & later on harems's explanation she understood.Abhay
And finally wid her luv she was able to tame wild beast Abhay

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Wow dat was fab.loved it.abhiya rox

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

NOTE:

guys the response that i got for this OS was overwhelming..i'm truly Greatful to all of you for loving and appreciating it. also it is my first time writing a vampire story and is close to my heart. 😳

the story is coming to its closure,only 2/3 more updates left. though i have a plot in mind which if implemented can make it to maybe 5 or 6 more but not more than that.. but that depends on you all. if you are eager to read and haven't lost interest only then i will think about it.. so the decision is yours...😳 my readers hold extreme importance to me..😊

So please drop in your views...

thanks...love you all...🤗

--indu