Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26 - Page 13

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

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*shakes indu* INDUUU!!!what have u done?????????? I can't find the right words to describe this update!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

stupendous, fabulous, terrific, poweful, awesome, fabulous, lovely, superb, beautiful,...*tora pants* u've left me breathless!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ thank you so much princess...😳 i tried and am glad that i could please you.😊

and u say it was not up to mark???????????????😡 *shakes indu again*

r u kidding me? I love love love love loved t!!! am really happy you did 😊 but i wasnt sure whether it has come out well. 😕 u painted the picture right in front of my eyes❤️..the dark passion...the rage of the beast in abhay...the anger stemming from the hurt he feels when piya tells him to leave her alone...piya's terror at seeing this uncontrollable monster...yet her helpless attraction towards this blue-eyed enigma...an attraction so strong that she fears that if he leaves her, she will die...👏 thank you.😊

she is attracted and repulsed at the same time, and what can she do, she has lost her heart to the creature of the dark believing him to be the angel, her light.😳.. yes!!

the part where abhay demolishes the room was written so beautifully, u painted such a realistic picture fairy, i had goosebumps reading that part👍🏼...i read and reread and reread the whole update.😛. oh..really?!! 😲

the dark terror, the passion..uff..u have captured it so beautifully re.👏. oh you'r embarrasing me now! 😆

abhay showed himself to piya in his darkest, most terrifying colour now, let's see what piya does now...will she be repulsed by the beast, or will she embrace the hurt and lost person within and bring him out of that monstrous exterior??😳 mm..HE was never a human..so its difficult you see..well lets see what pia does..

waiting to see eagerly!!!update sooonnn..😆 sorry for late.. will update today!

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Arghhh Indu I wish I could chase u with a danda 😡

U stupid, idiotic, moronic woman 😡 Ur saying ur not happy after having written something so amazing? 😡 Honestly woman, if u feel this isn good then I doubt u ever read any of my crappy in ur sane mind 🤢 U call my lousy updates a masterpiece n call ur masterpiece garbage? 😡 Get a life 😡 oh..mansa dear...calm down! 😆you always praise my updates even when they are not worth it! 😛

The update was pure classic 👏 I can never ever dream forget write something so beautiful like as if ur weaving magic with words 👏 Breathtakingly beautiful 👏 It was maginificantly brilliant 👏 I wouldn want to use ordinary words to praise this beautiful piece of writing 👏 thank you dear. i don't know whether i deserve it but still thanks for encouraging me. 😳

I wish I could even analyse this update but I defo dont think I am anyone worthy enough to do it. oh..comeon now don't embarass me! thats too much! 😛

The forbidden attraction between the beauty and the beast was at its best in this update. thank you. 😳 Pia yearning to have Abhay around her, Abhay trying to sort out his messed up emotions which for once dominates over the beast in him. But one day the illusion had to break exposing the beast before the beauty and this is the deciding moment. But is the beauty willing to accept the beast in its gory form? How else will an innocent Pia react on seeing the monstrous form of the man who has captivated her heart? She is afraid, revolted n wants nothing to do with him. Abhay would have probably gotten over his feelings for her, had she not pined for him like a dying man wanting to hold onto his waning lifeline 😳 you have explainded beautifully!

Her rejection unleashed the beast in him making him wonder what could have possibly changed now? When she had accepted him before, why cant she do the same now? For he had always been a beast n not the angel she believed him to be 😭 ya..

Indu I really wish I can use adjectives to praise this but sorry I cannot for even words will fail to express the true brillaince of this amazing update 👏 please stop praising me soo much! i feel uncomfortable dear!

N next time u call ur work crappy, I swear I shall not bother posting my lousy updates anymore n I mean it 😡 Had enough of ur rants 😛 Now update the next part jaldi 😈 will do it today! 😉 and once again thanks for this lovely comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Omg. U gonna update today???

Partyyy

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

RES

ufff u girls 😵

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That was an outstanding piece of writing Indu.. im just speechless how to praise you 😲 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 thank you so much tanzie. 😳 thanks for the appreciation..i'm humbled. 😳

So much emotion in the wording that I had goosebumps while reading it. i read it thrice in one go and twice now again 😆 really ?!! 😲 happy to know you liked it so much but am shocked! 😆 i thought it was rather boring.

perfect capture of forbidden relationship. Pia wanted Abhay to be with her, come back to her again - her forbidden attraction and he came but he is a monster. it baffled her without a doubt and the beast? his strange desire the pull towards the prey which changes his every fiber of emotions shoved him away seeing his true form so heartbreaking but beautiful. i wish i could ever write like you 😳 thank you tanzie. well donno what to say...you'r an ace writer n am still learning..

pleasure reading it and please update soon 🤗 thanks for this wonderful comment. will do today. 🤗

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Omg I am so happy...
Yaaayyy *starts jumping*