Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

SHREYA IT THE BEST UPDATE OF THIS STORY SO FAR👏👏BUT DONT KNOW WHY I FELT READING THIS UPDATE ESPECIALLY THE ANISHA PARTU SHOULD NOT HV KILLED HER😡I AM ANGRY WITH U FR THIS😵ANYWAYS LOVED THE KISSY PART😉AND WHATS WITH ABHAY...I GUESS HE REMEMBER EVERYTHING BUT DOING THIS FR PURPOSE!😛UPDATE SOON😊

Edited by flora212 - 12 years ago

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

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beautiful update shreya👏👏

yar I m so sad u killed Anisha😭😭😭

that gaurav😡😡 ladke hote hi aise hain😡😡 (but yes there are always exceptions😉)

haww...abhay shouldn't have done this😭 y do I feel that abhay remembers everything about last night and is purposely behaving that way...!!

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

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you know what you did? You made me cry!! It takes a whole lot of powerhouse writing to make me cry and ur update did just tht! Sum wounds never heal...true!

Full cmments later..😉

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Gosh Shreya, wat have u done? 😲 n u say u arent happy with this one? 😛 Its the best update of this SS 😳 Detailed comments later.

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Shreya this is ur bestest best update 👏 U mad girl 😡 Stop stealing my lines 😆 They are patented 😛 Even when Pia was away from Abhay she couldn help thinking abt him 😉 It hurts her to realise that she is in love with a guy who is good to her just bcoz he is good to everybody 😕 True love could be a conundrum at times She loves him n she wants him to want her the same way she wants him I am glad she could finally see through his facade of cheery perfectness 😭 Gosh I so didn want Anisha to die Now both Abhiya will blame themselves eternally for her death though there was lil they could have done. If anyone could have helped Anisha then it was Anisha herself U can take a horse to the river but u cannot force it to drink water 😭 Pia's guilt is understandable bcoz she had gone through a rough patch herself n she could see traces of her former self in Anisha but neither does life nor death wait for anybody n thats the bitter truth of our existence Now we all got to know what had destroyed Abhay from within One moment he had a perfect father n a perfect mother making for a perfect happy family and then one bitter truth turns everything upside down When he was trying to get over the trauma of his mother's death he finds out the girl he loved was cheating on him with his own best friend This part actually reminded me of ZNMD. I hope someday he comes to terms with it n confront him rather than run away. He cannot live in the past forever He is a psychiatrist n he shd realise that Gaurav too would have not had a mature sane mind back then as most of our actions in those years of our lives are impulse driven I am not justifying what Gaurav did but still getting over it will help Abhay move on in life. He clearly has feelings for Pia but he cannot acknowledge them as he is still living in his past. He may be the one to solve others problems but he needs to understand that if anyone needs him now, thats his own self 😭 I just loved the way u wrote the moment when they first kissed. Donno y but I find it hard to believe tat u could be just 17 😲 Ur defo an old soul trapped in the body of a teen 😛 I somehow feel Abhay very well remembers what happened between them the previous night but he is denial 😡 n is evading Pia 😭 Pia is leaving n I dont blame her. That last para was written so beautifully 👏 Hats off to u 👏 I can never ever imagine writing something so beautiful n I mean it

FANTASTIC UPDATE 👏 This clearly deserves a standing ovation 👏

Edited by ..mandy.. - 12 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

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it was certainly the best and most emotional update of this SS and also crucial. I knew Anisha will die after hearing Pia is leaving and had that feeling and i really disliked reading it. see the kind of person Abhay and PIa is they will always blame themselves for Anisha's death so you shouldn't have done it. but i understand it was for a reason. Abhay and Pia was somehow very same. lonely and running away from their feelings and that makes them very compatible because they can understand each other very well. the kissing part was steamy and very impressive. im sure Abhay remembers everything though he was drunk and he is in denial because as always he is insecure and scared too. of commitment, heartbreak, relationship and betrayal. because he faced it too much for same reason Pia cant express to Abhay that she loves him. he is just shoving her away. it was very emotional. specially for written by a teenage 😆

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago

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Sona (Samwllms)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

grt updt...felt bad for piya...

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

fabulously fabulous and an emotionally charged update.so nw abhays past is revealed.poor anisha.and da end was a heart wrenching one.waiting for next update.thanx for pm.

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DestroyedInLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Awesome update...what r saying??? I agree with with manasa...it is one of the best updates of this ss...really loved it...felt bad for Abhiya...poor Anisha!!!
Shreya...plz believe me...this update is just perfect...thanks for the PM...

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 12 years ago

#579

oh dammmn . :\ ABHAY . 😡 BTW THE MAKE OUT PART WAS HOT ☺️

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Monami Tasnim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#580

Beautiful update Shreya.Anisha committed suicide...so sad.Abhay had some bad experiences...poor guy.I'm guessing that Abhay remembers everything but is pretending to have forgotten