Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168 - Page 10

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

omg nice part... thnx 4 dis though it is short but nice...

wonder y pia behaving in such arrogant way and pretent to be neird... may be she has her own reason... plz update soon...
and ya req... plz keep ur text font size -1 less plz... as it take lot effort to read... i want to tell dis to u earlier also but nw i dont want to miss single letter of dis ff

Originally posted by: koli97

nice...why pia soo different behaviour wish 2 know wht happen with pia?plzz continuee asap😊

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

that was amazing...u knw there was a part in the ch wich felt so similar to...to...HITLER hope u knw wat...bt honestly very wel written😳

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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wonderful start shreya!! 👏 the title is apt !! you knw wat? the first tym wen I saw this title of ur's the name just kept popping up whether I ws in class..studying, or working ...this name never left me! 😆 and many tyms I ws surprisd n wonderd where have I heard this name n then I rememberd 'oh..this 1 is d name of shreya's new ff.!..n this went on for lyk 3days!! 😛 just thot of telling u this coz the name is soo unique here dat It kept cuming bck n my mind again n again!!! so bravo for d title specially!!! 👏
now coming to the update- hm..so pia apparently seems quite,bit arrogant n selfish!! but I guess there is mre to d story...sumthng that has changd her...nt her ranks coz if it had been just ranks r being d topper then she wud have changd long bck and nt frm class ten!! so I think I shud better wait for d story to unfold!! abhay n the other hand seems nyc n nt that complicated..though I guess we myt see mre shades of his character n future!! bt ya I myt b wrng too ! a/w the update mytb short bt was brilliant! I liked the tensed air surrounding pia n a bit of mystry regarding her behaviour!! bt mre than dat it reminded me of my school days!!! 😳 loved the way u portrayd this whole thing!! 👍🏼overall just beautiful !!!⭐️ nw am mre eager for the next chapter...plz update asap!! p.s. thanks for d pm dear. 😊

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Interesting update⭐️ 👏

gud abhay n snobbish pia - seems different n interesting, 😉

but i think der is more story behind pia's behavior of being snob. 😃

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

interesting start shreya😊...waiting to see how the story unfolds...hmmm they are magnetic dipoles indeed😆...wonder what makes piya the way she is...her mother?? or is there something else as well?😕

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wonderful update.abhay sympathasised with pia & let her have d 1st position bt pia snubbed him.her mother might be the reason of her snobbish behaviour.thanx 4 pm

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu

Short but a faadu update shreya.The pace was a bit fast i felt.But ofcus da update described pia's snobbish n jealous behaviour quite well.Poor abhay,despite of sacrificing,got nothing but pia's endless taunts.Surely,der must be some reason 4 it.Pia's mom symbolized a typical parent.Waiting 4 next update..:-)

Originally posted by: bellaaa

shreya interesting start...poor abhay he tried to help piya but she remain like a stone hearted but there must be some reason like kanir said she was not like this before...but really piya being such a rude to abhay...both are opposite...cont soon

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Wow dat was amazing update shreya! Reminded me of my school days jab logon ko ghalat fehmi thi ki mujhe Bio padhne ke siva aur kuch nahi aata! Lol
Poor abhay! He gave up his position 4 Piya n she is still d same! Now i m pretty sure dat Abhay will beat her in 12th.chalo dekhte hain!
Really liked this school wala concept!