Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

V v v nice.abhay nd piya r just opposite of each other.thanx for pm continue soon.

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow great story plz update soon
it's an ama\zing story to read
thanks for the pm

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megha sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

wonderful update.abhay sympathasised with pia & let her have d 1st position bt pia snubbed him.her mother might be the reason of her snobbish behaviour.thanx 4 pm

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.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Short but a faadu update shreya.The pace was a bit fast i felt.But ofcus da update described pia's snobbish n jealous behaviour quite well.Poor abhay,despite of sacrificing,got nothing but pia's endless taunts.Surely,der must be some reason 4 it.Pia's mom symbolized a typical parent.Waiting 4 next update..:-)

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Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Wowww Its BEAUTIFUL:-):-):-) I loved it:-):-):-) :-):-):-) update soon.,...

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bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

shreya interesting start...poor abhay he tried to help piya but she remain like a stone hearted but there must be some reason like kanir said she was not like this before...but really piya being such a rude to abhay...both are opposite...cont soon

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kirti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Wow dat was amazing update shreya! Reminded me of my school days jab logon ko ghalat fehmi thi ki mujhe Bio padhne ke siva aur kuch nahi aata! Lol
Poor abhay! He gave up his position 4 Piya n she is still d same! Now i m pretty sure dat Abhay will beat her in 12th.chalo dekhte hain!
Really liked this school wala concept!

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zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

nice update

like pia's character

try to continu soon

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pia surve

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

nice update yr! seems lyk pia's mom is nt gud wid her! poor girl!! i hope abhay will understand her problem soon! thax fr pm!

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--geny--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

mindblowing peaice of writing...js fab...awesm start..abhiya frm school...ye pia ki mom...i thught she is orphan girl...n active n bubbly n mastkhor sweet...kuch nya dekhne ko mila..plz cont.shreyu.