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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVELY CS! Waiting 4 d story!
Thanks 4 d PM!
Hav u discontinued ur 1st ff?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

LOVELY CS! Waiting 4 d story!
Thanks 4 d PM!
Hav u discontinued ur 1st ff?

Thank u 😊 No i have not discontinued it but i will update it a little later .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi so without further delay here is the first chapter: Hope u will all like it .😊

First chapter: Welcome back😊

Scene: Dobriyal house

Arnab (shouting) – Are madhu , panchi kaha ho tum log . jaldi karo pia ka flight kabka land hogaya hoga. Madhu…….

Madhu (coming down) – offo arnab , kyu chilla rahe ho me aa rahi hoon baba. Panchi jaldi karo .

Panchi – Yes mama . Mom and dad check me out.

Madhu and arnab turn around and see their simple panchi in a totally new avatar.

Madhu – wow panchi mera beta u r looking absolutely beautiful . mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri beti itni khubsurat hain kyu arnab?😆

Arnab – haan me bhi chauk gaya hoon.🤣

Panchi (laughing)- Ha!ha! very funny ab chaliye pia aa chuki hogi. And they leave for airport.

Scene changes : Raichand house

Misha (shouting at the top of her voice) – Mom ,mera naashta ….

Haseena – ye lo beta aur kabir aur abhay kaha hai ? who abhi tak jaage nahi ?

Misha – ho sakta hain mom . wo dono shayad … shayad…shayad

Haseena – kya?😕

Misha – Apne dreamgirls ke dreamland me kho rahe honge haha (laughing) Mom look at ur face .😆

Haseena – tum aur tumare bakwass jokes.😡 (shouting) – abhay, kabir niche aao .

Abhay and kabir – coming mom !They come down and both say – G'morning mom .

Haseena – goodmorning . ab chalo naashta karlo .

Misha (interrupting) – oh hello thakur and champu me bhi yaha hoon . 😡

Abhay – oh sorry my princess G'morning.😉

Misha – ewww…. Ye princess kis chidiya ka naam he . me koi princess winces nahi hoon.😡

Kabir – ok chill champ we got it . Are haan tujhe yaad hain na bike race ?

Misha – duhh .. thakur me usko kaie bhul sakti hoon .

Abhay and haseena – wat bike race?

Kabir – Aaj hillside pe hamara bike race ho raha hain .

Misha (interrupting) – champu tub hi chal , tu mere piche beth le na . 😛

Abhay (shouting) – nahiii , no , never . mujhe itni jaldi suicide nahi karna hain. Tujhe yaad hain na pichli saal ke bike race ke wajah se me hospital me do din ke liye admit tha . 🤣

Misha – Ha ! ha! Very funny . champu tujhe nahi aana oh mat aana . tu to no.1 darpok hi rahega. Toh tu aaj ghar me akele kya karega?

Abhay – I hv no plans…

Misha – great toh me teri date 'T' ke saath setup karleti hoon . 👏

Abhay – Hey ram , shubh shubh bol wo chipkali meri saath aise chipkti hain jaise ko I fevicol kisi cheez ko zodta hain .😆

Kabir – toh tu kya karega?

Abhay – Me soch raha tha ki aaj dobriyal's mein hone wali surprise party me me mom ke saath chala jaun.

Haseena – oh haan , me toh iske bare me bhul hi gayi thi . Misha and kabir bike race cancel.

Misha and kabir – but mom…

Haseena – no but I don't want to hear anything. U all r coming with me and that's final. And she leaves.

Misha – not fair!

Abhay – Mish …

Misha – ok ok I will come happy?

Scene changes: Dehradoon Airport

The door opens . Everyone turn around and are dazzled seeing the beauty just infront of their eyes .Pia dobriyal has arrived.

A boy – dekh dekh who Piya dobriyal hain . London ki ek supermodel aur businessman Arnab Dobriyal ke sabse choti beti .

Another – Wah ! Kitni khubsurat hain na .😳

Pia – Oh god ! Papa kaha reh gaye .
And she puts her head up and sees everyone staring at her . She feels awkard😕 and then a small girl approaches her and says – hi ! aap piya ho na . mene aapke saare fashion campaigns padhe hain ,
kya me aap ke saath plz ek photo kich wa sakti hun ?

Pia – ya sure come on . and she poses for the photo and everyone start surrounding her.

Meanwhile arnab , madhu and panchi arrive and they look around and do not find piya but see a small crowd just a little away frm there . they go and see there and r shocked to see piya posing for photos . their simple sweet girl next door had become hello hottie !😃

Arnab - Pia…….

Pia turns around and tears start flowing from her eyes as she is seeing her family after 2 long years.

Pia – papa! And she hugs them . I missed u so much .

Panchi – we also missed u very much . oho someone's looking very beautiful and sexy.😆

Pia blushes……….😳

Madhu – Are mera beta u look absolutely stunning.

Pia – thanks mom !

Arnab's tears flows out and panchi sees this and says – papa aap ro rahe ho ?😭

Arnab – nahi me kaha ro raha hoon ye to khushi ke aasun hai .

Piya – ok now let's go I am dying to be back at home.

They all sit inside the car .

Panchi (thinking) – oh fish! Agar hum itni jaldi ghar chale jayenge toh party ka kya hoga nahi nahi I hav to stop .🤔

Panchi – Papa let's go to the mall .

Madhu – par beta abhi toh piya aaye hai . tum log kal chale jana.

Panchi – but mom who P.A. at dobriyal's .😡

Madhu – oh haan arnab chalo .

Piya – mom but ..😕

Panchi – no piya let's go na it will be fun after 2 long yrs. Our family will go outside somewhere together plz plz plz.😃

Piya – ok ok let's go . but she was thinking wat does p.a. mean ? 😕


Do u know ? hehe!😆
So tell me guys how'z it , leave ur precious comments.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Lovely update!
So our supermodel piya has arrived.lovved d airport scene!
Misha n her bike race!no one can change misha!
Waiting 4 d party at dobrials n meeting of abhiya!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsm update.Eagerly waiting 4 abhiya meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
lovely update..waiting 4 abhiya meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Nice update
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awesome update yaar. Loved it. Abhay was so cute when he denied to date T. 😆 Piya asusual super hotie and hmm I'm waiting for surprise party. 😳 So finally abhiya will meet in the party. 🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow yr awsm update!!! thax fr pm!!! next update me abhiya ki meeting krva dena!!!! pia is so cute!!! yr kabir to raichand he na to fir mish use takur kyu bulati he???? & he plz abhay ko champu mt bulao!! i hate tht name fr my abhay!!!! next 1 update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
nice update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i find this ff sweet with no trouble and i like this
please continue

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