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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: tanvipareek

nice update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i find this ff sweet with no trouble and i like this
please continue

Thank u😃.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shria

lovly update😛 waiting for abhiya meeting😉
continu soon😊

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Thank u .😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: shria

lovly update😛 waiting for abhiya meeting😉
continu soon😊

Thank u. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc update loved it
thanx for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SORRY GUYS FOR THE DELAY ! Here's the new chappy . Hope u will enjoy it .

Chapter 2 : Hum tumse mile 😆.

Raichand Mansion

Haseena ( shouting) - Abhay, Misha , Kabir jaldi karo .

Misha , Abhay and Kabir come down . Misha was in her usual jeans so
haseena shouted -😡 Misha ye kya pehna hain tumne . Tumne phir se ye behudi jeans aur shirt .

Misha - Kya karu mom me hu adaat se majboor . 😆

Kabir - Are wah mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri champ itni filmy hain . I'm impressed . Waise mom ur looking damn' sexy and winks at her .😉

Misha - abe tujhe sharam nahi aata apne ma me line marta hain .

Kabir - Kya karu Misha me hu adaat se majboor .

Misha - O dialogue chor .

Abhay is just giggling 😆while haseena fumes and shouts - Stop it both of u .😡

Misha - are baap re mother teresa wapas aa gayi . Chalo warna ramayan ki katha phirse suru hojaygi .

Abhay - 😕par misha mother teresa ne ramayan nahi kaha tha.
Haseena - 😡offo ! kaise junglio ko pal ke rakhe ha maine . chalo ... and they leave for dobriyal house .

DOBRIYAL MANSION

Ruhi is instructing the workers - aap ye kijiye aur aap wo...

The hall is beautifully decorated . Angad says - 😃Wow ruhi baby . Aaj sab chauk jayenge .

Ruhi - Angad u know na I love to do decorations . toh acha toh hona hi tha. aao let's put our plan into action and they proceed towards the stage . All guests come and even Raichand's enter.
Stage
Ruhi takes the mike and says - Toh janta aaj Pia 2 saal ke baad London se yaha aa rahi he . I want u all to give her a suprise . when i say everyone will become quiet and the lights will be switched off . then when Pia enters we have to shout : supriseee . OK ! Plz enjoy.

Misha - Me toh chali bar .

Kabir - Count me in .

Haseena also leaves from there and Abhay is left alone. T sees this and comes towards him .

T - Hi Abhay baby .

Abhay (thinking) - 🤢Oh God yaha bhi iss chipkali se picha nahi chutega .
T - Kya hua baby chalo let's go far away from these people . just u and me .

Abhay (thinking) - abhay bhagg. and he says - ya mom coming . and he runs away from there.😆

T - kab tak bhago ge abhay . aana toh tumhe mere pass hi he . Ur only mine .

Scene change : DD Complex

All come out with many shopping bags in their hands .
Pia - Ab toh chalo .

Madhu - haan chalo bahot der ho chuki he.

Panchi messages ruhi that they r coming and all sit in the car .
scene changes: dobriyal mansion

Ruhi gets the message and says : Janta jaldi karo hide . piya abhi aajygi . and the lights r turned off .
they all reach there .

Pia - it's good to be back home .

Panchi - Pia i hv got a suprise for u .

Pia - woww ! suprise !😊

Panchi - yup let's go .and they all go and open the door and everyone shout - Supriseee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pia - wow ! thank u di ! and she hugs her .

Panchi - glad u liked it . ok phataphat jao aur jake change karlo and then full on party.

Pia - yup just 5 minutes and she rushes up.

scene changes : Piya's room

Pia - wow it's so good ato be back home after 2 long years. Better hurry up . i don't want to miss this party. and she changes . She wear a beautiful signature black dress with diamond earrings and a beautiful pendant .
She goes down . Arnab sees her and takes the mike and says - Ladies and Gentlemen presenting my very beautiful daughter Pia .

Everyone turn around and hold their breath by seeing the beauty standing infront of their eyes. T gets jealous seeing piya . 😆
Arnab goes and holds her hand and brings her down and says to his frnds that - let's go outside and let the youngsters enjoy their party . and they leave the hall.

Ruhi comes towards piya and says - Munchin '

Piya - OMG TRACKER ! and she hugs her .

Ruhi - Piya i must say ur looking damn ' hot .

Piya - Thanks tracker .

Ruhi - Piya come join us for dance .

Piya - Me ? ok but after a little while .

Ruhi - ok bye !

Piya goes to the bar and orders herself a juice . she turns around and sees a fully drunken misha .

Piya ( to misha) - don't drink more U will get sick .

Misha - Dude , I am misha jiske naam se bimari bhi darti hai . 🤣

Kabir - She's right mish don't drink more warna mom phirse tumhari bike seize karlegi . UMM .. ur name ?

Piya - Piya ... hey wait a min . . OMG kabeer

Kabir - Piya tum . OMG . AND THEY HUG .

Kabir - Oh to tum ho piya dobriyal very bad shimla me toh tumne apne parents ke baare me kuch nahi bataya

Misha - Thakur tum jante ho piya ko ?

Kabir - haan tujhe yaad he E.A.C program ke liye bachpan me shimla gaya tha tab piya and i met and we became friends .

Piya - She's ur sister?

Kabir - haan yehi he woh jungli jiske baare me baat karta tha.

Pia - aur tumhara bhai ?

Kabir - wo zaroor T ke kanche se bhaag raha hoga .and he and misha do a high - five.😆

Pia (confused )- 😕kaun 'T' ?

Misha - hain ek nabalik ladki jo humesha mere bhai ke piche chocolate ke liye bhagti hain.😆

Pia (more confused ) - 😕😕wat?

Kabir - are baap re isko chad gayi . Pia ,T ek ladki he humare college , u know self announce miss universe - bimbo . She always runs after me aur preferly after Abhay .

Misha - haan yaar ye kisiko nahi chodti . mere dono bhaiyu ko bhi nahi. aur uska woh chota bhai Shankar bhi humesha mere piche pada rehta hain . 😆

Kabir and piya giggle . 🤣

Misha (drinking more) - Kabeera me tujhko ... and she passes out.

Kabir - OH SHIT.. ! Pia would u help me take this champ to car .

Pia- ya sure kabir . come . and they take her to the car.


IN THE PARTY T FINDS ABHAY .

Abhay - 😡For god sake T plz leave me.

T- 😳Abhay baby tum mujhse humesha kyun bhagte ho . can't u see how much i like u .

Abhay - haha ! tum aur like ? it's the worst joke of the century.😆

T -agar tum mere paas ho to everything is possible.

Abhay (in mind) - God , aapko me hi mila tha is T ke liye . bhag abhay beta .
Abhay - bye bye and he runs away outside .

OUTSIDE
Kabir and pia put misha in the car .

Kabir - Thanks Pia .

Pia - Oh come on kabir wat r good friends for ?

Kabir - ok see u in college tomorrow. and they hug .

Kabir drives off while pia is walking towards the door when she accidently bumps on someone and they both fall upon each other .

Abhay is mesmerized seeing pia while pia gets drowned in those deep blue ocean eyes. Pia's mobile rings -- Dil ibadat kar raha hain...😳

Abhay - wow so beautiful .😊😉

Pia gets out of trance and says -😡 Hey mr. leave ur hands off me .

Abhay (still in trance) - Don't u think we've met before. That's why my favourite love song is playing .😊😆

Pia (angrily) - 😡Mr. it's my mobile ringing and she pushes abhay and stands up .

She picks up the phone - Hello.

Another (female voice )- Polly tum thik se pauch gayi.

Pia - haan pinks i have reached .

Pinky - so how'z dehradoon ?.

Pia - quite interesting . Jab se aayi hoon tab se sirf interesting things hi happen ho rahe he.😆

Pinky - ok u enjoy bye.

Pia - yup bye . she puts the phone down . abhay tries to speak but pia cut in - 😡Listen MR. I have no interest in talking to u .

Abhay (now getting angry ) - 😡As if i'm interested in talking to u . and wat the hell do u think about urself.

Pia -😡 so why r u talking u may leave . JERK . And she leaves from there.

Abhay - Oh god , sach mein aaj bahot bura din he . Sach kaha he kisi ne , ladkiyon ko kabhi samajhne ki koshish mat karo . and he also leaves from there.

Precap : hai , dost dost na raha bhai bhai na raha !😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it..but wanna see thora aur abhiya...its less on abhiya..hai mera janu abhay..T sai bhi bhaaga aur jab koi pasand aaya us nay kiya bye..lved it..abhay ia very cute here...waiting to read more n more..can,t wait..continue sooonl
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh

loved it..but wanna see thora aur abhiya...its less on abhiya..hai mera janu abhay..T sai bhi bhaaga aur jab koi pasand aaya us nay kiya bye..lved it..abhay ia very cute here...waiting to read more n more..can,t wait..continue sooonl


Thank u .😊 next update will be full of abhiya.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: 45Pinky



Thank u .😊 next update will be full of abhiya.😳


Me waiting yar..when will u update😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh


Me waiting yar..when will u update😆


I have been thinking that as i hav left the forum for quite a long time so to repent i will try to post tomorrow only.😊 ( ps : its not a joke)😆

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