Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 21

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I read this ff in one go.
It's simply mindblowing.
I wish to be in the pm list of this ff as well.
Plz update the next part soonest.
Take care!

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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A very powerful update tanzie!!! 👏 Every action,emotion and move was well justified!!! 👏 👏
Well chand does feel for his blood..pia! But that does not change what he really is!! The world of guns and bullets needs a nerve of steel and a human running high on emotions doesnot really fit there! So chand's actions doesnot leave much room to complain!! And whether he changes his outluk or sticks to it...that time can only tell..so as for nw I shall wait...to see the outcome!
Abhay is as usual the best human being that one has ever seen...whether he is an assasin or a vampire doesnt really change the way he is...! No matter what path he had to take there is and never can b anyone like him!! So I dnt think his actions wud have surprisd us much!!
And pia..she is a kind of girl who does everything with passion! Though she has her faults just lyk anyother humanbeing bt dat doesnt make her less extraordinary!! And though u myt laugh at me for saying this ..bt I must say that I think any guy wud die to have a girl lyk her in their life!though nt sure whether they wud b ever able to love her back lyk abhay! And its foolish of me to even state this as nobody cn match abhay ever ofcourse !! Thanks a lot Indu. your comment is always very insightful and helps me to understand how i write 😳 you are so right about all the characters. blood speaks so Chand does have feelings for his blood and he is too engrossed in the darkness to get past it and find his humanity so im not sure he ever will. in reality i don believe there could be any guy like Abhay ever. and so for Pia.

And abt james..watevr he did he was bound to and dat is hs job..though he is the one for whm abhaiya are suffering,bt frm a practical point of view I cnt really blame him!!
Once again it was the most well handled difficult update I have ever read in any ff..difficult coz of the diffrnt emotions of diffrn people u had to portray which u have Once again done efforlessly and beautifully!! 👏 and I knw u myt say but no.. am nt flattering u ,i just state whatever u deseve and whatever I feel like! thank you for that. im again flattered. i just become the character when i write their POV.. and write like them. that's it. and yes you cant blame James. every1 looks out for them. normal human instinct.
So nw am awaiting the next update eagerly to see what changes does the situation takes as nw abhay is already aware of his n pia's unborn child! And thanks for giving us the pleasure to read ur exceptionally wonderfull updates... 😳 I will update tomorrow for sure. aww thanks for reading and encouraging me.. without you guys i would be nothing.

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

Tanziee🤗

I can never get tired of telling you what a masterpiece this story is. Even James and Abraham seem to be taken aback by how much Abhiya can love each other. Pia is putting herself and her unborn's life at risk just holding on to the hope that one day, she will find Abhay and everything will be fine again. She's being crazy, reckless and stupid but she doesn't care because it's for the man who gave her a reason to live...the man who IS her reason to live. Abhay, on the other hand, is ready to let her believe he's dead just so that she'll give up and go away to the safe world she belongs to. He is being foolish, weak and ridiculous but he has to save the girl he loves with not just his heart but with every fiber of his existence. Thanks a lot Neethzo 🤗 you say everything so beautifully as always. to the world or to people like james and Abraham Abhiya are nothing but a bunch of illogical fools but love is supposed to be the most illogical thing in the world so be it. and next update from other's POV they will shock everyone again leaving them speechless.

I have a feeling Pia's suicide attempt has something to do with what happened in those 52 hours. I'm sure she doesn't believe James, but I feel this extreme step is her last resort to get Abhay back. Someone as stubborn and as rigid as Abhay needs a zor ka jhatka like this one and if he loves her like she rightly believe he does, he will definitely come running to her when he finds out she's in this condition. If Abhay is the heart, then Pia is the heartbeat. They simply cannot do without each other. We have seen aplenty how lost and lovelorn they've been in the past updates. What happened to Pia might be skipped and explain int he chapter after that. but you said it right again, for Abhay an extreme step was needed to make him reckless and out of the cage where he was being all calculative and careful to keep Pia safe. she was severely distressed and hence took the decision on a flit of moment... but even in that she never wanted to harm her child.

Coming to Chand, I somehow always thought he could've been different had Madhu given him a chance for redemption. But her rejection of him (not that i blame her for it) pushed him deeper into the dark world and now, I'm afraid there is no coming back. After so many years, the world will never leave Chand even if he wants to leave it...just like it couldn't leave Abhay. But yes, Madhu is still Chand's weakness and Pia is not only his daughter but Madhu's as well. I don't think that when the time comes, if it ever does, Chand will be able to harm Pia. How can he kill her when he killed the person who tried to molest her? How can he hurt her when he couldn't even see her ill? Chand and Pia share the same blood and blood is thicker than water. its somewhat true. Pia is only connection to Chand's human self which he lost ages ago and true, there;s no coming back for him. it's too late. he is too engrossed in darkness and it is also true if he would have get a chance like Abhay, maybe he would have changed but we cant say anything now. and even if someone wants to leave his sin, it is said the sin won't leave them ever

I cannot wait for the next update! You have to have it coming soon! Even if I'm late in commenting, I promise to read it on the first day you update. Abhay finally meeting Pia. It's high time. I am looking forward to reading how these two will react seeing each other after all these months.

P.S. I can't believe they killed Bixie! Or maybe I can. I am not unaware of how inhuman some humans can be :'( and Im so eagerly waiting to write it. its done almost but i rewrite is 4 times already 😕 as usually im not satisfied 🥱 i will update tomorrow morning...pakka and Bixie.. i know

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Oh ok... I get your point. But seriously, it really gets me when people go the noble way and break off a relationship with a lie for the other's safety.
In Angel Fire, the heroine told the hero she made out with her best friend to save him... I got so mad.
It's not like I hate them or dislike them. I'd probably do the same in Abhay's position. But -maternal instinct or whatever- I really get angry at them for making me sad...or whatever. I don't know, twisted sort of revenge, maybe. Can you explain/understand that?

Sorry for the essay :P

YIPPEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Am first Gosh its race out here I tell ya n this being my fav FF here u can imagine