Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 20

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This ff is simply awesome.
I read it in one go..
I just loved the whole story a lot..
Starting from dangerous mysterious Abhay and a reckless Pia's life to the union of two lovers followed by their separation ,everything was simply marvelous.
I love the courage of Pia and her determination to find Abhay.
She did suicide.I can't believe it.
One trigger was needed to make Abhay break the cage and come out.Nothing could be better than Pia getting harmed.
I'm a little confused about Chand's personality.
He seems to be soft-hearted and love both Pia and Madhu even today but at the same time he tries to snatch away the happiness from Pia's life in the form of Abhay.
He wantes something better for Pia but can anyone so selfless as Abhay be more better?
Abhay must have gladly given out Chand's secrets only if Chand didn't threaten him to forget Pia and harm his lady love.
I hope I'm right.
I'm loving the pace of the story and am wagerly waiting for the next part where the lovers would unite eventually.
Plz update the next part soonest and kindly add me to your pm list.
Take care!
Asma

Awesome upd tanzie , simply amazing , it was super thrilling , sorry for shot comment busy these days , conti soon please 👏

Superbly written Tanzie !! :D
I loved each and every part.. Chand-pia conversation is what I was looking forward to.. Whatever it is, piya is his weakness and he cares for her. How I wish he understands how much pia and abhay love each other !!
Restuarant scene was funny 😆
But pia actually shot him ! Whoa! Tigress in action..!
I absolutely love this side of pia...

Last part was the highlight !! Abhay came to know that pia is pregnant with his child.. Now nobody on the earth can stop him. But did pia really commit suicide or is there another side to this story ? I am confused..
Eagerly waiting for the next update. Abhay-pia meeting after 5 long months ! Aww awww 😳
Love you 🤗

please dear update soon😊

Originally posted by: mandy1024

First n foremost I have one question for u - R U NUTS???????? 😡 How can this update be remotely boring when its so insightful 👏 Trust me even if u write in ur crappiest of crappy moods ur updates r not gonna be remotely bad n I dont care if u say again that I exaggerate coz I always speak my mind 😛 This time I shall break my comments based on each POV 😳 YOU ARE BIASED 😛

Chand - Behind a ruthless gangster hides a man who still gets vulnerable at the mention of his ex-flame I suppose like Abhay he would have got a chance to reform had Madhu allowed that 😭 He still cares for his daughter despite all that transpired in the past 😕 He could also see the same fire in her eyes which once used to adorn him n he does connect to her. It was amazing the way u described a father getting connected to his daughter. Perfect given the circumstances ⭐️ He somehow knew his presence did affect even before he realised she knew the truth abt their relation. He could also notice she was sick n this only stresses more on the fact that he does have fatherly affections towards her Loved it when Pia told him that she learnt her lessons from his best man 😆 Of course if one is his blood then the other is the outcome of his training 😎 Pia should have been extra careful when she knew what she was dealing with. Using a credit card is the biggest blunder one can do as thats the easiest way to track down a person in a tech savvy world Chand is no doubt proud of his daughter seeing the tigress she is 😆 He is sure made of steel n the fact that he killed a man w/o sparing a thought proves that about him. In a world like that its more important to psychologically stronger than being strong physically n Chand is the perfect example for that. He maybe ruthless but there indeed was a strong point he enforced upon. How can u expect kindness from a man who never got any all his life? How much ever he tries to suppress his humane feelings he cannot deny that he does care for his daughter n one more point to stress on this is the fact that he didn't disclose about her fake identity fearing for her life. I hope for once he does think about her happiness like a father n lets Abhay go with her. He loves Abhay too in his own twisted way n the fact that he's kept him alive despite the betrayal proves this. He does want a better life for his child n I hope he does something in this regard rather than relying on hope 😛 Your analysis is always a treat to read. I love it and agree with everything you said. But im afraid he is engulfed himself in too much darkness to seek redemption he has feelings for pia and abhay in his own twisted selfish way. 100% true but he wont be able to sacrifice or change his life for them like abhay did. maybe in time if he was showed light there was a possibility he would come around but now don't think so...

James - To a certain extent I can relate to what he did though I would never encourage betrayal. But I agree with Darwin's theory of 'Survival of the Fittest' and also on self preservation. At the end of the day every human being is selfish in his/her own way. He did feel guilty on betraying Abhay who had spared his life once. But given the choice between his saviour n family, whom will he choose? I suppose the answer is obvious 😕 In a world such as this one, it will take a lot of time to make that kinda money n he chose the easy way out though that was nothing less than disastrous coz u never know when u end up beocming one on the hit list for the person whom u work. He wants to keep his family happy n for that he doesn mind keeping them in the dark Of course how could Abhay trust him again? 😡 I loved his encounter with the ultimate queen of venegance 😆 Was hilarious n thrilling 😃 both at the same time 😊 He did try his best to convince Pia to get her out both for Abhay n Chand's sake as well but Pia knew better 😆 Enjoyed every bit where she held him at gun point and threatened him 😆 Best part was her throwing the hot coffee on him. Well that does establish her lineage 😆 Like father like daughter. I was almost clutching my stomach hard when she asked the waiter to get him a glass of cold water 🤣 as a treat 😆 James is just being a human here. a plain ordinary human who cant think beyond himself. every human being is selfish and those who can think above their life for the ones are great, rare and unique and everyone cant be that. Pia's vengeance not only towards James but the entire mafia gang was poured out in one go..

Abraham - Well now he knows that nothing is going to stop the lion from rejoining his lioness 😉 That was the most power packed moment in this update n as u said this update was an epic update in itself. I wonder how will the next one be? I am already thrilled to the bits 😃 To be honest, when i ended it I felt like starting the next chapter right away 😆 I was so excited myself. this FF is so close to my heart and maybe that's why i was equally eager. Abhay became a living corpse, stone like and a whiplash was needed to turn his human switch and knowing about his child was the ultimate one.

Pia - My heart goes out to her Tanzie 😭 How much more will u make me cry already? 😭 Please unite her with Abhay soon n I hope they get their share of happiness as destiny has already been so cruel to them 😭 As I mentioned before I loved her encounter with her father. Was a real treat to read ⭐️ So she does know her father could have been a better man had it not been for her mother? She may loathe him for what he has done so far but I guess she does empathise with him after all. About her interaction with James I guess I have given a detail synopsis on that already 🤣 But coming to the last bit I am sure she didn buy it when James said Abhay embraced his old life again n asked her to walk away. Did she deliberately harm herself or was she faking to get Abhay's attention? Coz I cant believe she could ever risk her child's life for that 😲 So now the whole world knows abt her predicament? I wonder how will Chand's reaction be on hearing this news Chand will miss the goodnews of becoming a grandpa at the key moment 😛 She felt her father would have a different life because she gave the same chance to Abhay and he did change so why not Chand but like I said, its too late. no she wont ever risk her life but she was devastated and hurt and its not fake

Abhay - U r an ace when it comes to portraying Abhay's POV ⭐️ Loved it to the core ❤️ His heart yearns for what he cannot ever get until he makes up his mind 😭 So even Abhay did realise that Chand would not harm Pia? But at the same time he will never let his guard down His heart must have broken to a million pieces while asking James to tell her that he is dead when he knows she could be next door in search of him 🥺 I am so happy that he got about his baby 👏 n I hope he flees with Pia far away from here where nobody can ever find them n make up for their lost time 😳 The last piece was majestically written n please woman, dont ever say any of ur update can ever be boring 😛 I heart Abhay ❤️ and I always understand messed up, grey, complicated characters well but still portraying Abhay is not easy. the news of having a baby will wreck him making his senses numb. for the moment he wont be able to understand how, what he should do but end result, he will do simply ANYTHING to take Pia and his unborn far from this mess. last part is my fav as well.. i waited so many days to write the moment 😳

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Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

First of all **HUGS** AND SEVEN STARS(*******) for the update coz i m SPEECHLESS!!!!
Amazingly Superb was d start n mindblowingly stupendous was d end!
Piya's meeting with her father n convo was beautifully written.So Chand has a soft corner 4 his daughter n his heart still crumples with d memory of his long lost love. So Mr.heartless has a chink in his armour too!
Chand cud see himself in her n Piya's mind 4 a brief second went 2wards her father wat wud hav been he 2day if Madhu cud hav given him 2nd chance?
James did what circumstances forced him 2 do coz he kept protection of his family above his loyality. Thanks a lot Kirti. its the blood bond you see which Pia/chand cant remove even if they want to. blood speaks and this is the example. chand loves and loathes madhu and Pia is the connection to them so offcourse she is important to him.
Bt his confrontation with d Femme fatale d jhansi ki Rani Piya! Oh I just loved it!👏 I love strong women n i totally loved how Piya kept her nerve with dat fires n lastly pouring steaming hot coffee on his hand n not 2 4get d killer attitude.😎.
Though she was dying thousand deaths inside listening 2 dat shocking message bt her love was refusing 2 accept dat.😭.
Lastly OMG was it a suicide or an attempt 2 murder!She wud never try 2 kill herself coz of d baby! the vengeance she had for the mafia gang who ruined her life was poured out to James. poor fellow!! and she did try to kill herself. its her fault and in this FF no correct is pure white or black but everyone is grey. Abhay, pia and Chand too. they have their faults. and you will understand why she did it in next 2 chapters.

FINALLY D WOUNDED,HUNGRY N ANGRY LION IS OUT OF D CAGE N IS ON RAMPAGE NOW! Abhay came 2 know of d truth abT Piya n his baby n now starts d real series of destruction. Just loved how he warned abt his intentions!
next update!Abhay kidnaps Piya! OMG can't wait 4 it! Bt of course those doggies would follow him everywhere. Well now Abhay and Pia has to be on run but Abhay is smart enough to dodge them.. will update tonight or tomorrow inshAllah 😳
Continue asap.

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Phew! That was awesome!!! Tanzie James ki toh band baja baarat nikal di tumne...lol. Pia burnt his hand 🤣 when it was Abhay who said ' aaj hoon main jal jaogi'...Ironic isn't it ?

So...I knew the suicide attempt would work...Abhay will get to her now. Serve him right, trying to fake his own death. Huh!

Marvellous update Tanzie I can't wait for the next!

Comment updated on pg-23. Plz check..

I read this ff in one go.
It's simply mindblowing.
I wish to be in the pm list of this ff as well.
Plz update the next part soonest.
Take care!