Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26)

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

after readin 2days updt my feeling r mixed...

i felt happy, sad, emotional , shock at d sm tym

hmmm chand hs sum feelings 2wards her daughter ... & she hs sum of his qualities 😆 😆lik father lik daughter

piya didnt blv in d rubbish tlk of james 😃 d way she tk him in her gun point ws outstanding ...i ws xpectin dis seriously

finally finally finally abhay cm 2 knw abt piya pregnancy ...& HE IS BCK 👍🏼 nw no1 cn dare 2 stop him 😆 he ws blamin himslf 4 piya's condition 😭

u hv putted lots of twist & turn in a single updt

🤗🤗🤗

its ******PERFECT ******

Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Super duper update tanzie 👏

am already in love dis father - daughter encounter😳 da way chand feels proud n is worried 4 piya makes me think his fatherly feelings 4 her are buried deeply in him coverd by his tough core cover.😊

piya's struggle in search of abhay makes me emotional😭,

u r 2 gr8,

u express in such a beautiful manner dat da reader falls completly 4 it,

it was fun, james really deserved a dose of piya's crazy anger😆

abhay is out of control now n ny1 who comes in his path vil b gone🤢 i hope we vil get abhiya reunion in nxt update😳

Hats off 2 u 4 giving us such a ff 🤗

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Tanvi Pareek

@tanvipareek

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

BEYOND IMAZINATION !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏

nice update

😃 so finally prego news of pia is out...

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amazing, fantastic, superb, mindblowing!!!!!!!!!!

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Neetz

@.Jane..

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Tanziee🤗

I can never get tired of telling you what a masterpiece this story is. Even James and Abraham seem to be taken aback by how much Abhiya can love each other. Pia is putting herself and her unborn's life at risk just holding on to the hope that one day, she will find Abhay and everything will be fine again. She's being crazy, reckless and stupid but she doesn't care because it's for the man who gave her a reason to live...the man who IS her reason to live. Abhay, on the other hand, is ready to let her believe he's dead just so that she'll give up and go away to the safe world she belongs to. He is being foolish, weak and ridiculous but he has to save the girl he loves with not just his heart but with every fiber of his existence.

I have a feeling Pia's suicide attempt has something to do with what happened in those 52 hours. I'm sure she doesn't believe James, but I feel this extreme step is her last resort to get Abhay back. Someone as stubborn and as rigid as Abhay needs a zor ka jhatka like this one and if he loves her like she rightly believe he does, he will definitely come running to her when he finds out she's in this condition. If Abhay is the heart, then Pia is the heartbeat. They simply cannot do without each other. We have seen aplenty how lost and lovelorn they've been in the past updates.

Coming to Chand, I somehow always thought he could've been different had Madhu given him a chance for redemption. But her rejection of him (not that i blame her for it) pushed him deeper into the dark world and now, I'm afraid there is no coming back. After so many years, the world will never leave Chand even if he wants to leave it...just like it couldn't leave Abhay. But yes, Madhu is still Chand's weakness and Pia is not only his daughter but Madhu's as well. I don't think that when the time comes, if it ever does, Chand will be able to harm Pia. How can he kill her when he killed the person who tried to molest her? How can he hurt her when he couldn't even see her ill?

I cannot wait for the next update! You have to have it coming soon! Even if I'm late in commenting, I promise to read it on the first day you update. Abhay finally meeting Pia. It's high time. I am looking forward to reading how these two will react seeing each other after all these months.

P.S. I can't believe they killed Bixie! Or maybe I can. I am not unaware of how inhuman some humans can be :'(

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Amazing one Tanzee👍🏼

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

brilient update ...👏👏👏👏

u r awsm writer tanzie ...

u didnt pm me ... plz pm me next time ...

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Such a twisted game fate is playing with all.
Tanzie even while reading this my mind is on your prologue.
Abhay sure will find Piya, she will probably have a safe pregnancy
But then destiny will again tear them apart right?
Neither was Madhu wrong, nor will Piya be for wanting their men to be better.
But they could've/ could give their men a 2nd chance
Chand was hurt, but that doesn't justify him.
Brilliant potrayal Tanzie.