Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: mandy1024

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#132

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
Eid Mubarak to u too tanzie🤗
coming to the update...absolutely mind-blowing...after each update u make me think it just can't get any better and with the next update u prove me wrong!! wow...u'r updates make each scene and character leap out fro the page...its an absolute pleasure reading ur writing...⭐️ thanks soo much sweetheart 🤗 im glad i got readers like you... u people inspire me soo much 😳
wow...a super duper happening chapter...abhiya's telepathic connection always gives me goosebumps when i read them...and oh tanz...those parts were so so emotional!!!😭 i know.. writing those parts are tough.. trust me
finally finally...abhay knows that piya is in chinatown..in fact very near him...and as per ur precap, he'll know very soon that she is pregnant with his child...wow...can't wait for his reaction to that... his reaction will be worth seeing..
piya came face to face with chand...at last...father-daughter...can't wait to read their confrontation...
u give such a realistic picture of the underworld that i am speechless.⭐️...this is a perfect dark love story..hats off👏 thanks a lot.. will try to update as soon as I can...

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
Eid Mubarak 2 u too dear..
awesome update..
loved it..
thanxx for d pm..

Thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: shria
EID mubaraq to u too😳
coming to the update it was just mindblowing😎
omg the killed bixie i loved that dog... they are so cruel😡 atlast chand & piya met😉 i hope they do not find about piya being pregnent waiting for abhiya meeting😳 continu soon...

Thanks dear. glad you liked it. i love Bixie too but to show the level of cruelty it was important.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Rmuk
First of all eid mubarak ho, hope u enjoyed it. Thank u for giving us such a wonderful eid gift, actually not one, two, one this update and second the news that u are continuing writting, I am so happy can't explain u, how happy I am feeling now.
Now coming to the update don't know what to say yaar as always u made me speechless. It was extremely beautiful yet emotional. Just amazing, and perfect, the way it should have been. I feel so bad for abhiya both are in so much pain, I am happy finally abhay knows that piya is in china town but mil ke bhi nahi mile sach mein, hope they meet soon. Poor bixie, I feel so bad for that innocent animal, really u are showing us true glimpses of mafia world. Last part was thrillar wow chand and piya's encounter, and that ryan😡 good ke chand killed him, now I am eagerly waiting for next part. Finally abhay will know abt his child, wow I am just excited, plz update asap. Once more just brilliant work, hats off to u, really u are a god blessed writer.

Thank you so much dear. the pain and suffering was important to make the story more realistic. the situation will out of abhays control so he has to be break the barriers and reach Pia. killing bixie was barbaric and but its nothing for mafias like them

glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: Divya6696
Eid Mubarak to you Tanz.. 🤗 May This Eid fill your life with lots and lots of Happiness..! 🤗 thanks dear.. i had a great Eid 🤗

Coming to the update.. you made me cry once again..! 😭
Awww Abhiya.. they are so incomplete without each other..! 😭
Chand does care for Piya.. isn't it..? I somewhere felt it today..! 😳
And.. and.. and.. Abhay asked James to tell Piya that he is dead..!?! 😲 😭 I hope Piya doesn't believe James and do something wrong..!
And.. what did the poor dog do that those monsters killed him..? Awwh.. I loved Bixie re..!
The end was supposed to scare me I think.. 😆 but I was all 'awww' at Dad - Daughter encounter..! 😆 Afterall.. Chand saved her from Ryan.. 😳 whatever might be his real intentions.. but.. please.. don't make him do anything to Piya, her baby or Abhay.. please.. 😃 the pain is going to end soon.. and yes Chand has feelings for Pia and it will be more visible soon.

The Precap.. it made my day..!! 😳 Abhay getting to know about Piya and her baby and he going to her.. Awww... 😳 yes he will 😊

Can't wait any longer for the next update..!! Please Update soon..!

And.. THANK YOU for this wonderful Eid Gift..!!! 🤗
Once Again.. Eid Mubarak.. 🤗 im glad you liked it so much.. i will update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: mahi4ever
EID MUBARAK 😃
Thanks a lot tanzie 4 such a beautiful eid gift😊
coming 2 update it was full emotional 1 , abhay n piya condition makes every1 cry, i felt lik chand has a soft corner 4 piya,
loved da father n daughter meeting,
hope it brings some thing gud 4 abhiya.

\Thank you Mahi... glad you liked it. i almost cry myself when i write this SS sometimes so you it makes you people sad... it means im successful in pinning the story. sorry but chand will never support abhiya...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

You have missed my comment 😛
You know its not that easy to read my comments..kismat se nasib hota hai 🤣 so plz check pg-14 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: -Chinky-
Outstanding update tanzie !!

You showed the real face of mafia world.. The writing was just par excellence. hats off.. Why dont you publish a novel of your own ? I swear by the name of god that I mean it !

I felt so very bad for bixie ! Aww :'(
Why did you kill her ? :'(

My god.. Ryan turned out to be such a ba***** ! Yuck.. Why do such men take girls like a thing of pleasure.. :-/

Abhay wants piya to move on ! How can he even think of this. Mr abhay,he needs you damit..! But I know he is thinking only of her safety. Aww my abhay and piya are not so far. Still they cant meet.. :'(

So excited for piya-chand encounter. And wow..abhay will know that piya is pregnant ! Yippe..

Once again that was a fantastic update.. *hugs*
I am loving you more and more day by day..hihi :P

Thank you... comment karne keliye aarti utaro aapki 😡 😆 i dont think noone will publish my novel.. im not that good 😆 but when i will be better i will surely try to write a book. 😳

i wanted it to be realistic so showed the things as dirty as it could get.. people like ryan who just knows to take advantage of situation are too many in this world..how sad abhay will know about pia expecting his child in next update and then noone in the damn world can stop him 😃

i love u too 🤗