First n foremost I have one question for u - R U NUTS???????? š” How can this update be remotely boring when its so insightful š Trust me even if u write in ur crappiest of crappy moods ur updates r not gonna be remotely bad n I dont care if u say again that I exaggerate coz I always speak my mind š This time I shall break my comments based on each POV š³
Chand - Behind a ruthless gangster hides a man who still gets vulnerable at the mention of his ex-flame I suppose like Abhay he would have got a chance to reform had Madhu allowed that š He still cares for his daughter despite all that transpired in the past š He could also see the same fire in her eyes which once used to adorn him n he does connect to her. It was amazing the way u described a father getting connected to his daughter. Perfect given the circumstances āļø He somehow knew his presence did affect even before he realised she knew the truth abt their relation. He could also notice she was sick n this only stresses more on the fact that he does have fatherly affections towards her Loved it when Pia told him that she learnt her lessons from his best man š Of course if one is his blood then the other is the outcome of his training š Pia should have been extra careful when she knew what she was dealing with. Using a credit card is the biggest blunder one can do as thats the easiest way to track down a person in a tech savvy world Chand is no doubt proud of his daughter seeing the tigress she is š He is sure made of steel n the fact that he killed a man w/o sparing a thought proves that about him. In a world like that its more important to psychologically stronger than being strong physically n Chand is the perfect example for that. He maybe ruthless but there indeed was a strong point he enforced upon. How can u expect kindness from a man who never got any all his life? How much ever he tries to suppress his humane feelings he cannot deny that he does care for his daughter n one more point to stress on this is the fact that he didn't disclose about her fake identity fearing for her life. I hope for once he does think about her happiness like a father n lets Abhay go with her. He loves Abhay too in his own twisted way n the fact that he's kept him alive despite the betrayal proves this. He does want a better life for his child n I hope he does something in this regard rather than relying on hope š
James - To a certain extent I can relate to what he did though I would never encourage betrayal. But I agree with Darwin's theory of 'Survival of the Fittest' and also on self preservation. At the end of the day every human being is selfish in his/her own way. He did feel guilty on betraying Abhay who had spared his life once. But given the choice between his saviour n family, whom will he choose? I suppose the answer is obvious š In a world such as this one, it will take a lot of time to make that kinda money n he chose the easy way out though that was nothing less than disastrous coz u never know when u end up beocming one on the hit list for the person whom u work. He wants to keep his family happy n for that he doesn mind keeping them in the dark Of course how could Abhay trust him again? š” I loved his encounter with the ultimate queen of venegance š Was hilarious n thrilling š both at the same time š He did try his best to convince Pia to get her out both for Abhay n Chand's sake as well but Pia knew better š Enjoyed every bit where she held him at gun point and threatened him š Best part was her throwing the hot coffee on him. Well that does establish her lineage š Like father like daughter. I was almost clutching my stomach hard when she asked the waiter to get him a glass of cold water š¤£ as a treat š
Abraham - Well now he knows that nothing is going to stop the lion from rejoining his lioness š That was the most power packed moment in this update n as u said this update was an epic update in itself. I wonder how will the next one be? I am already thrilled to the bits š
Pia - My heart goes out to her Tanzie š How much more will u make me cry already? š Please unite her with Abhay soon n I hope they get their share of happiness as destiny has already been so cruel to them š As I mentioned before I loved her encounter with her father. Was a real treat to read āļø So she does know her father could have been a better man had it not been for her mother? She may loathe him for what he has done so far but I guess she does empathise with him after all. About her interaction with James I guess I have given a detail synopsis on that already š¤£ But coming to the last bit I am sure she didn buy it when James said Abhay embraced his old life again n asked her to walk away. Did she deliberately harm herself or was she faking to get Abhay's attention? Coz I cant believe she could ever risk her child's life for that š² So now the whole world knows abt her predicament? I wonder how will Chand's reaction be on hearing this news
Abhay - U r an ace when it comes to portraying Abhay's POV āļø Loved it to the core ā¤ļø His heart yearns for what he cannot ever get until he makes up his mind š So even Abhay did realise that Chand would not harm Pia? But at the same time he will never let his guard down His heart must have broken to a million pieces while asking James to tell her that he is dead when he knows she could be next door in search of him š„ŗ I am so happy that he got about his baby š n I hope he flees with Pia far away from here where nobody can ever find them n make up for their lost time š³ The last piece was majestically written n please woman, dont ever say any of ur update can ever be boring š
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Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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