Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Divya6696

I was actually on Mobile when I saw this topic of yours.. I was just waiting for you to edit the title (as you said you would) and so that I could reserve..! Lucky me that no one was around at that time and I could be the First one..!😆

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WOW WOW WOW Dishu..!!!🤗🤗 Another Masterpiece..!!!⭐️

So.. I am the first one to comment on this FF of yours..!! I had always wanted to be the first one for atleast one update of yours.. and here I am.. the first one to comment on the FF..!!!😳
"Murder of Retrospect".. A very intriguing title.. Enough to keep me glued to this story..!😳😳

I have no Idea about the Original Story.. Agatha Christie's "The Sleeping Murder".. So I am very much new to this..😊

Coming to the Character Sketch..
Very different indeed..! Completely different Relationships..
Abhiya are already married.. sweet..!😳

Coming to the first Chapter..
It was really good..!👏
Abhiya shifting their base from Delhi to Mumbai.. I found the Abhiya fake fight really cute..😆

The [😉] at the end of the paragraph made way for a stupid smile on my face..!😆

So.. Piya in Mumbai for Alina's Wedding.. and Abhay joining her after a month..!😔 Piya will be missing him na..?

Why was there a special mention about the house..?😕 I mean.. I just have some fear deep down in my heart about the house and I am scared..!
I actually shiver reading the title..!

Thanks for the PM..😊 And by the way.. who do you think would not want to be PMed about such a brilliant story..??😳

Love you for this FF and I am sure you'll pull it off amazingly well..!!🤗🤗

Thanks for this long comment. You are always a sweetheart when it comes to a comment on my FFs. This story is different from all I have done so far, hope you enjoy it 😊

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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Lovely start Dishu. I cant wait to read it because Im already loving the book. You have put the characters of the book according to PKYEK characters really well. I cant wait to see Abhay as Miss Marple 🤣

I will finish the book soon and thanks for adding lovely abhiya moments. it was so cute. continue soon please and congratz for the new FF 🤗

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Interesting start Dishu n CS is definitely rocking 👏 So Pia will end up buying that house and Abhiya will move in quickly? 😊 Cool 😃 Waiting to read more. I guess the next update will be Alina's wedding na? 😃

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

wow dishu another story, i think its ur first writing on abhiya which is not supernatural... and ya its my fist experions wid dis story as i never read any such novel of agatha "The sleepy murder"... i dont knw anything but waiting 4 ur update of 1st part to get the sketch of story... and its gud dat abhiya are married... ya pm me dear

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

yipee!!dishu a new ff!!wow!!agatha christie is one of my favourites...will be waiting eagerly..update soon😃

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awesome start dishu...now i guess the real story's gonna start😊mystery and murder with abhiya included...yummy story!!can't wait😃

Originally posted by: -sakshi-

wow dishu , you started another ss without any break..the character sketch is interesting .. panchi is piya's mom, abhay's mom-in law😛though she's dead but still funny. looking fwd. to the story

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

superb update.btw is d house dat pia is thinking to buy haunted? Thanx 4 pm

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Madam murdered kaun hai and kiska murder hoga lol great start