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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

very nice story ,thanks for pm

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Indu that was brilliant dear 👏 U write so beautifully ⭐️ n u say u feel u rnt good 😡 Coming to the update, loved the way u portrayed Abhay's feelings here - his despair, love was depicted very well. This man Raj, he seems to be the messaih type 😳 I have a feeling he has an important role to play. Pia on the other hand is perfectly in sane mind but y is she keeping Abhay away from her? 😭 Y is Abhay feeling guilty? I hope u reveal the answers very soon 😊

Awesome update 👏

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ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

confusing yet one thng is clear...this one is a passionate gloomy story,but tell me one thng is it a tooo sad story?coz i won't b able to take one😆

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

grt update.all d emotions dat abhay is going through r well depicted.bth abhay & pia r in pain.why is pia stayin away 4m him if she lvs him so mch? Who was d person who called abhay?does he has sum role in separating abhay & pia.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

wow indu so u update dis one nice update and waiting to knw wat happens and hw abhay responsible 4 dis... really nice and update soon and take good care of ur health

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Hey Indu.Its gud 2 hv 2 back.Hope u r feeling better nw.Btw,Gr8 update.Pia seems 2 be mentally disturbed.And what has abhay done that he is in so much pain?Will b waitng 4 next chappy nd updates of ur other ff s

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Awesome update dear.I hope u r f9 now.Oh its so painful.Wht actually happened b/w Abhiya tht they r so far away?Plz cont..

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

lovely start! Looking forward to this fic

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

hey indu! how r u nw??hope u r fine...u r back with a bang!!
briliant update👏So abhiya already luv each other lekin abhay ne kuch galat kiya so ab wo log alag hain...bt idiot galati krta hi kyn hai...?!

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