Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

awesome n beautiful upate Tanz...i loved abhiya scene...they r jst soulmates...so caring..the trust...love them so so much..written so beautiul..

hope amber vl soon find smthing frMohini...arnaab should stay away frm abhiya..wht is jay upto. .
bloody mohini..mobile n map n place..written nice..modern.

she met pia...she is hving pias hair..bloody witch..scared yr..
finally kol met her ..she should get scared of him ...

full nice update. plz abhay let out tht suprnturl prison na..poor abhiya..witing fr nxt updt

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#802

superb chaptr tanzie
abhiya hospital scene was beautiful
mohini has pia's hairs , she definetly has some evil plans 4 her .

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captainplus

@captainplus

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#803

nice update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

abhiya's emotions were xplained very well 👏

xited 4r abhiya's HM 😛😉

arnab dobrial 😡 wish he lerns a nice lesson or gets a painful death , even better 😈

wat wil mohini do wit pia's hair 😕 😲 hope kol prevents it

xited 4r nxt part 😛

tnx 4r the pm 😊

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

great going with the updates...

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Tanzie🤗

Just now I realized how much I missed these awesome updates of yours. Not only have you given me a great read but you have inspired me to continue with my own ff. Thanks a lot dear.

Coming to the last two updates.

Mohini is one brilliant character you have crafted. She does know her job. Bhupen would've been a real blow if Alina hadn't come in on time. But with her pulling Jeh in , I have bad feelings in my gut and also a little hope that maybe just maybe Jeh is for good.

Abhay and Piya deserve a humongous break. The poor things have been tossed around for long. Piya , you brave brave girl , you are a gem.

I hope Aryan soon finds the answer he is searching for.

As if we didn't have enough problems already we have Mr.Arnab Nosy Dobrial back in action. But from his point he is right.

Will wait for Book 4 hun.