Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 82

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am first after a long long time 🥳

Hope my essay won't bug you 😆 Coz well its a slightly lean period in office for today n I am making the most of it 🤣 So sorry for unreserving late but u know my work life is more or less like yours I defo understand your situation and I pray you get a better assignment that will give you ample time for recreational activities as well I do miss reading your updates on a regular basis and I know what exactly is the reason behind it As for BD I am excited and sad at the same time to know its ending 😭 But yeah do take ur time n we shall wait. No worries.and Im replying even more late so no issues 😆

Coming to the update, it was as good as ever 👏 and I love the way even other characters are woven so intricately into the story. Finally Kol is close to piecing the puzzle together 😎 Well Mohini will ultimately dig her own grave at the end and I guess this is a teeny tiny step towards it 😉 Kol will make use of the information she had once given him to figure out about Pamona 😆 Nobody will be able to catch Mohini this time until the damage is done and im going to be very cruel.

As for Abhiya, my heart goes out to them 😭 They are suffering in their own hell right now but hopefully its short lived. The clouds have to part way for sunshine and cast a beautiful rainbow over the world 😳 But I know the clouds will threaten to reappear 😡 As long they are together I know they will face the odds together and thats always been the beauty of their bond ❤️ Thanks for the kiss therapy. Missed it 😉 Piya misses it too but no worries they will get plenty of it next week 😉 😆

Mohini is surely one witch not to cross 😆 And well hark who's talking? 😡 She is cursing Alina for turning against her family but what about her? She didn't spare her own sister whom she claimed to love to use for her selfish motives 🤢 Now that Bhupen's testimony proved to be of no use, she has to have a backup plan but I didn't expect it would turn out to be Jeh in the last minute. But I am hoping for the best 😕 Lets wait and watch..

Abhiya part was as usual beautiful, poignant and heartbreaking at the same time 🥺 They are living the other's pain overlooking their own personal hell I love the way they watch out for each other. Pia is feeling helpless to see him behind bars and Abhay is unable to see his wife in this state all because of him, because of fighting for him. He knows how crazy the supernatural world is and despite being a fragile human she is braving it all, just to set him free. Abhay blames himself for Pia's state and she on the other hand herself for taking too much stress and landing herself in this state causing him pain. Man no wonder Kol finds their love epic. Abhay is now determined to win, not because he wants to be set free, or because he thinks the SPC will give him justice but he wants it so that her efforts do not go wasted. I loved it when she asked him to kiss him and it was described so beautifully 👏 A moment of blissfull normalcy in their insane world 😳 Pia is in pain too, both physically and emotionally but she is holding herself together for Abhay Though Pia bid him goodbye she couldn't bear to see him go 😭 And for one moment, she wanted to defy all norms and break free without giving a hoot for the consequnces and this part was heart wrenching 😭 And that one moment rendered her completely vulnerable 💔 just like the time Abhay had come back to her on a rainy night after getting his memories back after Mohini had tampered with them and Pia had brought him back 😭 Abhay is right - No matter what they will always find their way out to get back together 😳 There is no barrier that can keep them apart no matter the hurdles ❤️ thanks so much. you always do the best anaysis of what i write.. thanks so much for it. they miss each other so much but no magic could render their true feelings.

Aryan clearly guessed that someone was impersonating Ragini and I am surprised he couldn't deduce it but I am guessing it wont take him long 😎 He can counter any of Mohini's moves 😃 Loved to see Amber fuss over the kids and help Aryan in his quest. Again it shows how u pay attention to even the minutest of minute detail and weave it seamlessly into the story and its the mark of a stellar story teller ⭐️ now since the case will be over soon. its time to focus on Aryan and Amber again.

No wonder Pia is a detective 😛 Runs in her blood I suppose 🤣 Arnab surely has a hyper active brain like his daughter 😆 He even went to the extent of checking out facebook 🤣 Well not everyone are active I suppose 🥱 I dont even go there often 🤣 He is now looking for her in Belgium 😲 God, I hope he doesn't get to know she fell sick and was in a hospital and I hope he doesn't track her down but I am not too hopeful about this Now Armaan is a slayer? 😲 What the????????? Where does this leave Amber and Armaan now? 😭 It reminded me of Beautiful Stranger where Arnab sends his son Abhay to get trained to be a slayer and use him against the person he loved Now he will use Arman to seperate Abhiya 😡 I wont deny his fears are legitimate but seeing he is from the supernatural world, I wish he would give Abhay the benefit of doubt. But at the same time no father would be jumping with joy to know his son in law is a vamprie and his daughter is married into a family of vampires, warlocks and werewolves(considering Alina as a part of the family 😉) But who was the person at the other end who laughed? 😲 I am not getting a good feel about this the person who laughed is bad news. there will be new characters in the story since the case will end soon and so will be characters related to it. so soon will bring new characters.

Finally Pia and Mohini came face to face 🥳 Now dont think I have lost my marbles to be rejoicing but I always wanted to see that ever since you mentioned Mohini. And I just loved it. The whole scene was written brilliantly ⭐️ Mohini - I guess the name itself is enough to imbibe fear in anybody and imagine being confronted in flesh and blood for real 😲 Not welcoming exactly. I am not surprised at seeing Pia's intitial reaction of fear. She is a fool if she doesn't fear her coz if she doesn't she can never be on guard and knowing Mohini, even a momentary lapse in letting the guard down is risky. But I liked it when Pia snapped back at her when she reminded him of Abhay's state 😎 That's Pia Raichand for you. The only person who is capable of taking on Mohini is her and not because she is extraordinary but her love for Abhay is beyond all the boundaries and she will not let anyone harm him as long as she stands by him. Mohini tricked Pia into taking a strand of her hair? 😲 I am scared for Pia now offcourse Pia will be afraid. she is just a human and she knows how dangerous Mohini is and those hair consequence will not be any good.

At last 😃 Kol Mohini face off I wish next chapter would come sooner.

Donno if I have mentioned this before or not, but my fav fictional characters created by you would not be Abhay, Pia or even Aryan (dont be shocked, I love them too 😆) but Mohini and Peehu. Best characters you ever came up with 👏

No adjectives this time either, as u will say I exaggerate again 😛 but I hope my comment says it all 😳 thanks.. mohini is one of the best characters I ever made.. i mean by my own.. makes me proud and happy 😳 thanks so much 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Abhay Pia scene was described really well. Nice play of emotions there.

So mohini stole Pia's hair. I am really scared for pia now.

Originally posted by: alicia212

wow great story plz update soon
i can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm
merry christmas and a happy new year

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

thanks so much. you always do the best anaysis of what i write.. thanks so much for it. they miss each other so much but no magic could render their true feelings.

Originally posted by: kuttu

Wow an update after such a long time. It was great as usual. Now it seems to be the battle of wills here. Mohini and Pias meeting was great So now is she going to use Pia's fear against her.

Now I am eagerly waiting for the meeting of the two titans as you say Khol and Mohini I hope she get it good from him.

Originally posted by: withered

Oh well so mohini do have some modesty in her , i thought she is gonna burn bhupen alive 😆 but i kinda like this girl 😉 Pia-Mohini meet was described perfectly , but what does she meant by she knows pias biggest fears and dreams and what is she gonna do with those 2 silk threads 🤓 . well she is awestruck finding kol in front of her what is happening here ?😆 was kol being here so unexpected to her ? Kol reminds me of sidhaartha 😆 .
Then Pia and Abhay , they both are tired of all this , shattered but still they have to keep their own frustrations, pain , inner turmoils aside to become the strength of each other , The point where pia really pleads abhay to take her with him somewhere away from all this chaos was highly emotional

PS- advice- post both the endings of beautifull disaster , i am sure none of the readers of urs going to decline this treat 😉😆 Just update soon 😳 but take ur time 😛

Thnxxx for this filler , i am more waiting to know about kol-mohini convo 😆