Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 79

wow great story plz update soon
i can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm
merry christmas and a happy new year

totally love the update and i cant Arnav is a hunter and is planning to make Armaan aswell wen his both children r in love with vampire...i hope nothing tragic will happen due to pia-mohini meeting...thanks a ton 4 pming me

Abhiya's luv is truly legendery! I want to kill to person 1st arnab dobriyal and 2nd is mohini. I hope mohini pia ke balo ka use uske khilaf na kre. Waiting fr kol and mohini's proper face-off. Whts wrong wid jeh? He is cming as mohini's vitnes? Amazing update! Thax fr pm!

Wow an update after such a long time. It was great as usual. Now it seems to be the battle of wills here. Mohini and Pias meeting was great So now is she going to use Pia's fear against her.

Okay superb writing as usual. As always I like your description of everything supernatural.

OMG! tanzie it was awesome. loved loved loved it.
n yes i could feel it was not just a filler chapter, it was very important chapter for future story, specially the mohini-pia meeting part. you wrote it in such a way that like pia even i was startled when mohini made her sudden appearance in front of pia...whoa! i got goosebumps reading it...she definitely has some evil plans for pia.

and the most beautiful part was abhiya scene in the hospital. i can't believe...i was crying as well as smiling at the same time while reading it. they were in so much pain...i could feel their pain n my tears were not stopping but i also couldn't help but had small smile at their attempt of being brave n showing courage at this hard time.

Oh well so mohini do have some modesty in her , i thought she is gonna burn bhupen alive 😆 but i kinda like this girl 😉 Pia-Mohini meet was described perfectly , but what does she meant by she knows pias biggest fears and dreams and what is she gonna do with those 2 silk threads 🤓 . well she is awestruck finding kol in front of her what is happening here ?😆 was kol being here so unexpected to her ? Kol reminds me of sidhaartha 😆 .
Then Pia and Abhay , they both are tired of all this , shattered but still they have to keep their own frustrations, pain , inner turmoils aside to become the strength of each other , The point where pia really pleads abhay to take her with him somewhere away from all this chaos was highly emotional

PS- advice- post both the endings of beautifull disaster , i am sure none of the readers of urs going to decline this treat 😉😆 Just update soon 😳 but take ur time 😛

Thnxxx for this filler , i am more waiting to know about kol-mohini convo 😆

wonderful update