First n foremost I am so so sorry for the late comment U know how busy I had been n I had read the update long back but I couldn comment as I hadn got time 😭 Now reading again to comment but I dont mind as its a delight 😉
Tanzie we all know how busy u r. Its perfectly all right. Take ur time. End it the way u want to n I can speak for myself here - like I said before I will be ur reader till the end of time I would happily look forward to even book 5 😉
I love the way u depict the moods of ur characters esp in the beginning - we see a jubiliant Pia looking forward to see Abhay. So far things had been going great but what does she see when she comes? Ragini crying. She is enraged n its natural. She has put in so much efforts to get Abhay out n one wrong move will sabotage everything she has done n she is well aware of Abhay's self guilty mode 😛 Pamona is already hell terrified of Pia 😆 So not surprised at her reaction 🤣 She scurried off before Pia could catch her red handed as she already knows something is seriously fishy with Ragini 😆 I loved Pia's possessiveness. She is a wildcat when it comes to Abhay. Bechara 🤣 Wats his fault if he turns out to be an electromagnetic force that women cant resist? 🤣 To make matters worse, the one woman he loves is ready to gorge out anyone's eyes who lays her eyes on him 😛 But along with her jealousy u could also see the concern of a wife who will goto any lengths to protect her husband. Abhay too knew something was wrong with Ragini. But Pamona fooled him blaming Mohini to have done some hocus pocus on her 😕 Abhay did fall for her lie, to some extent I suppose. Guilt is the biggest weakness when it comes to Abhay n she struck there on Mohini's instructions n she had succeeded too but Pia would not let anyone win over her so quickly right? 😉 And though Abhiya love is eternal n epic somewhere Pia will always feel insecured abt Ragini's feelings for Abhay as they had been together for a long time n most importantly Abhay's guilt for being responsible for her death 😲 Not good So Ragini tried to transform herself into a vampire n the spell backfired on her? No wonder y Mohini hates Abhay so much. It was tough for her to accept that her sister, an original witch like her fell for a vampire n when she could come to terms with that, her sister lost her life while trying to transform herself into a vampire. That must have been bitter for Mohini. Its like Ragini choosing Abhay over everything - the pride of her clan, legacy n above all, Mohini herself. Add to that Abhay foiled her plans to become the ultimate power. Poor Abhay 😆 He must be singing 'Kya karoon o ladies' 🤣 I know his love for Pia knows no bounds n Ragini must have been something like a passing affair but when he told Pia that Ragini means nothing to him I felt he was trying to ascertain himself more than Pia bcoz no matter wat anyone says, Abhay being Abhay will always harbor guilt n even that can keep u bound to a person 😡
Pamona nearly had it but she hurried off before getting into trouble. Most of the supernatural species esp those who are more closely related to magic like say metamorphist or witch will always have an air of superiority n wat happens with other species like vampires or werewolves is of lil concern for them. Its natural since them being the manipulators makes them the ultimate game players n to some extent they r more powerful than them as they rely more on brute strength when they with their powers can cause more devastation 😕 She isn bothered abt wat will happen with Abhay. Tats of lil concern to her but the fact that she is being used a pawn n her actions will bear implications on somebody's life will affect her And she knows she is playing with fire when it comes to Mohini, being in good or bad books doesn matter. Mohini is plain bad news 🤢 About this warlock who lost his powers, didn't we have one already in previous updates? Or were they just a human couple who were bribed to testify?
I also loved Aryan Amber moment with the kids. Its like a ray of hope in times of darkness 😳 U know its these lil things tat catch my attention as a reader. That is wat I look forward to when I read a story but mostly I come across stories where the main couple take away all the focus n the other characters have nothing much to contribute. Thats the reason y I absolutely LOVE ur works ❤️ As far as characterisation is concerned ur my fav writer n I mean it Now please dont say I exaggerate 😵 If I dont mean something I never ever say it!
Amber's motherhood which was so cruelly snatched away from her is now sort of restored in her life . Nobody deserves what she got And the worst part, the father of her child murdered it brutally 😡 I hate tat Gaurav even to this day n I am glad it was Amber who got to kill him. I loved the way Amber was teasing the kids n Aryan coming to defend them. Y wont he? He is the father after all 😉 n Amber too has the right since she is their aunt 😃 Aryan Aahana moment was so poignant 😳 n sad too 😭 The kids r a part of him n Peehu but Peehu will never get to see them grow n become fine witch n warlock n feel proud of her children. Watever she might have been, she made the ultimate sacrifice when she chose the children above her own life. Though she was proud enough to never give up her legacy she did not choose tat for her kids n tat for me was one of the biggest thing she ever did. Even in death she refused to part with her pride but rather than pass tat onto her children as heritage, she wanted them to have nothing to do with it. She could have left them with Mohini who would have given her kids the status of being an original. But she left them with Aryan who would give them a better life - teach them to love n respect other beings n never let false ego claim their existance n that for me is her most selfless act. Though I despised Peehu in the beginning, this one act of hers made me respect her.
Pia's life has taken a U turn ever since Abhay walked into her life. Everything was turned topsy turvy n love is indeed become a dangerous luxury. How ironic it is! We think love is something that anybody can have n we take it for granted but tats not true all the time. I suppose her life as an orphan was less hassle free. Though she her maama n maami were spineless sadists who sought pleasure in torturing her. Discovering the fact that the man she loves is a vampire had shaken her world as it is. But after getting married to him, she nearly lost him the day after her marriage n if tat wasn enough she got herself nearly killed Then when things started falling back in place they fell apart once again when the SC court snatched Abhay from her yet again. Before though she was living with supernaturals, those were the ppl she knew n they were family. She could accept them but now she is thrown into a world where she is all alone out there fighting in a court full of supernaturals. Being the odd person out is never too easy n here she has risked everything for Abhay. Everything is at stake but at the end of the day everything is worth it when she sees the love for herself in Abhay's eyes 😳
Amber shd surely cut Aryan some slack 😉 He may not be an original but an original witch wouldn have fallen for him if he wasn any good 😆 The part where he did the spell was spell binding 👏 Gosh how do u do that? 😲 The setting, the detailing is brilliant ⭐️ Hats off to u for that 👏 And the best part? How neatly u tied it all up to pull off a spectacular scene 👏 I wish I could praise u for this but I am falling short of words n anything I come up will be lame The logic n thought process tat went into this scene deserves a standing ovation 👏 The whole Shadow of Souls part was a brilliant piece of writing 👏 Aryan may not be an original but he can give an original a run for their money any time 🤣 Aryan finally found out Ragini hasn been revived yet 🥳 Haan I knew Aryan would do it 😎 Phew narrow escape 😉 But I am sure Mohini being Mohini would have realised that someone close to Abhay was plotting something against her n I have a feeling she will come with a counter strike. Whether it rebounds back on her is yet to be seen 😆
Tanzie after a long long time read something that captivated my interest in reading again 😃 U find my supernatural concepts good but u will be the master story teller of this forum ⭐️ I am tired of using cliched words 🥱
But this is for u :
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