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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Tanzie as far as readers r concerned the no. has dropped drastically in every other FF here n believe me it has nothing to do with the update As u urself said before I am sure u will never ever stop writing n u will never quit updating ur FFs in IF till the time even a single reader waits eagerly for ur update 😳 n I will always be ur reader TILL THE END OF TIME 🤗 About the current track its thoroughly enjoyable n I love exploring more on the supernatural theme u have in mind for this FF. Trust me dear its brilliant n please don't change it assuming readers r getting bored coz its anything but boring Thanks a lot Manasa but i will end court part soon to move the story forward.

Coming to the update I loved the way u started this dramatic update on a light hearted note which was so endearing 😳 Amber who's greatest pain in life had been losing her child has finally seen the light in the form of Aryan's children. Among the two, I can see Amber is more attached to Ahana who is a miniature Amby when it comes to fashion tantrums 😆 Jaisi bua waisi bhateeji 🤣 I pity Aryan n now I am certain Aryan will never pass a taunt on dressing styles coz he will face the wrath of not one but two women of the house 🤣 Three cheers to girl power 😎 The kids have become her world now n I really hope Amber n Armaan realise their feelings n confess it too 😳 They both need each other Amber is also feeling guilty tat Abhay is facing all of this bcoz of her 😭 But Abhay being the head of the family should also protect his family n thats exactly what he is doing now Vampires have heightened emotions be it passion, grief or guilt n guilt is something which can tear u inside out
Coming to Aryan Alina I know Aryan will never be able to love Alina like he loved Peehu but y do I feel he does feel something for her which could be beyond the fact that Alina is taking care of his children or something platonic? Even when Aryan was Peehu's estranged husband I wanted Aryan to be with Alina 😕 I know its twisted but though Peehu was Aryan's undying love I always saw Alina as his soulmate 😳 I know Amber n Pia will love them like their own children for neither of them will ever have children but the kids do need someone whom they can call a mother n not just get the love from family alone Peehu and aryan will always be soulmates more because their lovestory is twisted n incomplete. someday aryan will be with alina and happy even but his epic love will always be peehu n his true soulmate, his eternal love. nobody can take that place.
I always love the Mohini part in ur updates 👏 The family tree reminded me of Black Family Tree. I knew Mohini would never learn the truth from a direct source n I was so right I was impressed 😎 I loved the way she vented out her anger n grief. Gave me chills n I am sure she will never forgive Aryan for this n I wont be surprised if she holds him responsible for Peehu's death as well n holds a grudge on him as well along with Abhay As it is we all know how much she despises him but now things might get serious with Aryan as well But seems like Abhay is her top priority now. I know she despises him so much not bcoz of her sister's death alone but more bcoz of Abhay stopping her from achieving the ultimate power Good choice of song. Perfect for Mohini ⭐️
Pamona fears Mohini n rightly so coz facing Mohini's wrath is a gazillion times worse than embracing death So now she has finally realised that Pia is no insignificant human. She is fighting for her client who happens to be her husband, her sole reason for hanging onto life n such people can goto any lengths to save their beloved 😳 But win or lose, she has to try before she accepts defeat else Mohini wont spare her Abt the compulsion detector I am surprised SC doesn have it 😲 I mean when they have witches n warlocks on board its obvious there will be compulsion as well. Mohini only favors ppl so that she can use them later n that slave wizard is proof for that 🤢 Mohini is the most twisted n powerful and complicated character i ever written 😆
Pia is missing Abhay n I hope he gets back to where he belongs - with her 😳 Being alone wasn new for Pia but ever since Abhay came into her life, life took a U turn for good in her life but now she is back to square one but hopefully not for long Even if she had lost her memories her heart always belonged to Abhay 😳 But though Abhay's absence has left a dent in her life it has given her a purpose.
Kol is defo so smart 😎 But I wish he could super charge that genius of a brain of his to dig the truth out. He knows how much Mohini loved Ragini. So how has she let her come to Belgium all by herself? 😕 Since she has recently been resurrected Ragini must be weak n Mohini leaving her alone in this state is impossible. Though whatever he has known abt Ragini is contradictory to wat he is seeing now it could be possible that she has changed due to being brought back to life. Something is surely amiss n I hope its not long before he fits the missing pieces of the puzzle. U know wat? I am eagerly awaiting Mohini Kol face off 😃 Revenge is a dish best served cold n Kol knows no matter what happens Mohini will find a means to get it thats yet to come.. u have to wait for it
Even in the darkest of hours Abhiya will find a ray of hope in each other n thats the beauty of their relationship 😳 They are each other's salvation in the true sense. Even though Abhay himself is worried he is more concerned for Pia n Pia, is seeking strength to face watever is ahead though she knows how much dangerous it is for her to get involved in Abhay's predatory world but she will do all it takes to free him 😃
The courtroom sequence was hilarious 🤣 It was obvious Mohini would change her game plan but this backfired as well 😆 I loved the way u have paid attention to every minute detail here be it the simple fact of memory being erased once the human was done with the testifying 👏 Superb 👏 It was obvious the human couple would be dazzled on seeing the court n its grandeur 😆 I loved Victoria's jibe on the court being a millenia older than Louvre 🤣 Was Mohini so dumb tat she thought sending an old couple whose memories are bound to fail them help her get Abhay nailed? 😆 But well given the SPC tat would have been possible if Abhay didn have Pia for a lawyer 😎 I so loved Pia's questioning a lot 👏 Fantastic! I felt like I was in a court n trust me this was better than most of the courtroom stuff I have read in many books before 👏 No wonder ur in a league of ur own It was so funny to see the man almost drop down when Abhay revealed his fangs 😆 The fact that even a member of the jury who had fallen asleep during the trial woke up when Pia's name was taken is proof enough to show that Pia has taken the supernatural world by storm 👏 I loved Pia's defence 👏 thanku.. this ff needed some light moments
I loved Abhiya moment ☺️ It was so passionate n so filled with hope n victory 😃 If some were astounded, some were amazed seeing the bond between a vampire and a human, including Kol 😉
I am waiting to know what will Aryan's n Mohini's next move will be n gosh Pamona aka Ragini has come to meet Abhay n she is crying 😲 Defo not good news I am sure she was there to awaken his guilt n I hope Abhay doesn do anything reckless else Pia's efforts will go in vain I so wish u update this soon coz I am eager to know what happened b/w Abhay n Ragini. Also I want to see Pia Mohini face off 😃 It will surely be a show stealer of course - two determined woman - One hell bent on destroying a man who snatched away her chance of becoming the supreme power n the other hell bent on saving the man who means the world to her or probably more ⭐️
Do I even have words to describe ur writing? 😕 Nope I ran out of adjectives long time back but I would say:
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thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

awesome update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

m lo❤️ing this court drama alot
lo❤️ed the reactions of the jury members
some parts of the court drama really cracked me 🤣
ten piya doing ragini's bbb 👏 👏 👏 lo❤️ed it !
bt were did jai vanished again ? 😕 seems like he is a great fan of Mr.India n always trys 2 copy him
waiting egarly 4r piya-mohini face off 😛
bt wat did this panoma or watever her name is do 😡 tat abhay is sad ?
hope piya takes a ' balen ' n gives her a nice beating n ten kicks her out 😈
tanks 4r the pm 😊
sorry ! 4r commenting late 😔 ws abit buzy
n plz update nxt part as soon as possible 😃 can't wait 4r it ...


Thanks dear.. dont wry Jeh will appear soon. no problem.. glad u commented 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update


i am so awed by pia's character here...loved the way she countered the false alibi and made pamona who is a supernatural nervous and confused. she is such a strong character.

pia had impressed everyone...all the judges looks forward to listen her...thats a victory for her even though it's small. abhiya scene was awsum..it speaks of their unconditional love on one another ...simply fabulous.👏

why was abhay surprised to see pia?? wonder what would ragini tell pia...seems bad. really wanna know the twist...u stopped at a very interesting point.😔

i am really intrigued by mohini's character...sometimes she reminds me of katherine of tvd... completely unpredictable.really wanna see what would be her next trick when she lands in belgium. i was looking to her meeting with pia from a very long time and really curious to see how would it go down.

fake ragini had already raised suspicions of everyone but no one is trying to pursue it further. i think kol would be the one to find pamona's true identity. the rules of this SPN court really sucks!!!i hope either they change it after this trial or banish these courts forever.these are nothing but caricature.

amber and aahana scene was cute .
superbly written.👏👏👏
thanks for pm .


Thanks Megha. yeap i always wanted to make Pia strong character here like i prefer her to be. fake ragini surely will make some trouble but it wont last dont worry.
mohini is the most complicated character i wrote till date. her meeting with pia will happen soon but dont expect it because it will turn everything upside down. 😉
SPN court is my sarcastic example of political situation of present time.. pathetic 😆
thank you so much dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -BlackBeauty-

Hello! 6 months and 4 updates later, I am finally here. Told you I am never gonna quit on your FFs either. I've been reading it from mid of book 2 again since the past few days and it's good to see I have another update now. Neethz I miss you.. i know you are inactive and not that im regular anymore but miss you anyways 🤗


Anyway, I always wanted Kol to be this good guy in TVD because Nathaneil was, well, hot. But that never happened. However, I get to see that here and that makes me superhappy! me me 😆 nathaniel is defo hot n i wanted him to be good too.. i loved his sarcasm n it would pleasure to see him a good hearted guy so made him grey here..

Okay so we have Ragini's look-alike in the picture which means Ragini is still dead and never coming back? Uff, this Mohini. I think she is THE villain in your FF. Others will come and go but not she is SHE. I don't know, every time I feel i have Mohini figured out, about what exactly she wants, you prove me wrong. Haha. well i will take this a compliment and remember i told you.. dont predict.. i will always prove you wrong.. mostly not always 😆 n yes Mohini is till date the best villain i have written about and also one of the most complicated character..

And I am fangirling over Pia. Not only did I love how she managed to become Abhay's lawyer despite his oppositions but she's made a jolly good one. Chalo, uski LLB kaam aa gayi. So now Kol sees what made Abhay so attracted towards Pia. I mean she is one feisty woman! I know you won't let victory come too easily to AbhIya but the latest update made me happy. It was sad seeing them so lovelorn without each other. When their other half is separated from them, they're bound to feel hollow. But i could picture the glow on their faces when Pia took the witnesses down. Yes, they're glowing with hope again. LLB to kaam ani thi thi.. thats y i said in Book 1 theres a reason im making her lawyer.. it was planned all along. i would love to see a strong female character as piya.. wish.. n yes hope is what will bring success to them.

Argh, my Aryan. I still feel so sad about what you did to him But he knows he has to be strong for his children and more than anything, for his brother who needs his strength right now. Oh, and you need to give us more Armaan-Amber too. will do soon as the court cases are sorted out.

I am done playing guess-games in your FFs. I'll just wait till your next update to see what happens with Ragini. But more than that, I am looking forward to Mohini-Pia confrontation. The former also seems intrigued by what Pia is made of. yes Mohini Pia face off is second biggest twist of this FF after Mohinis entry so you will have to wait a little longer for that.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Again, like Mandy said, I am defo sticking by this- it's one of by fav FFs by one of my fav authors, so there's no question of me leaving it. Also hats off to your dedication.

Coming to the update.
I love the song u chose for Mohini and I wonder what more she will do now?
As for 'Ragini' she is losing- that too to a human, so I think the guilt trip is probably the best bet where she is concerned but God I hope it doesn't ever work.
Haila AbhIya kissing in front of everyone- bet their eyes almost popped out, I can so totally imagine it.!
As for the precap, I guess Abhay will start feeling guilty- I could be wrong. And yes I am very excited for Mohini's meeting with Pia.


Thanks a lot. Mohini has a lot more to do till now. its beginning. Mohini pia meeting is yet to come..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: atul.488

hey its a great update and i really enjoy a lot on reading your works.it is one of best ff, i read on forum

please go ahead with your own speed and don't be in a hurry to finish it.
take your time and update it as soon as possible and do send pm whenever you update.

I AM EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...😊


Thanks a lot. I m so sorry i get so less time for writing now n its not even i have just 1 ff so i delay the updates. thanks for sticking up to this. means a lot to me 😳

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

fabulous update tanzie...tanzie please yar it was not boring at all...please don't finish the trials in 1/2 updates...I am enjoying reading it...
oh I loved how pia took down Roys😛 Poor mohini ek aur plan flop...lets see aage kya hai...
oh and yar i ransacked my brain ki abhay aur ragini aka pamola ke bich kya hua hoga...bt kuch samajh nai aya...ok last try...was ragini...i mean pamola throwing herself at abhay????😲 I mean mohini ne kaha hoga ki aisa karna...like.."abhay how could u do this to me?u married a human...and back then it was ur fault due to which I died...blah blah blah..."
oh yes I forget one more thing...kol was totally right about whatever he said...*sigh* bt un becharon ko sach kahan pata hai...wo to hum readers ko pta hai na😆 Please update soon...😳


Thanks a lot Juhi.. glad you liked it 😳 No pamona wont be throwing herself at Abhay or try to seduce her. Mohini knows such tricks wont work on Abhay so she will do something else. she is different villain remember n soo clever 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sunu123

hey tanzie😃
i know...i m really bad for leaving in between...but i m back...
btw...
awesome update👏...
after reading last update now i loved pia more... u r marvelous...
plz parda phado of ragini jald se jald...
cant wait for mohini n pia face to face...cat fight...
plz tanzie pm me nxt time...
lov u tanzie🤗
sunita


oh my.. look whos here 😲 i thot you abandoned my FF forever.. i didnt honestly expect to see you here so it made me really happy.. missed you 🤗
where have you been? busy with studies? take care and hope to see u soon again 😳

Originally posted by: kuttu

Oh oh Mohini sure is not going to be happy with the turn of events. Waiting to see what you have in store for the epic Pia Mohini meeting.

This was one power packed performance by Pia. Her love for Abhay so evident and the driving force to win this. So will Jai come to help Pia and abhay. that would be the biggest blow for Mohini and her her husband somehow that guy seems to be more mysterious than Mohini herself. Why does she fear him. He kind of gives a strange vibe.
Loved the part were Aryan and Alina are now in some kind of understanding. Things seem to look better for them. Now please do not turn the table for them. The kids have a way around htem. Hope they can bring some sense into their so called aunt Mohini.


Mohini will get reasons to happy soon but thn she will face Kol and her world will come upside down. so thats a very bad news for everyone.. very very bad. Love can be our biggest weakness and strength both and i jus wanted to show that - both sides i mean. Nope no more turning of tables of them specially Aryan. my baby deserves all the happiness in the world and i will make sure he gets it. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: EVIIL

I m dieing 🤢 4 d next chp plz update soon n plz add me in ur pm list plz😳




Im so sorry all.. i was out of the country na so my work even increased than before.. im trying to get some time so that I can writer as soon as possible and i already updated BD so its this ones turn now.. this weekend I promise.. pakka 😃
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