Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Phew!
I almost thought Mohini had him then! Thank God Alina saved him and yayy Aryan found out part of the truth, now waiting to see how Piya uses this tidbit of info :D

As usual your supernatural descriptions are FAB and I really liked the shadow bit. It was my fav :D apart from Pia being mad at Abhay of course 😆

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

wow brilliant update tanzie!👏

so pamola apna dukhra rone ayi thi...I was thinking ki wo aisa kuch karegi hi...but obviously abhay didn't believe her...his love for pia is more and far greater than he had for ragini...

Shit yaar! phir bach gayi pamola...damn! pia usi time pe ayi...koi nai there is always a next time and see aryan found out that ragini is still taking her beauty sleep in the coffin...now lets see whats next...

waiting for day3 trail...😳

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

awesome

update

its gonna be fun

mohini's secret will be out now

grt update

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pink_rose

@pink_rose

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Welcome back. Action packed update. Hopefully Mohini's manipulations will come to an end.

Loved Aryan's bonding with his children.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

amazing update.

pia is damn possessive and i lv her for this. m glad that abhay pia had a clear talk and he washed away all of her fears & insecurity. with so much happening around i can understand pia's pining for her normal life. mohini's plan failed big time b'coz abhay will always luv pia only and viceversa. they thought of taking advantage of his kindness but m glad he smelled something is fishy about the entire act of pamona as she enacted her part of crying and sobbing .

the amber and kids scene was sweet and so was aryan and amber convo too.

the spell that aryan has done has been explained very well and it's really interesting to read. he has found the biggest truth and i am really looking forward as to what will be the consequences for pamona after it will be revealed in SPN court. i hope she will be punished.

mohini will be in the court i suppose in the next update...m so eager to read about her. she is a very interesting character.

gripping update.

i would luv to read it till book-4 😊

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 12 years ago

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

amzng update
abhiya part was nice
shadow spell part was so gud , so now aryan knows abt ragini , hope it will.help in trial

take ur time ,will wait for ur update

Edited by hema_rawat - 12 years ago