Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Please dear rethink your decision ,you are only hope for abhiya ,please continue to keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tanzie I respect your decision and I always love to read your ff and ss . Just don't let them get to u . You are a fab writer n I love all your work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz do not quit
i really love your story
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

😳Tanzie, firstly Ramadan Mubarak to u 🤗

Secondly stop stressing over updates dear. I understand how tough it is 😊 to manage everything - fasting, prayers, office, its not remotely close to being easy n its OK if u cannot update this entire month also.
Coming to the update, YAY I am first again n this is my first for this FF 😃 Thanks for understanding Manasa, yea it did take a long break and after a month i will update i guess 😆
So Mohini's hubby is an original vampire and he is Abhay's friend too 😉 Mohini tu toh gayi ab 😆 BTW I dont know much abt Kol as I haven't watched TVD season 3 from epi 9 onwards 😭 but I know he's Klaus' half brother. Mohini's spell is broken n now she needs Abhay again to do it 🤣 Uski toh BBB ho gayi 😆 uski BBB will be completed by Kol and she is no less so dont underestimate her 😆
Abhay finally came out of that spell n it was really touching - the letter he wrote for her. Loved the last line esp 😳
Glad to know that Peehu is back with Raichands n is under their protection. Damn that Mohini if she ever comes there 😡 Amber can't stand Peehu but she is willing to do whatever it takes to ensure hers n her children's safety for Aryan's sake 😊 I so love this woman 😃 I am glad to see Aryan strong emotionally now but I feel bad for Alina 😭 I'll always be team Aryan Alina unless u make Alina negative here which I hope u dont Amber n Arman are back to being on friendly terms again n I soon hope they find their happiness with each other 😳 Yeap trying to get things heated up between Amber and Arman and Alina will never be negative her.. dont worry.
I felt miserable in seeing Pia in that state 😭 It was so heart wrenching to see Abhay leave her again maybe it might be for her own good but still when Pia fought against destiny itself n brought him back only testifies the fact that they are meant to be forever 😳 Yes, not time for some happy moments of abhiya before abhay is presented in the court in front of jury.
Ok so Mohini doesn hate Abhay just bcoz of Ragini? 😈 Abhay revealed her true colors to Kol n thats the reason she spites him. Hmmm wonder what Abhay told Kol 😲 I hope Abhay gets to know y Aryan did that n I hope he can forgive him too Abhay's guilt n self torment was agonizing to read 😭 Well now that he's out of that spell hope Abhiya catch up on the lost time now, thanks to that b****h 😡 Bella is surely super dumb here 😆 Well the Bella in Twilight was super dumb as well 😛 Nope, Mohini has other issues with Abhay too and there too it was Mohinis fault.. and yes Bella is dumb 😛
So now Mohini wants to revive Mohini before Kol arrives? Hmmm 😕 Well I hope her plans backfire but I have an inkling she can succeed on this one for sure.
The last moment was brilliant 👏 Do I really have to say how much I loved it? 😳 Abhay's guilt, pain, longing, love was expressed so beautifully n then Pia's selfless undying love for him that crossed all boundaries of sanity and rationality was out of this world 😊 Tanzie hats off to u yaar 👏 U are an ace when it comes to romance ⭐️ I am surprised my lappy is in one piece still 😆 coz the passion was burning hawt ☺️ But as always u pull it off aesthetically n I am amazed each time 👏 oh thn hold your breathe next update is going to be much more passionate as I promised... it will be full of abhiya.. they need their happiness and they need each other.. 😳
Superb update 👏 thank you so much 😳


Originally posted by: ..dishu..

aww tanzie beautoful update dear


the way you described Abhay's turmoil and guilt was really nice and heart-touching. the guilt of hurting someone who loves you and who you love more than your life is a very painful feeling and you described the pain really well.

Bella's lost mindedness cracked me up 😆

loved the line where abhay says i cant stay from you anymore. 😍 and their love was passionate and dreamy 😍

a very nice update indeed👏


Thanks Dishu. Abhay is self sacrificing we all know that but Pia is always in for putting a end to his miseries and bring him out with love...
i dont want to write anymore stay aways from Abhay... even Im fade up 😛 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

1st of all Ramadan Mubarak to u Tanzie

superb update.loved it❤️

poor Mohini loll, her spell is broken😆😆. Liked her outburst here

Finally Abhay is OK 👏. He remembers everything. Liked the letter part where one part Pia is happy that Abhay can remember everything😃 and other part she is sad that he left her again Thanks Rumki... Abhay wont run away from Pia anymore... now Pia has tied him forever with her love.. 😆

Glad that Peehu is with Raichands and she cant move. Now she'll be safe here Yeap Peehu will be safe there...

Poor Pia, heart ache seeing her in this state. It is true that we can fight with the whole world but it hurts us most when we get hurt 4m loved ones

Hmm so Mohini don't hate Abhay only 4 Ragini's death, she hate Abhay because Abhay exposed her!!Abhay is sharp enough, even in this state he phoned Kol. Loll Bella 🤣🤣 she is dumb here as well🤣 sorry to bella fans.. it was just for fun 😆

Ow Mohini is trying to wake up Ragini 😲. Hope she wont succeed

Hmmm about the last part I hope I don't need to say how beautiful it was😳. It was superb, awesome, mind blowing👏.

Now cant wait 4 next chapter. Do update when you get time thanks a lot for liking... i know i havent updated in a long time...writing.. will be updating soon...😊


Originally posted by: -Sonia-

hey tanzie, RAMZAN MUBARAK to u!

Awesome update
loved it

finally, abhay is back.. I hope , his misunderstandings regarding aryan are cleared soon..

Amby taking care of peehu is really sweet..although she doesnt like her.. I hope, aryan & peehu find their happiness..

OMG! U introduced KOL ! I just love him in the TVD !
Felt bad for alina.. I hope , she finds sum1 too.. How abt kol & alina.. Just a thought ... Wud luv to see a she wolf & vampire pairing!! Lol

mohini is loosing her mind.. Lol ! Waiting for her face-off wid kol

the last part was intense & passionate..
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Will be waiting for the update
thanx for the pm
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Thank you so much. I love Kol too.. my fav original is Elijah but I love Kol and Klaus as well. Alina and Aryans story is not over here. so wait... now time for more Abhiya happy moments.. poor newly weds deserve to find some happiness.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

Ramadan Mubarak Tanzie!😊

I have never watched TVD but i m liking his char😳
hope Abhay and aryan ki misunderstanding jaldi khatam ho jaye...
poor mohini😆i can imagine wat she must be going through😉😆
ihope ki ragini ki wapas aane se pahle she faces kol...
last part wasss very very gud😉
tanzie take ur time dear and update whenever u r free...


Kol is one of the original vampires. Aryan will arrive in Manali too soon. Mohini has yet a lot to face after her dear hubby drops to India and she is no less. I took a lot of time see... one month ended... so will update soon...

Originally posted by: flora212

JUST FANTASTIC ...👏 I LOVED EACH AND EVERYTHING!!! LOVED ABHIYA MOMENTS...😳SO MOHINI HUSBAND IS FRIEND OF ABHAY HA??? 😕BUT I STILL WANT ARYAN AND ALINA...DONT KNOW WHY??? ANYWAYS NOW I AM WONDERING WHAT WILL BE MOHINI NEXT MOTIVE..😈AND NO WORRYS U TAKE TIME..I UNDERSTAND ITS REALLY HARD TO DO EVERYTHING TOGATHER WHEN U FAST!!😊 AND RAMDAN MUBARAK...😉UPDATE WHEN U CAN...😃


Thanks Naf. Then you should be happy because loads of Abhiya moments coming in next update.. Yes, Abhay and Kol were friends and I even mentioned their meeting in flashback... go back and read previous chapters 😆 Ramadan is over and even Eid is.. due to that shit sending me PMs drama and ramadan couldn't update.. will update soon.
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Originally posted by: luckdiya

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wonderful updt...
mohini is eager 2 tk d revenge ...
abhiya r bck 😆😆😆 luv dere passionate ngt
continue soon
ramdan mubarak🤗


Mohini will take her revenge at the right time when she will loose everything... yes, abhiya are back and there will be plenty of Abhiya in next update as well... 😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story pl\z update soon
it's an ama\zing story to read
thanks for the pm


Thanks dear... 😳

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

awesome writing tanzie..👏haha...mohini's plan backfired and she is furious,but i have an uneasy feeling that she will bounce back...and now Kol Michelson??interesting,what's all this about abhay and the hearing?how can he murder someone??and this kol here is mohini's husband??wow...things sure r getting interesting.😉..and as usual one hurdle crossed by abhiya gives way for another troublepoor them..but i loved loved the abhiya romance,so tender,passionate and filled with love😳...how can anyone have the heard to separate them?😕


Thank you so much Tora 😳 offcourse Mohini will bounce back... she is not weak. there's a lot of things to unfold about Abhay, kol and Mohini... There will be lot more Abhiya romance next update.. let the newly weds have their time... 😳
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Oh gosh Tanzie. That was wonderfully written. Uff tanzie ka romance uff! It's a pleasure reading your romance i mean the romance you write 😛

And Mohini's anger is surely a sight to behold I must say! Kol Abhay's friend and Mohini's husband...I am already liking him!

And please take care of yourself right now. Updates can wait.


PS. Good one on the Bella part baby😉🤣😈


Thank you. glad you liked to read my romance parts because i know about your disliking for romance 😆
I will be updating after more thn 1 month and offcourse you will like the Bella part 😛

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Tanzie beautiful update

So happy abhay came back to piya
Kol is mohini's husband n abhay's friend
Abhiya romance was super hawt ☺️
Thanks for the pm


Thanks Shivani. More abhiya moments will be in next update as well. 😳

Originally posted by: --Rashu--

Dil garden garden ho gaya bhawra bagiyan me kho gaya...last part was *faints*finally abhay remembers everything...btw this kol is -tive or +tive...happy ramadan...as usual lovely update...


Thanks Rashu... next update will be more faint element for u 😉 and Kol is grey...


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Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

Ramadan Mubarak Hoo APP ko bhai ...Just another very interesting story ...pain piya feels very nice ...hot abhiya scene ...thanks for pm


Thank you. glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Ramjan mubarak Tanzie apu.I ttly get what u mean,roja rekhe office,normal kaj,writing-impossible task.Anyways,awsome update.Tumi Kol ke tomar FF e niye ascho-chorom.TVD te amar ekta priyo character,luv u 4 adding him here.Pia er upor diye jhor chole gese,she deserves 2 be happy now.Last part ta chorom likh so...abhiya were hot and passionate.


Thanks Monami. my fav original is Elijah. then Klaus and then Kol.. 😆 there will be many more abhiya moments before they reach the supernatural court.

Originally posted by: koli97

Happy Ramdan😊...superb update...Abhiya love😳😳...wish Abhiya always together😊


Thanks a lot. 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu

amazing updateit is okk swty if you dont update this monththe spell is brokenthe abhiya are back togthermohini husband is orginal vampirepeehu also under protection of aryanthnxx 4 pm


Thanks Neetu. I haven't updated for a month anyway. Yes, Abhiya will be together from now on.. there are more things to disclose about Abhay, Kol and Mohini will be come out with time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
tanjie r u updating bohot jaldi???? 😆

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

3 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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